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2316032 No.2316032 [Reply] [Original]

You tie your shoes like you haven't anything else to entertain you or do she said when she lay back on the bed-board naked with her legs open. The type of girl who even with her legs open had more interesting real estate in her face and expressions. The sex was mediocre at best and I'd all but finished myself off, but lying to her was key and she, in her mind, had blown my mind and I didn't think I would ever recover.

>> No.2317313

>dat drunkin donuts special red holiday donut.

>> No.2317520

>>2317313

yes

>> No.2317537

>mediocre sex
>blames the women
Oh you crazy virgins.

>> No.2317541

yr lack of punctuation is pretty obnoxious. It's one idea dawg not two.

>> No.2317547

also next time have better sex so you have something better to write about.

>> No.2317619

i really liked it. DNT H8 THA PLAYER H8 THA GAME

>> No.2317623

>dat horrifying first sentence

>> No.2317628

>>2317537
>Criticize women about anything.

>LOL U GUYS R JUST UGLY VIRGINS GO GET LAID XDXDXDXD


Go be the inferior sex on another board, sugar-tits.

>> No.2317631

Why are so many people writing like this, it's really annoying and bad. Can't tell the trolls from the serious anymore

>> No.2317641

Why does the grammatical person flop around like a suffocating fish?

>> No.2317663

i think it's pretty good
and i shit on most people on this board
fuck the haters op

>> No.2317690

are you trolling /lit/? you should be ashamed

>> No.2317699

>>2316032
Punctuation, read about it.
you write as though you're uncomfortable
>>2317537
0/10

>> No.2317801

OP here punctuation was like that on purpose, I promise. Here's something a bit more generic you may enjoy.

You tie your shoes like you haven't anything else to entertain you, she said that as she lay back on the bed-board. Naked with her legs open she was the type of girl who even with her legs apart had more interesting real estate in her face and expressions. The sex was mediocre at best and I'd all but finished myself off, but lying to her was key and she, in her mind, had blown my mind and I didn't think I would ever recover.

OMG GUISE AM I /lit/ yet?