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2521568 No.2521568 [Reply] [Original]

Hey /lit/, Aspiring writer here, I haven't posted anything here in a while but have a gander at this and tell me what you think.

Now this piece is a part of a story that I am writing and you don't really need to know all that much. All you need to know is that the guy is...well, batshit crazy is appropriate.

http://pastebin.com/V0HcS8jX

I apologize for the grammar but believe me it used to be much worse lol.

>> No.2521577

Reminds me of BEE. For better or for worse.

>> No.2521586

>>2521577
I don't know what that is.

>> No.2521591

i've obviously been spending too long here

as soon as he started getting embarrassed i was expecting spaghetti

>> No.2521592

>>2521586

Bret Eaton Ellis.

Your story reads like American Psycho.

>> No.2521615

>>2521592
Ah, I see and I do take a lot of 'inspiration' from American Psycho but I feel I bring my own style into it...I need to reflect on this.