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prove this wrong.

>> No.2479243

It's right.

>> No.2479244

>>2479238
wouldn't it be
"we invited the strippers; jfk and stalin."
if you were actually listing two strippers?

>> No.2479245

>>2479244
it could be

>> No.2479246

>>2479244
Nah.

Some would choose to drop the comma entirely though: We invited the strippers jfk and stalin.

>> No.2479249

>>2479244
>>2479244

a semi-colon separates what could be two separate phrases; "jfk and stalin" is not a phrase in and of itself.

>see what i did there?

>> No.2479251

http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon

>> No.2479252

Reminder: JFK called McCarthy a great American patriot

>> No.2479258

>>2479249
Rather use a semi colon than a colon there, it's just taste.

>> No.2479266

I think the plural on strippers messes things up in the second example.

We invited the stripper, jfk and stalin.

With a singular stripper, there's much less chance of reading jfk and stalin as a phrase referring back somehow to two beings within one stripper entity.

>> No.2479267

PROOF THIS IS INCORRECT

JFK did not have black hair

QED

>> No.2479273
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2479273

This is a rageful post about The Hunger Games.

>LORD OF THE FLIES ALREADY DID THAT SHIT AND IT WAS WRITTEN BETTER. God. Yes, survival fiction is cool, but come on. Have an original thought for once in your life.

>KOREA ALREADY DID YOUR SHIT. It was called Battle Royale, and it was FUCKING BADASS. There weren't any pussy-ass names like "Katniss."

>Goddamnit, you're a successful writer doing what you love and making a shitton of money off it. WHY CAN'T I BE YOU????

Fucking . . . goddamnit. Anyone else feel like this or should I take my ass somewhere else?

>> No.2479279

>>2479273

Okayyyyyyy...........?

>> No.2479281

>>2479273
>>2479273
I . . . agree? uh, did you mean to make a separate post about this?

>> No.2479287

>>2479238

Without punctuation, you're just helping your uncle jack off a horse.