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[Anonymous No.23275641]

"Poo world" edition

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[Anonymous No.23275669]

>>23275641
Someone here previously asked if anyone does outlines, so pic is my outline.
The idea is that the act has a different POV character.
Dunno how many pages I could make out of this.

[Anonymous No.23275689]

>>23275669
I have to make outlines or else I just end up being too disorganized and being unable to come up with an organized story.

[Anonymous No.23275926]

https://pastebin.com/wfFXNgwn

took feedback from you guys about descriptions and pronouns, also wrote an ending to this chapter

However one thing I wanted was to describe the youngest prince's deformed eye socket and his mother's appearance as well. However I couldn't think of a place to put it in where it didn't become a little bit too long.

[Anonymous No.23276016]

does anyone wanna read my fucking substack

[Anonymous No.23276041]

>>23276016
No

[Anonymous No.23276045]

>>23276016
what do you write

[Anonymous No.23276869]

>>23275669
I dump all my literary thoughts into an outline editor, and try to organize them when I can. I use TreeLine, which is free and open-source.