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[Solomon No.2283741]

You dazzle the light out of the Morning Star
and Your smile holds more beauty than midngight rain.
I think of You always, be you near or far
Even when it seems like such a pain.

Your eyes ;they shine like polished jade,
as a plague of illusion took over my heart,
Your words; they cut as easy as a silver blade
but they intrigued me from the very start

Oh woe is me, my dearest, my flame,
for You shalt not see things the way that I see,
I suppose there is only me to blame,
but in the end all I want is for you to be free.

I see an Iris on a barren Glade, my mind swiftly on you sets,
and as I ponder upon my thoughts...you can't find peace without a few regrets.


made a lil' poem. You like?

[ϟ Ｋ Ｏ Ｚ ϟ !Ry9qSW42No No.2283747]

I DO NOT KNOW HOW TO CALL THIS FEELING.

VERSES OF "ROMANTIC POEMS" AND SONNETS APPEAL TO ME IN AN "AESTHETIC MANNER" BUT WHEN I ATTEMPT TO READ "ROMANTIC POEMS" AND/OR SONNETS, I FIND THEM TEDIOUS.

I LIKE THEM "AESTHETICALLY", NOT "INTELLECTUALLY" (OR MAYBE IS THE OPPOSITE WAY?).

THAT KIND OF STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE IS OBSOLETE.

NOT "NEWS", BUT I COMPREHEND WHY PERSONS DISLIKE THEM; I DISLIKE THEM MYSELF.

[sage No.2283913]

>>2283747
for fuck's sake, stop misusing quotation marks, you moron. you're the worst tripfag

[Solomon No.2284231]

So....

Nobody likes this stuff? I am dissapoint in my literary skills.
Oh well, back to my usual then: social criticism.

Your's sincerely, OP

[Anonymous No.2284259]

>>2283741
Grammar and spellcheck.
Don't capitalize "important words", please.
Antiquated language is a turn-off, especially when used inconsistently.
Learn2semicolon.
>my mind swiftly on you sets,
No.
>You like?
No.
>sonnet Solomon
Sonnet of Sam would have so much funnier.

[Anonymous No.2284343]

>>2283913
>>2283747
Yeah seriously, please make an effort to better understand when to use them. It's annoying.