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23022807 No.23022807 [Reply] [Original]

give me your best poetry tips bros. i want to know the cheat codes to writing kino poetry.

>> No.23022822

>>23022807
>he thinks it's just technique
you can't mechanics you way into this one, fren

>> No.23022835

>>23022807
>i want to know the cheat codes to writing kino poetry
take large doses of psychedelic drugs

>> No.23023005

>>23022807
Poet here.
Write a draft to convey the feeling.
Then rewrite it to make the verse prettier.
Then rewrite it to make it deep.
Then rewrite it to make the verse prettier.
Then rewrite it.
Then rewrite it.
Then rewrite it.
Then rewrite it.

>> No.23023025

>>23023005
based, this anon writes

>> No.23023069
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Pick a concrete image - something your experience with your senses like “the ocean“ or “a fight“ or “laundry.” Write as many sensory details as you can think of which would surround this image. My favorite twist is to pick the vowels and consonants that most exemplify the image - maybe for the ocean that’s hissing sh and ch, and wide oo and oh. Think of as many words as you can that are related to the image that have these sounds.

>> No.23023676

>>23023069
Let me try this out


dirty, unwashed, verdammt, nigger.
unshaved, hairy, body odourous cur
lip smacking, tsch tsch tsch, ghetto dweller