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Harpy Edition.

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>> No.22836700
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>>22836695
What scifi and fantasy books have the best dialogue?

>> No.22836704

>>22836700
Cosmere

>> No.22836725
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Sample rough draft of a chapter from my project for anybody looking for something to read. Open to criticism since its a first draft.
https://pastes.io/tgjnkyy90m

>> No.22836726

>>22836695
Read Feast of the Harlequin

>> No.22836730

>>22836725
That's a weird looking neck

>> No.22836735

Sex with Esmenet in her butt!

>> No.22836739
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>>22836704
Pray you knave viper, do not hiss such mock for in kind thine tongue shant serve another liege!

>> No.22836746

>>22836739
Thine tongue should be thy tongue

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>>22836695
Would you read this if I made it into a short story about an alien invasion.

>The blue pigs thrust their prows into rusting fruits five times before noon. A few days prior, they'd been fed the corpse of—something. His son Luke had not yet the wits to confess what, but should the shotgun tanline above the mantle serve as any indication it was no bantam quarry. Whatever the case, he was now a willing accomplice. Such is the duty of fathers, he thought. Following the incident, he hauled the pigs from the barn to the cellar, but despite the time spent there and their sudden increase in appetite, they left no manure, bones, or anything. Meanwhile, Luke remained bedridden and would not wake, leaving him to do all he could on his own. The only relief to be had now came in the form of his daughter's claps and giggles as she sat on his bouncing knee, but even this was short-lived. The pigs scratched at the basement door again.

>> No.22836753

>>22836746
FUCK

>> No.22836759
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What are some great reads with prose like picrel?

>> No.22836762

>>22836753
It's alright. Just go read up on some Elizabethan plays or poems to shitpost better.

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>>22836700
Vance, obviously

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>>22836762
It is for shame one wounds the moonstruck! Doth thou not bear mercy thicker than shadows? Lo, how far behind veils of tall lids and raised chins villainy perches. Nay, perjur'd in whole for a piece methinks not. I shant have it! Draw steel or kneel!

>> No.22836871

>>22836725

>felt more like children to Brod.

Didn't like this line. Old people don't feel like children in the presence of taller people- it's an inferiority of some sort that you might want to reconsider.

>like Ketch distilled from vowels into discordant bundles of consonants.

We don't know what Ketch sounds like. This line isn't doing anything. Maybe one of your dudes recognizes that someone is attempting Ketch. Also inconsistent with later demonstrations of the language "p'vaa" isn't a bundle of consonants- though you just said their attempts were a "discordant bundle" of them. Simple continuity errors can throw readers off big time.

>pavian

Why is Pavian making a big deal out of them mispronouncing his name if it's already been established they don't speak his language well? Just seems like filler. Is it important to keep this in? I don't find it humorous since it is a cliche. Maybe this is something you really enjoy and think your readers will really enjoy too. But beyond personal opinion- if you want this interaction to land you have to do something different. I don't know what. Maybe having an understanding of the language before we see them unable to reproduce certain phonemes makes it expected they would not be able to say Pavion's name.

>as if assuming the position to defecate

This doesn't land for me. You're introducing stuff I don't care about (the way they sit) in order to make a joke I don't find funny. Are you aiming for solemnity or levity? Pick one. Levity does not work with the tone of this piece.

>stopped

I can't finish this. Having a character use the word Fuck in every sentence he says is distracting. He only needs to say it once or twice- if no one else is using similar foul language. It's exhausting and I suspect you are treating this as illustrative of his personality perhaps another instance of humor that doesn't land. We get it after 2 times- I promise. Write dialog and show you aren't being lazy and uncreative. We do not understand his frustration nor will him saying fuck help us. Storytelling has to do the work so that we're saying fuck along with him rather than recoiling. Hope this helps. generally speaking interesting things are happening.

>> No.22836906

thinking about giving one of my main female protagonists in my fantasy book some demented characteristics, but im strapped for ideas aside from a fascination with death and a nonchalance in the sight of blood and gore (especially when compared to other women in her culture)

any ideas, anons?

>> No.22836910

>>22836906
>female protagonist
>demented characteristics
The job has already been done for you, anon.

>> No.22836923

>>22836910
yes, but we need to go further

>> No.22836937

>>22836871
Thank you for your feedback.
>Old people don't feel like children in the presence of taller people
I am also trying to convey Brod's overall low opinion of the Ketch. He is large, strong, and civilized. They are short, weak, and uncivilized. He's not foaming at the mouth with racist hatred for them, but he does not respect them. That is also the intent of the "assuming the position to defecate" line. The manner in which squat to casually sit is culturally unfamiliar to Brod and it reminds him of somebody squatting to shit, rather than a dignified position to assume in formal company.
>We don't know what Ketch sounds like.
Brod speaks it (the dialect he is familiar with) when greeting them and I describe its characteristic. I don't find the "P'vaa" bit inconsistent because this is their attempt at saying his name. It's not a word from their dialect which, to Brod, sounds like random consonants mashed together, but I don't mean that their dialect literally has no vowels or that they are incapable of pronouncing vowels.
>Pavian
Pavian is a noble and acts self-entitled. This is why he takes offense to barbarians they're trying to colonize being unable to pronounce his name correctly. He is also habitually crass and brash which irks Brod. His frequent use of "fuck" is intentional, not just some random attempt by me to be edgy. If he annoys you, good, he annoys Brod too.

Here is the chapter that precedes this one.
https://pastes.io/acnc9w0b3r
If you care to read it, it may provide more context to explain these characters and the choice behind what you're criticizing.

>> No.22836961

>>22836906
Give her mood swings.

Make her have no empathy.

Give her a twisted or misaligned morality.

>> No.22836969

The Great Ordeal

>> No.22836986

>>22836969
succeeds!

>> No.22837001

>>22836986
and everyone clapped

>> No.22837099

>>22836937

>noble and self entitled

The point isn't I hate HIM because he says fuck a lot. The point is I hate your writing because he says fuck and it doesn't fit my experience of what's appropriate. Do you see the difference? I have nothing against the word fuck- it makes sense in a lot of contexts, it's fine for characters to use 'fuck' often- but you have to have a story there where the use makes sense- which you don't. One of the reasons storytellers employ "fuck" is to heighten stakes, heighten emotions, and illustrate tension- all of which must be earned through more storytelling. A scene can open with a guy we the readers know nothing about yelling "FUCK FUCK FUCK, THEY'RE GOING TO KILL ME" into a phone and I immediately understand. I don't have to know anything else about this guy to understand that's a meaningful use of the word 'fuck'. The stakes are high- they're going to kill him, emotions are appropriately high- he thinks they're going to kill him- and tensions are high- we think they might kill him. Do you see how easy it is to make 'fuck' make sense? You have to do the emotional onboarding for us to understand Pav's use of 'fuck'. Explaining it in a comment to me doesn't fix anything. Fix the dialog, or find a way to write the story so we are onboard with Pav when he says 'fuck'. Part of why you might be missing this is because you've spent more time with these characters and sentences than we the readers have. This is a common problem for new writers. When you proofread your work try to snap out of your familiarity with it and experience it as though it were the first time you read it.

I'm done for the evening. Work on your dialog.

>> No.22837140

>>22836700
Crichton in a sense has the best dialogue.

>> No.22837176

>>22837099
I don't know how else to explain, "He curses out of habit, not dramatic effect" to you, bud. I literally work with people in real life who talk like this.

>> No.22837232

>>22837176

Do they live in a fantasy world? Are they nobles? The answer is no (nobles don't work). So don't use them to model nobles in a fantasy world- without the legwork it takes to get the audience on board. Speaking that way is also a heuristic for low socio-economic status and low education in our world and that factors into how we understand it. But again, it just comes off as bad writing. Anyone of your characters can act anyway you want them to act if you put in the work to make it make sense to people who aren't you.

If you're going to be unreceptive to criticism, then don't ask for it. I'm not trying to tear you down for the sake of tearing you down. I offer criticism to help you. This is how you get better at writing, not by getting hurt when people have different ideas about how you can improve your writing. You have to move beyond being defensive or you will stagnate.

>> No.22837275

>>22837232
It appears you are missing the point of that character. That is my fault for posting a chapter out of sequence.

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Hogson is so calming to read

>> No.22837285

>>22836704
Good start bad middle, ending will probably be worse.

>> No.22837292

>>22836700
dune

>> No.22837339

>>22836809
This.

>> No.22837361

>>22837279
Nice, thanks for sharing a page with the thread

>> No.22837410

>>22837361
I thought people wouldn't know what it was if I didn't post a page
Is the resident Schizo still here, stewing bitterly?

>> No.22837414

bakker Is KING

>> No.22837447

>>22836748
the pigs are the aliens? or the corpse?

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>>22836695
Can someone recommend me some quality undead kino?

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>>22837578
Reverend Insanity of course I too am interested in any answers you might get

>> No.22837600

Are any of the forgotten realms books worth reading? I'm going on holiday and plan to start BG3 when I get back so I want something to get me in the mood

>> No.22837601

>>22837578
Obsidian Path is pretty cool. It have a necromancer waifu. MC has sex with her corpse.

>> No.22837608

>>22837601
Degenerate trash

>> No.22837630

>>22836748
>The blue pigs thrust their prows into rusting fruits five times before noon
BLM metaphor, trash

>> No.22837657

Wanted to buy some fantasy books to read on Christmas holiday, but the bookshop had only stuff written by women with absurd names, all do them had garish color on the covers, one even had green pages. The only male author featured was Tolkien. Do men not write fantasy anymore?

>> No.22837660

>>22837657
They do but they're not featured in bookstores.

>> No.22837685

>>22837600
Elaine Cunningham's Drow books
>>22837657
Could be worse.
Bookstores where I am only stock classics, self help, romance and celebrity bio's.

>> No.22837715

>>22837657
Fantasy is for gays and women, science fiction is for men.

>> No.22837721

Halfway through Claw Of The Concilliator (prison/dungeon part). Should the dreams from book 1 reveal themselves by now? Did they even have a foreshadowing purpose? I read it a few months ago and forgot most of it I guess. I didn't care enough to take special care of it, because I honestly don't feel as strongly about foreshadowings as I used to.
All I remember getting out of it is the fact that there's time and space fuckery going on.

>> No.22837752

>>22837721
If I'm remembering right he's shown the future as abaia wants it to play out.
There is some foreshadowing.

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>INRI Sejenus
>pillar of salt/Sodom-Gomorrah
what else has this hack cripped from the Bible?

>> No.22837902

>>22837600
Yes.
>Trilogies/Series:
>Kino
Moonshaes Trilogy
The Finder's Stone Trilogy
Cleric Quintet
Song & Swords
Starlight & Shadows
Counselors & Kings
Druidhome trilogy (sequel to Moonshaes)
Prince of Lies and Crucible: The Trial of Cyric the Mad (sequel to the Avatar trilogy)
Twilight Giants trilogy
The Threat from the Sea (and the Realms of the Deep anthology which is set between 2 and 3)
Erevis Cale Trilogy (sequel to shadow witness)
War of the Spider Queen
Year of Rogue Dragons
The Last Mythal (milf succubus antagonist)
The Twilight War
The Empyrean Odyssey
Blades of the Moonsea
Abolethic Sovereignty (Cosmic horror fantasy)
Chosen of Nendawen (set a hundred years after Frostfell)
Unbroken Chain
Sword of the Gods
Brimstone Angels

>Good
The Empires trilogy
The Avatar Trilogy
Shadow of the Avatar trilogy (spinoff written 6 years after the original avatar trilogy this one is set during the events of tthe original trilogy)
Cormyr Trilogy
Sembia: Gateway to the Realms
Return of the Archwizards
Scions of Arrabar
House of Serpents
Watercourse Trilogy
The Lady Penitent (sequel to war of the spider queen)
The Haunted Lands
Shadowbane
The Sundering
Brotherhood of the Griffon (spinoff series about some characters from the Haunted Lands trilogy)

>Kino Standalone
Masquerades (spinoff sequel of the Finder's Stone trilogy)
Cormyr: A Novel (the book sold well so it was expanded into a trilogy but the first book is standalone.)
Night Parade
Stormlight
The Simbul's Gift
Evermeet: Island of Elves
Thornhold
The Shadow Stone
Halls of Stormweather
The Nether Scroll
Shadow Witness
City of Ravens
The Jewel of Turmish (quarterstaff wielding druid mc!)
Lady of Poison
Queen of the Depths
Son of Thunder
Bladesinger
Frostfell
Dawnbringer

>Good Standalone
The Lost Library of Cormanthyr
The Glass Prison
The Black Bouquet
The Crimson Gold
The City of Splendors
Master of Chains
Ghostwalker
Bloodwalk
Darkvision and Stardeep
The God Catcher
Sandstorm
The Gilded Rune

>Fun books (fun? fun!)
King Pinch
Crypt of the Shadowking and Curse of the Shadowmage
War in Tethyr (Orc Paladin!)
The Pools trilogy
The Netheril Trilogy
The Council of Blades
Temple Hill
Crypt of the Moaning Diamond
The Citadels series (four stand alone books)
Mistshore
i highly recommend that if you find an author you enjoy you should read their non-D&D books.

>> No.22837974

>>22837902
Thanks. I already have Brimstone Angels downloaded so I guess I'll go with that.

>> No.22838051

halfway through Crossroads of Twilight
I cant fucking stand the rebel Aes Sedai. Every single one of them (except maybe Siuan and Leane, that got completely sidelined) are just coward, whiny woman
All of their decisions are born out of pride or ignorance, Cadsuane and a dozen others are more effective than 200 or however many dumb bitches are fighting for the White Tower.
Why the FUCK are they talking about the Black Tower while ignoring Rand? It makes no sense. Bypassing him just means that at best you're ruffling his feathers, at worst he is actually compulsing Aes Sedai and you're walking into his domain.
Please just give me more Rand/Matt plot. Or even Elayne, at least she has a sense of humor.

>> No.22838057

>>22836961
>Make a female character a women
Daring today aren't we.

>> No.22838073

>>22838051
Them being retards who underestimate the problems at hand is only partially the issue. The other parts are them trying to squabble about who runs this shit and what to do, as well as being like 25% Black Ajah, 10% spies, 30% novices and other rookies and 35% women used to being obeyed who suddenly find themselves living rough.

>> No.22838089

>>22837275

The problem is the writing. I will not find these problems if i pick up any published work from chapter 2.

I can remove the entire scene where the different groups meet and replace it with a sentence or two and it will read better for me. Why? because the language barrier does not pose a problem for your characters worth elaborating on further. Textual evidence: they don't spend days of travel finding an interpreter. Textual evidence: they don't suffer setbacks - and do everything as if there was no language barrier whatsoever. So why do you spend so much effort trying to convince us there's a problem- this creates an expectation for a resolution that you do not meet with the story you have told. Compare it to other bigger problems which only got a line or two- the roads being ruined by rain, the harsh travel conditions. You've started this story by giving a cursory summation to bigger problems why wouldn't the nothingburger language barrier also deserve a cursory mention?

>> No.22838097

>>22838051
>Why the FUCK are they talking about the Black Tower while ignoring Rand?
Actual spoiler.
Literally one THIRD of the Aes Sedai end up being Black Ajah, that's why. They have to have a literal Day of the Rope by the end of that subplot.

>> No.22838107

>>22837447
I have several routes in mind, but I've yet to commit. Those two have been considered, but so has the son, and perhaps even a combination. In the original prompt the story was to be complete in 10 sentences so I was going to have one of the pigs speak, and leave it at that, but I'm having too much fun to leave it there. I'll take your interest as a good sign!

>>22837630
Dude, what? Please explain. It's not meant as a metaphor for anything (let alone fucking BLM), but rather a visual and an interesting sentence to read aloud. Blue Pigs are an actual breed of pig you know.

>> No.22838119

>>22838107
>Dude, what? Please explain.
>pigs (slang for police)
>blue (slang for police)

>> No.22838145

>>22838089
I see. So you want the language barrier to cause a greater conflict between the two parties.

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>>22838119
Yes, I guess that's simple enough, but the conclusion that it's cops doesn't tie into the context of the rest of the sentence at all which should prompt some sort of reassessment, no?

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just finished The Judging Eye yesterday, the Akka-Mimara storyline was such a slog (hehe), jesus
>le Moria, but cooler (not really)
>le Fangorn, but cooler (not really)
>ermahgerd DA GABDEN, HE'S SO BADASS AND COOL, everyone shids and farts wnd cumz themselves if he so puffs in their direction
Kelmomas antics was the only truly interesting plotline, massively disappointed by how little time was devoted to it

>> No.22838364

>>22838357
Judging Eye is definitely the worst one IMO and a slog overall. Enjoy the rest, truth shines, etc.

>> No.22838393

>>22838357
not enough gay rape

>> No.22838448

>>22838051
>at least she has a sense of humor.
elayne is whiny preppy bitch and single-handedly made winter's heart the worst book by being featured so prominently

>> No.22838457

>>22838145

>you want

I don't want anything. Either the entire scene needs to be presented as the nothingburger it is currently and condensed to a sentence or two, or the resolution has to meet the expectations set by the build up of the problem. It doesn't matter which you choose. Make sure the expectation and payoff are in line. If you make a promise to the audience that the language barrier is a problem- you have to deliver the problem in a way that meets our expectations. As I mentioned earlier- having to trek another few days to find an interpreter would be one fitting pay out- which could result in other conflicts. Not being able to communicate at all and leaving in a defeated and baffled state- resulting in a very big bad thing happening would be another payout appropriate for the built up expectations you've set.

This is something you as a writer have to pay attention to when you introduce conflict. What expectations are you setting - what promises are you making and do you make good on those promises.

>> No.22838621

>>22838357
Is that the one where MC raped a bunch of kids, causing the Great Ordeal to fail?

>> No.22838630

>>22838457
At first I thought this guy was being a bit harsh but his criticism here is really good.

Anyways, I couldn't get further than when they found the 'wrong fish'. There seems to be a lot of descriptions just read to us by the narrator, maybe it'd be better to cover this in dialogue between the two knights or whatever.

I find it so amazingly easy to glaze my eyes over when I see there is zero dialogue or actually important things being discussed in a book.

Maybe you aren't writing for my type of reader. Other than the fact I couldn't force myself to read any further than that (I wouldn't take this as an insult to the work necessarily.) it was 'fine', I didn't give it enough thought to actually critique the content further than I have.

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>>22837601
Hard pass on necrophilia from be broheim. Unless of course we are talking about sexy sexy vampires

>> No.22838683

>>22838457
NTA but acting like he violated some immutable rule of storytelling (there are none) by having the language barrier go nowhere is a bit much.
At best, it was a missed opportunity for an extra layer of tension or something, but clearly the language barrier wasn't the main conflict of the chapter.
The guy also says the POV character thinks the tribal people are uncivilized, so their simplified speech, intentionally or not, dehumanizes the tribal people.
Saying "why even bring up the language barrier of it's resolved two lines later?" is valid, but you seem to put too much stock in it.

>> No.22838697

>>22837601
>It have a necromancer waifu.
Picked the FUCK up
>MC has sex with her corpse.
Uh wait I mean maybe I'll look at it
>>22837578
Empire of the Vampire probably isn't the kind of undead you're looking for but it's the only undead I've read recently and it's quite good

>> No.22838754

>>22838621
no this is the one where cnaiur (dude, what if conan was a faggot? lmao) rapes the emperor

>> No.22838771

>>22838754
Second Apocalypse sounds like some infamous parody hentai series Ugly Rape Bastard Saves Another World by Raping It.

>> No.22838778

>>22838771
also the main character is raped to death by aliens. lol

>> No.22838841

>>22836759
the iron king is written in a similar vein, albeit far more tasteful imo

>>22836830
are there any living authors who write in this style? would unironically read

>> No.22838848

anyone ever read darkover by marion zimmer bradley

>> No.22838855

>>22838683

When things work the rules don't matter. But when things don't work, it's best to reexamine the rules that were broken. They aren't immutable nor do I treat them as such- but they are good guidelines in general because they tend to work.

I would suggest the writer do some reading or watching on conflict and resolution.

>> No.22838906

>>22838841
>are there any living authors who write in this style? would unironically read
I have seen some do it, but it's usually for a POV laugh kinda thing.

>> No.22839008

>>22838848
Yes, there are a lot of older women having inappropriate relationships with teens in those books.

>> No.22839072

>>22839008
how inappropriate exactly

>> No.22839113

>>22839072
Women in positions of power (mothers, teachers, royalty) are usually VERY possesive and controlling of younger men and the books portrays it like if there was nothing wrong with that and sometimes it's straight up sex.
She also does it with the genders reversed in some novels.

>> No.22839289

>>22838848
>>22839008
>>22839113
She was literally a pedophile and so was her husband and they abused their children. Sad!

>> No.22839297

What kind of utter garbage are you guys reading?
It's like it came straight up from a japanese porn game.

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>>22839297
Fate/Stay Night treats Arthur better than Bradley.

>> No.22839372

>>22839314
Tbf there are few better treatments than being turned into a cute anime girl with a sweet ass sword

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/SFFG/ Recommendations:

Read Reverend Insanity, Lord of The Mysteries, Neuromancer, Hyperion, The Prince of Nothing

Also read The Wandering Inn, Between Two Fires, Mother of Learning, Cradle, I Shall Seal the Heavens, A Song of Ice and Fire, The Poppy War.

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/SFFG/ Recommendations: LITRPG Edition

Read Azarinth Healer, Primal Hunter, He Who Fights with Monsters, Dungeon Crawler Carl

Also read System Universe, Dissonance, Defiance of the Fall, Iron Prince.

>> No.22839452

I will not read any of the above

>> No.22839488

>>22839452
You WILL read between two fires and you WILL like it

>> No.22839491

>>22837140
Which novels? He has over 20.

>> No.22839591

>>22838855
I'm the writer.
My intent for the chapter is a horror feel. The language barrier forcing the Ketch to vaguely refer to what's going on as "evil" without being able to go into specifics. I didn't intend for it to be a major conflict in the chapter, just a device to lend to the mystery.
I am a new writer and horror is hard to pull off, so if you think there is a better way to contribute to the mystery than a language barrier, I'm open to pointers. But I'm with the other anon, I don't see how the language barrier aspect breaks any essential narrative conventions.
I'm open to constructive criticism, but I have no obligation to respond to it with "Yes sir, you're absolutely right sir, I'll change it immediately." I'm allowed to make a case for my choices.

>> No.22839641

>>22838855
It's kind of like a jazz solo, really. You can break the rules, but you've gotta know what the rules are first and you've gotta do it on purpose.

>> No.22839645

>>22837715

lost in space
vs.
conan the barbarian

>> No.22839661
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>>22839382
>Reverend Insanity = Literally about an a-moral bugman killing/consooming/cultivating
>Lord of The Mysteries = Boring asian steampunk with a tarot magic system for card fags
>Neuromancer = Decent cyberspunk i'm putting together a team novel
>Hyperion = Interplanetary high tech trooning
>The Prince of Nothing = Bakker is for fags and fags are for Bakker. Simple as.
>The Wandering Inn = Stay at home moms power fantasy with a main character whos most prominent power is complaining while being a pacivist.
>Between Two Fires = Heaven Vs hell but in medievil FRANCE!
>Mother of Learning = Time loop and like all of the subgenre goes literally nowhere over and over again, has a decent magic system and a main characters sister that is annoying as fuck.
>Cradle = Every second novel is a dud in the series with a birdbath of a main character. Only decent thing is the fights that get stale real quick because it does not take long to realise they are all ill conceived magical games of uno.
>I Shall Seal the Heavens = Proto xianxia at its worst, MC gets kidnapped into strong but lowly down on its luck sect. Que haughty young masters, saving face and swilling genseng infused tiger penis soup by the gallon.
>A Song of Ice and Fire = Fantastical medievil degeneracy where the caracters who should live die and the characters who should die live. Also author is too busy getting fat and old to finish the series.
>The Poppy War = Fem-C gets accepted to 20th century china-esque martial academy and gets looked down upon while struggling to overcome amidst pseudo researched equally vintage china political bullshit.

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>>22839390
>Azarinth Healer = Starts good but fizzles hard midway. Author also makes the main character a low key lesbian because they clearly have no idea hat to do with their love life.
>Primal Hunter = MC+background is so impossibly nonsensical that he's not even cannon in his own setting.
>He Who Fights with Monsters = every character that isnt the MC is just there to be amazed at how smart Jason is while he tells them shit they already know before reminding them (incorrectly i might add) that 'Oh you have no idea".
>Dungeon Crawler Carl = The MC's sidekick (A cat named 'Princess Donut') is so much smarter than Carl (the MC) that every scene the two are in is eye-gougingly painful. This would not be so much of a problem if such scenes did not constitute the majority of the series.
>System Universe = After the initial premise is established it turns into how to pander to followers at a snails pace AKA; 'Filler McFiller Face - The Excessively Extended Sleep Inducing Saga'.
>Dissonance = MC gets god fucked more then once as he goes about becoming a man/bear/goat/pig/axolotl hybrid who also has many super sekret identities.
>Defiance of the Fall = Brain dead MC with very-much-just-barely opposed kingdom building with a wafer thin cultivation system
>Iron Prince = edgy school setting with even edgier MC who has lightning powers and no discernible challenges what so ever.

>> No.22839833

>>22839641
Sure, I just don't get why the language barrier is such a critical rule-breaking.

>> No.22839848

>>22839382
>>22839390
how many months have you ritual posted these? You could at least edit them once in a while

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>>22839452
would you prefer to read some romance involving beastfolks?

>> No.22839898

>>22838906
ill take what I can get. do you remember who it was?

>> No.22839949

>>22838357
I'm still at the Ruins of Cil-auras or whatever (I know, I'm a slow reader). 4 hours left and I read 10 minutes per day.

>> No.22839961

>>22839898
It's litrpg trash. You will not read it. The guy was isekai'd and one of the people he met was kinda quirky.

>> No.22840007

>>22838841
Don't know any but there's a funny fat man in Malazan who talks like this. I've only just got to him, but I like him :)

>> No.22840132

I don't understand the current obsession webnovels have with systems and video game mechanics. Even as someone who enjoys the sort of games these things tend to be based on, I just don't get it at all. If I'm reading something and something akin to a status window pops up in front of a character at any point I instantly stop reading.
It's just so... banal? I don't know. Am I getting old? Is this what it feels like?

>> No.22840166

>>22836725
>>22836748
>>22836809
>>22836906
>>22837140
>>22837279
>>22837600
>>22837601
>>22837685
>>22837721
>>22837902
>>22838051
>>22838357
>>22838642
>>22839113
>>22839314
>>22839871

Great post anons, very original but just started three body problem and i'm wondering when does it gets good? are the witcher books any good? Only played Witcher 3 and the netflix's series. Just started Eye of the World when does WoT gets good?? Any books like dark souls/berserk/Bloodborne??? Any books like FF/Dragon Quest/Tales of..??!! Any books with N'Wahs?Kvothe is a cuck, will slob Martin ever finish winds of winter??? Abercrombie is Reddit-tier?? Are the dune sequels worth it or should i stop with god emperor of dunc? Should i read the Hyperion sequel???? Did severian fucked his grandma? Is severian a clone? Any books with chinks? Any books like fallout/metro? Any books where the mc gets cucked? Any books where the mc Doesn't get cucked?? Stormlight book 5 when? Will kaladin fuck the fairy?? is the Eisenhorn trilogy a good place to start with W40k??? Or should i watch 4hours YouTube vid about le EPIC lore??? Any books with young petite women? Any books with old thick women? Any books with MANLY men like David Gemmell? Soulcatcher or Lady who is the better waifu? When does malazan gets good?? I didn't finish highschool so i can´t understand Malazan?!?! Any books with chinks??!! When does ASOIAF gets good??!? When does Farseer gets good?? When does lightbringer gets good?? When does codex alera gets good??? When does Lord of The Isles gets good?? Dunsany is king or bakker?? Any books with incest?

>> No.22840187

>>22840132
The stat windows suck but a constant sense of progression is great for making readers stay with a long story unfortunately.
It's kinda funny because all but like 5% of the market pussies out of playing it straight and adds cheats that mean the protagonist is always stronger than their own level

>> No.22840198

>>22839390
is iron prince actually about the proag getting cucked by a bully or are the upset readers being ungenerous in their interpretation?

>> No.22840206

>>22840132
Litrpg stories isn't a real literature but a an actual video game scripts or a descriptions of (video) game gameplay. Go on yt, watch some guy playing a game then in your words describe what is happening in the game and that is litrpg

>> No.22840218

>>22840198
He's not cucked at all. His lesbian friend wants badboy dick.

>> No.22840234

>>22840132
Kids don't read because they play video games instead. Putting video game shit into the books has actually attracted younger people back into reading sff so I'm all for it even if I hate that shit myself. The optimist in me hopes they'll start with litrpg and branch out in real books later.

>> No.22840236

>>22840198
In this day and age if a female character has any interest in any male other than the MC then the MC is getting cucked. It's very sad.

>> No.22840264

I'm reading The shadow Rising and it happened again. Every single WoT book so far has had scenes where Rand refuses to eat even when he's been without food for long stretches of time. Will Rand ever eat food? What is Robert Jordan trying to say with this? Does channeling replace the need for food?

>> No.22840276

>>22840264
Boy just lost his apatite, give him a break, it's hard dealing with the weight of the world on your shoulders. Besides, the Maidens will just force it down him if needs be. Car'a'carn must keep up his strength.

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>>22838841
Anything with more than a sliver of archaism nowadays is usually done as a gag. I'm reminded of this bit in Belgariad where Barak pokes fun at Garion by retelling an altercation that happened in a 'fanciful' way. You really have to go back to the playwrights who fostered the style to get it in full. If you must have something modern your best bet is probably in some Arthurian adaptation.

>> No.22840377

Just managed to snag two Elric DAW editons with the badass Michael Walen artwork today paid $18 for one and $16 for the other might've overpaid a little but I feel like these books are getting rarer and rarer as time goes on but have never been able to find the single volumes back home except for White Wolf that I found pretty cheap. I know I could just get the newer omnibus releases but the single editions have a comfiness that I like

Anyway favourite Elric book?

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>>22840377
>the single editions have a comfiness that I like
So true. Pic related isn't mine, but I have the same edition.

>> No.22840413

>>22840007
lol are you talking about Kruppe? I like him too.

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>>22840391
I have these three. Just got them because they're cool, but maybe this post will make me push them up the list.

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Also these that I forgot about.

>> No.22840624

>>22840132
>Am I getting old? Is this what it feels like?
The good old cultural shock strikes again. Some people are really into these things, like spics and indos, so they consume it a lot.

>> No.22840707

>>22837902
I think I'll trust you because you haven't listed the Dark Elf trilogy. It's not a bad series but I wouldn't call it good or kino. Decent at most.

>> No.22840728

>>22840533
>>22840546
Too kino. No major publisher today would allow it.

>> No.22840734

Lovecraft really failed when writing At the mountains of madness
The supposed warning against going back only made me want to go there even more

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>>22840546
based. I like the band Cirith Ungol and a lot of their artwork is from the guy that did these covers

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rpVmUKFIwg

>> No.22840765

>>22840546

Why can't sf or fantasy have covers like these today and who do we blame, is it the basedboys, woke capitalist feminists?

>> No.22840788

>>22840734
the mountains aren't mountains, but strange cities in our dreams that keep coming back

>> No.22840804

>>22840788
kino

>> No.22840967

>>22840546
>moorcock

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>>22838107
>prompt

>> No.22841019

>>22840166
>Any books with incest?
This is the only relevant question

>> No.22841366

Got There are Doors today by Wolfe where do more serious Wolfepack readers rank it among his works? I've read the four main Severin novels, and Fifth Head but trying to make my way through his other material

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>>22838642
Speaking of vampires is this any good?

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>>22838697
>Empire of the Vampire probably isn't the kind of undead you're looking for
You are correct sir.

>> No.22841623

>>22841366
I don't know how others rate it but if I were ranking his books it would be on the lower end

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>>22841425
It's fun, edgy schlock. Mildly coomer. If you like that you'll like it.
>>22840728
I love buying old books with sick covers.

>> No.22841756

Anxiety crippling me lads

>> No.22841771

>>22841366
It's an entertaining read, but compared to BotNS it's dare I say "mid"

>> No.22841792

>>22837578
I just finished The Mine Lord on RR. It is a comfy dwarven survival progession. Better than I expected lmao

>> No.22841834

Anything good with muscle mommy barbarians?

>> No.22841843

>>22837902
Thanks, Anon. It is nice to have a long list like this to sieve out the utter trash. I will see if I can find something good in it.

>> No.22841860

>>22839661
>>22839668
Harsh, but surprisingly accurate. Underrrated post.

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>And his phallus hooked high across his strapped abdomen, a bow strung for war ...
>And glory.

>> No.22841871

>>22841866
filtered

>> No.22841875

>>22841866
If one of the Greeks wrote that you'd be creaming yourself.

>> No.22841894

Man, there was some Polish fantasy with great premise on the cover (something about huge invasions over great geographical boundry like a massive, world-defining mountain chain) and I will prob never find that.

>> No.22841931

>Twenty years to rehearse a god-tier comeback for the cucking
>Acha kneels and cucks out again
Achamian chads... we were supposed to win this time

>> No.22841941

>>22841425
edgy, but good
the sequel comes out early next year also if you end up liking it

>> No.22842091

I feel guilty not reading Wheel of Time before any other high fantasy series but I just can't read something where the main hero is named Randal.

Apologies to any Randals reading this but really it's a bad name

>> No.22842097

>>22842091
Is that series any good beyond being long like malazan? I have heard people describe it as tedious and was litrpg or progression fantasy before they were a thing

>> No.22842102

>>22842091
Do not read Waste of Time

>> No.22842115

>>22842091
Wheel of Time came out in the right place at the right time to become popular. There are entire books worth of padding there.

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>>22836695
Does the Elric series have a good or at least satisfying conclusion? I'm about half way through pic related and finding it hard to continue.

>> No.22842321

When does it make sense to leave things vague or unexplained in fiction, and when does it ruin the setting/break believability?

I’ve read / watched stories where things will happen and there’s no clearly explained reason as to how they happened. I’ve heard arguments such as “it’s the author’s style, they don’t focus on those small details”, or “it’s not about the events it’s about something else (ie: characters reacting to an event)”. Some of these just feel like excuses for inconsistent writing though. Am i just misunderstanding the use of interpretation and intentionally leaving things vague?

>> No.22842323

>>22842097
It's a solid story but it's very impressive how RJ manages to take every bit of plot-wise excitement out of it.
Every single thing that happens is foreshadowed to the point where when the thing actually happens, all you think is "well, finally".
Every betrayal happens by a character that already had a dedicated chapter announcing it. Every action happens after the character announced his plan to act.

Maybe this was different if you were reading the books while they were being released, so when a thing happened that was announced 4 books ago you actually got excitement out of it.

>> No.22842424

>>22842321
You are just a sperg with a stunted imagination.

>> No.22842426

>>22840264
that book is one of the comfiest in the series desu. i think it's also the longest

>> No.22842441

>>22842097
i didn't find reading through it tedious at except for the book in which like a 1/4 of the chapters are from the pov of one of the worst characters

>> No.22842459

do you think gorm will make his drafts available when he dies since he won't let anyone else finish the series?

>> No.22842494

>>22841603
Looks like that vamp is about to deepthroat that dragon dildo

>> No.22842517

>>22841875
the greeks did not consider erect cocks to be aesthetic, have you ever looked at their statues?

>> No.22842518

>>22839591

I think you should write more and read more. And study literature in an academic context. There are plenty of cheap and free courses that can help you understand at an abstract level the things you should be doing in terms of structure and technique. The rest you will acquire with practice.

>> No.22842633

>>22840166
Seethe

>> No.22842681

>>22842518
Of course, already doing that.

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Gonna read Ranpo.... What am I in for /sffg/sistahs?

>> No.22842798

>>22842770
edogawa ranpo = eddo gaw aran po = edgar allan poe
you're welcome

>> No.22842822

Stormlight Archive bros... december 6 2024

>> No.22842824

>>22842798
nice knower

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Sandersoys... are we ready?

>> No.22842835

>>22842830
I gave up after the mini book that came after the third

>> No.22842857

>>22842830
meh

>> No.22842928

>>22842830
>Another whole year

Fuck

>> No.22842952

>>22842830
Not the Winds i expected but okay

>> No.22842969

>>22842830
knowing there will be a timeskip after this one is...not great

>> No.22843164

>>22842131
It literally has one of the most iconic conclusions of all time.

>> No.22843186

The Audible audiobook of The Unholy Consult is awesome. The way that the narrator says GOLGOTTERATH makes me lol each time.

>> No.22843212

>>22842830
>1 year
whatever, I'm gonna have to find like 30 more books to read until then

>> No.22843231

>>22842830
Please Brandon, no more Aladin being sad about himself. I beg you. There are a million things a man can be sad about you don't need to reuse the same one four times

>> No.22843234

>>22843186
I love how in the WoT audiobooks. Ishamael/Ba'alzamon/whatever the fucker calls himself sounds like skeletor. Was wild.

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>>22843231
The saga of Kaladin being sad in different places of Urithiru really was something else

>> No.22843283

>>22842830
Will kaladin finally KEBAB some white girl?

>> No.22843301

Tattersail's thighs!

>> No.22843311

>>22843164
Sure, but it's a slog to get there.

>> No.22843333

>>22839949
not to spoil anything for you, but i was majorly disappointed with his not-Moria. it starts off really cool with the descriptions of the place and the heart thing (you're probably past that already), but then it goes nowhere from there

>> No.22843341

reading White-Luck Warior atm, what the fuck is up with the "reveal" that Soma is a skin spy? was this bungled massively or did it go over my head? the way i see it, it goes like this: Mimara just says to Akka "he's a skin spy, lol", Akka blasts him, and he escapes or gets thrown away or whatever the fuck, and then nobody talks about this again. is this really all there is to it?

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>>22843341
iirc she sees him with the Eye
it is definitely brought up again and further contextualised, just keep reading

>> No.22843353

>>22843349
alright. i fucking hate this storyline though, it's easily the worst of the 3. if i have to hear about DA GABDEN and his steely eyes again i'll blow a gasket

>> No.22843398

>>22843341
don't worry akka assrapes him later

>> No.22843512

I'M GOING TO POST BAKKER SPOILERS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA EEEEEEEEEEE

>> No.22843522

>>22840788
Go back to the poetry thread with your metaphors

>> No.22843554

>>22843522
metaphors aren't limited to poetry, and prose isn't that distinct from poetry, if you bothered to read any

>> No.22843572

>>22843512
is kellhus uncircumcised?

>> No.22843593

The "A stranger in a strange land" genre is the non-fantastical version of portal fantasy and isekai.

>> No.22843665

>>22843593
In other words, not an isekai nor a portal fantasy.

>> No.22843702

>>22843665
they're just saying it's a lazy and easy way to do worldbuilding

>> No.22843955

>>22838051
well just finished it.
In the last few pages, after staring at a piece of paper the entire afternoon, Egwene decides to mess up a military plan, immediately gets herself knocked out and captured.
That's about par for the course, yes.

Anyway Tuon and Mat are very amusing.

>> No.22844117

>>22842424
Back to /b/ with you

>> No.22844173

>>22843593
What's a portal fantasy

>> No.22844180

>>22844173
isekai

>> No.22844182

>>22842321
you're gonna need to show examples. sometimes things pay off later. sometimes things remain unexplained on purpose (for example something supernatural like eldritch gods )

>> No.22844186

>>22844182
And sometimes its just lore and readers have to connect the dots on their own. Like Dark Souls.

>> No.22844209

>>22836700
fucking none of them

>> No.22844210

Bobby Dollar #1 is pretty good so far, I kind of wish the actual Soul Lawyering this got more of a focus but at the same time I like the mystery paired with daily life vibe the book pushes forward so far

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finished reading this one
desu not sure what to think of it. i don't regret reading it and i think i'd be willing to read it again sometime in the future but can't say the plot or any of the main characters won my heart. if i had to describe it in one word i'd call it pretty like the unicorn herself (who kinda fades into the background halfway? mmm)

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Read this if you like witches.

>> No.22844473

>>22836830
https://vocaroo.com/1lYh2XkEGqt9

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>>22844473

>> No.22844533

>>22844520
Lol thanks m8. Somebody in another thread wanted me to read it, on account of my "Oats" radio drama.

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>>22844473
I laffed

>> No.22844618

>>22844209
Alright, fine. Who's the least shit, then?

>> No.22844671

What series should I read next, bros? Sprawl by Gibson, or Mythago Wood by Holdstock? I've already read Neuromancer but it was years ago so I'll probably ly read it again before the next 2.

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>tfw my dad didn't like the book I lent him
It was the Dragon Waiting. My dad is a smart guy who loves history, so I don't think it filtered him. He just said it "wasn't his thing". His favourite series is Dune. Genuinely thinking of lending him The Darkness That Comes Before, but he'll probably hate that too.

>> No.22844685

>>22844682
I wouldn't have your dad read Bakker unless you want him to think you're gay.

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>>22844682
Have him read an excerpt from Legends & Lattes, and give us his thoughts.

>> No.22844712

>>22844682
Reverend insanity

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>>22844682
>Genuinely thinking of lending him The Darkness That Comes Before

>> No.22844760

>>22844682
>bakkerfags are considering making their dads read gay kid diddling the series

>> No.22844854

>>22844760
reverse grooming

>> No.22845006

>>22837902
>quarterstaff wielding druid mc

Gonna download this tomorrow. Druids don't get enough love in fantasy

>> No.22845029

Might be an hero lads

>> No.22845070

>>22845029
whats the last book you will read before you do it.

>> No.22845078

>>22843353
that section isn't called the slog for nothing

>> No.22845079

>>22845070
The Wood Beyond the World.

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>>22840187
I enjoy them for the progression but there has been a new trend of the past two or so years where authors label them "slow-burn progression" or some shit like that and basically just write filler. So what your left with is actually something far slower than tradition fantasy or sci-fi your trying to get away from. Its both hilarious and sad.
>Word to the wise; stay away from "slow-burn" progression fantasy/sci-fi as its basically just xianxia tier filler.

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Picked this up from a second hand bookstore today. I have quite a lot of SF paperbacks that I collect for their covers. So you can probably see why I nabbed this as soon as I saw it. I haven't read a single one yet.

>> No.22845119

>>22845029
don't do it lad, I was thinking that once and I'm glad I didn't
>recommends fantasy
cmon bro is this a prank beyond the grave?

>> No.22845121

>>22845079
>When the wife of Golden Walter betrays him for another man, he leaves home on a trading voyage...
dropped. cucktrash

>> No.22845130

>>22845117
me on left

>> No.22845148

>>22845117
> From the author of Nazi Love Slaves, Slave Women of the Congo, Slaves of Pleasure, Torture Camp, Death's Paradise and many more!

>> No.22845166

>almost finished the unholy consult
Bros... the heron spear just got busted out. Let's fucking goooooo

>> No.22845169

>Baon closed the envelope. “It has only his signature. And a crude depiction of male genitalia.”
>“From the Trickster Aspect?” Mother said. “He was here too, last year.”
>“Of course he was!” Demoux repeated, then sighed. “I’m ready to be off this rusting planet. What about you two?”
>“Yes, please,” Galladon said. “One of the eldest beings in the cosmere, and he has the mental age of a thirteen-year-old.”
Why is Sanderson such a manchild?

>> No.22845178

Finished the first part of Murtagh, it's decent so far. Paolini's writing has greatly improved over the years, and I like how the reader gets to see the actions Eragon and Arya took in a different perspective. He explores a lot of the underpinnings of the world in it rather than just handwaving everything like the Inheritance Cycle did.

>> No.22845195

There are dozens of classic fantasy novels you've likely not read. It boggles the mind why people, even anons ITT would read YAslop such as Paolini. If you absolutely MUST read YA, at least read McKillip or Le Guin.

>> No.22845196

>>22845130
Inshallah

>> No.22845197

>>22845195
>female authors recommended
Well, thread was reasonable up until this point.

>> No.22845198

>>22845195
>la guin
Nice bait

>> No.22845199

>>22845195
>le guin
bait not taken

>> No.22845201

>>22845198
>>22845199
What is Earthsea if not Young Adult fantasy?

>> No.22845212

>>22845148
pretty based, that's why google hides his stuff, I'm really glad I paid a whole dollar for this piece of history

>> No.22845213

Mimara's sweaty butt after a long day on the slog! Imagine her jumping your bone after a fingerful of Qirri! Sexo!

>> No.22845217

>>22841756
clean up your diet man

>> No.22845218

>>22837657
find gems in a second hand book store etc

>> No.22845220

>>22845217
Really should do this. Right now it consists of
>energy drinks
>nicotine
>oats
>something carby for dinner like pasta
Needs more greens, lean protein, and fruit desu. And I really should just drink normal coffee instead of Red Bull. Oh and R Scott Bakker is king of fantasy.

>> No.22845222

>>22845213
>Cuckamian got to tap that and you never will
WEL?

>> No.22845223
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>>22845220
100% your problem. Skim read this if you want, it's badly written and it was written before gut bacteria were so well known but it's good

Basically no brain can run properly or heal itself if you eat the wrong food

>> No.22845227

Lot of faggots ITT. Might fire up the pasta a little later, I reckon.

>> No.22845228

>>22845220
also your post I replied to was about 24 hours ago and you replied in 2 minutes, wtf is going on there do you have an alert tool or something?

>> No.22845230

>>22845228
No, just have no life beyond reading and shitposting.

>> No.22845236

>>22845230
the average /sffg/ poster

>> No.22845240

>>22845230
neither do I but that (you) vigilance is impressive

>> No.22845244

>>22845195
>le guin
more like lmao @ you're life

>> No.22845246

All I want out of life is to be able to fucking relax from my state of hyper tension

>> No.22845250

>>22845246
read mao ni

>> No.22845270

>>22840166
Filtered.

>> No.22845273

>>22836695
Why the fuck fantasy and sci-fi have the same thread?

>> No.22845290

>>22845273
It's shit, I know. Fantasy chads need a separatist movement.

>> No.22845302

Why do normals say that Lovecraft had 'purple prose'? It's dry compared to even the other most well-lnown pulp writers (Howard, CAS)

>> No.22845320

What are some good fantasy bedtime stories? My girlfriend left me and I need something to stop my mind from wandering when I'm going to sleep. I've been listening to English translations of the Grimms' fairy tales, something along those lines would be good. I've considered MacDonald's Fairy Tales but they seem like the kind of thing you need to really pay attention to, mostly cause of their cryptic and highly allegorical style.

>> No.22845322

>>22845273
Both are genre literature.

>> No.22845554

>>22845273
Every once and a while sci-fi fans get too big for their britches and think they can have their own thread, but eventually it dies and they come crawling back here. They've done it, oh, I think five times already? Wanna go for number six?

>> No.22845567

>>22845273
Apes
Together
Strong

>> No.22845696

>>22845302
Most people have the vocabulary of middle school students

>> No.22845735

>>22844682
Haha loser. My dad likes all of the shit I like. He's even reading through Malazan.

>> No.22845950

>>22845220
Red Bull is good for you

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>>22845735
>this is how retards multiply.

>> No.22846152

>>22846144
That's rich coming from someone who spams ai art and the shittiest takes in this thread

>> No.22846159

>>22845220
Please convert your diet into soda and energy drinks-only, so you expire with haste.

>> No.22846164

>>22845273
scifi is just fantasy for people who need justifications for everything

>> No.22846172

>>22845083
>but there has been a new trend of the past two or so years where authors label them "slow-burn progression" or some shit like that and basically just write filler. So what your left with is actually something far slower than tradition fantasy or sci-fi your trying to get away from. Its both hilarious and sad.
Yeah I've found this with the 'slice of life' branding too (which is a niche I enjoy if its done well, so its not like its an inherent weakness to the genre).
There's so many progression stories where they describe literally every single day of the protagonists life when there's no need to. Usually fucks up the sense of scale too because getting a fair bit stronger after 1500 pages is reasonable but that's often only like 3 months into the story because they paced it so slow.

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>>22846152
>b-but malazan is good and not simile bloated waffle!

>> No.22846205

>>22836830
>Doth thou
Dost thou**. est/'st is the second person singular verb ending.

>> No.22846208

>>22846164
I like this. I'm going to start saying it

>> No.22846211

>>22845197
stfu misogynist

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>>22845273
what's wrong with it

>> No.22846251

So which one would you prefer to live through, Kellhus-Ajokli's evil empire or the No-God's apocalypse?

>> No.22846313

>>22839661
>>22839668
Wise book gorilla, please cover:
Beware of Chicken
Memoirs of Your Local Small-time Villainess (Copypaste of The Villain Wants to Live?)
Deathworld Commando: Reborn
The Butcher of Gadobhra
The Laws of Cultivation: Qi = MC^2
Fodder (Royalroad)
12 Miles Below
Immortality Starts With Generosity
A Soldier Adrift: Captain Westeros
War Queen (Royalroad)
Worth the Candle

>> No.22846458

THE CANTED HORN HAS FALLEN. I REPEAT CANTED HORN DOWN

>> No.22846593

>that thread on reddit where the OP asked for conservative fantasy novels and got downvoted into oblivion and told all his favorite conservative books are really progressive and liberal and he's a nazi
What a goldmine kek
>inb4 go back
Yes yes I know

>> No.22846605

>>22846593
he called Goodkind a liberal

>> No.22846629

>>22846605
Like I said, a goldmine

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>>22846593
>nazis are just liberals but racist
At last I truly see.
Recommend me some chud books.

>> No.22846638

>>22845220
>>22845236
Daily life of bakkerfag

>> No.22846679

>>22839661
>Boring asian steampunk with a tarot magic system for card fags
It has more effort put on it than anything martin ever wrote lel

>> No.22846691

>>22846679
Ching cheng hanji
xiang shang xie zhou
Qin xiang lian na san shi er suinazhuang gao dangchao fu ma lang
Ta qi junwang a man huang shang na hui hun nan er zhao dong chuang

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>>22846636
>liberals but racist
>but

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>>22846593
>wanting to read mutt culture wars with a fantasy® veneer
pass

>> No.22846837

Just started Malazan. What am I in for /lit/ bros ??

>> No.22846856

>>22846837
pawgs, thick thighs, soft women bellies, femdom, reverse rape

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>>22846856

>> No.22846890
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22846890

Lord of the Mysteries 2 but complete and good

>> No.22846907

>>22846593
How would you define "politically conservative" fantasy?

>> No.22846913

>>22846907
Not pozzed

>> No.22846920

>>22846913
Define pozzed.

>> No.22846929

>>22836759
I... kind of like it? It's not better than the original but an interesting alternate take. Then again I'm only familiar with 40k through memes

>> No.22846933

>>22846920
HIV positive.

>> No.22846985

>>22846907
A work of fiction that respects the natural law.

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22846987

Picked up Sean Russel's "Initiate Brother" duology recently mostly because of how intriguing the premise of an Asian sword and sorcery book seemed. Thoughts on it?

>> No.22846991

What's the difference between asian sword and sorcery and wuxia or xianxia

>> No.22846994

>>22846172
>There's so many progression stories where they describe literally every single day of the protagonists life when there's no need to
Can confirm. Here's the four of the worst examples i can think of:
>https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/59589/varda-walk
>https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/56176/firebrand
>https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/58482/awakening-horde-shieldwall-academy-series
>https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57018/the-systemic-lands-dark-progressive-litrpg

>> No.22846996

>Akantsu, filled with fear of all who might seek to wrest the Empire from his grasp. Among those out of favor with the new liege is the Order of the Botahist Monks, whose mystical powers have enabled them to hold positions as Spiritual Advisers to the Imperial court for nearly ten centuries. But Emperor Akantsu fears none so greatly as he does Lord Shonto
These names, like the names in Shogun, piss me off.

>> No.22846998

>>22846985
>A work of fiction that respects the natural law.
Ah, so not fantasy.

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>>22846205
Alas, am I naught but the pride of a brief candle? 'Tis so visions of relume elude. See now how heavy the wind blows the woes of finality in these chambers. Come morn you shant see me here 'gain, nay, not until sun clad rogueries consume thee. Thou must learneth to weep so the widows wail is titter for these chiefest of sins. The pretty mercies will ever remember the dragoncoiled wand. Moons have me!

>> No.22847058

Anything good here?
https://www.thehugoawards.org/hugo-history/2023-hugo-awards/

>> No.22847070

I have been enjoying Jester of Apocalypse, book 1.

>> No.22847086

>>22846998
Of course, my fantasy book must have flying fantasy BBC creatures that impregnate men to truly be fantasy.

>> No.22847110

>>22847086
Bakker is that you?

>> No.22847112

>>22846991
Which formula they're copying.

>> No.22847122

Fantasy with graphic sex scenes?

>> No.22847141

>>22847122
Are you offering?

>> No.22847146

>>22846987
It's Zen Kino, Russel is an underrated author, his prose is very beautiful and he really knows about asian spirituality the pace is slow but not as slow as Tad Williams. overall it feels very familiar to a lot of fantasy from it's time but at the same time is a totally unique experience since there aren't many westerns authors who actually know about eastern philosophy (chinkslop readers need not apply)

>> No.22847147

>>22847141
No I want recommendations.

>> No.22847151

>>22847146
>the pace is slow but not as slow as Tad Williams.
That is a pretty low bar to get over. I'm pretty sure nobody (currently alive) writes slower paced stories than Tad Williams.

>> No.22847154

>>22847058
lol, no.

>> No.22847156

>>22847147
See>>22847058

>> No.22847167

>>22846907
Fantasy with Romantic influences. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vc_Nx4QUcjk

>> No.22847168

Smeagol im Smeagol

>> No.22847179

>>22847156
I mean hetero sex scenes, not whatever freakjobs are in those books.

>> No.22847208

>>22846996
>"To move within the form is not enough. You must become insubstantial. No one can kick the wind. No one can push water. It is of no value to make even the most perfect soft-fist if, at the moment of impact, you tighten the muscles. Chi is the source of all of your strength—direct it into your hand as it is needed. Remember that you hold a caterpillar in your curled fist. Its hairs tickle your palm.” The monk paused as a tiny, blue butterfly drifted by and settled on Shuyun’s shoulder. The instructor smiled. “I will demonstrate.”
>He took a step forward and reached out to Shuyun, gently removing the butterfly from his shoulder. Closing his hand over the insect, the instructor moved to the wooden gate that led into a walled garden. Pausing for a split second to take a stance, the monk suddenly drove his hand through one of the gate’s thick planks, which splintered and broke with a loud crack. Pivoting gracefully, Brother Sotura held his hand out to the class—a perfect soft-fist—and then released the butterfly, unharmed, into the air. All of the class knelt and touched their heads to the stones.

>> No.22847292

>>22847154
Sometimes I wonder if those awards were really prestigious at some points or if it always has been neopotism.

>> No.22847313

>>22847292
>I wonder if those awards were really prestigious at some points
of course they were you terminally-online zoomer stop gooning and read a little, they went to shit around 2001-3 everything before that is good

>> No.22847319

>>22847313
because at no point in history people have built fake legacies to sell books, right

>> No.22847328

Book sales aren't even real

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22847334

I finished 'a mote in god's eye' by Larry Niven and Jerry pournelli.

I had previously read only Ringworld by Larry Niven and gave it a 3/5. I'll go ahead and say I give this book a 4/5 and I will put the rest of the series tentatively on my list to be read
(pending further opinions on the series.)

Characters:
During the early parts of the novel there is a lottt of characters, it's not too bad but often it was hard to keep track, the point of view changes often as well. They are all reasonably fleshed out and most are likable. I'd say they are pretty good.

Story:
I enjoyed that they didn't linger on anything too long, and that they actually explored a first contact with aliens. Often times first contacts are skipped or the aliens are super advanced or very dumb. In this story the aliens are super advanced but they have an achieles heel in one area of technology that basically puts the two species on even ground. Pretty cool.

Spoiler review:
I really liked the motes and their background and 'cycles' is a cool concept and it revealed itself pretty well over time, it never felt forced that the humans not understand it yet or forced onto the reader to understand. I also think the caste system they operate under is cool. Anyways, I don't have many spoilers really.

So yeah, I have a better opinion of Larry Niven now but I'm unsure if it's Jerry's help that made me feel that way.

So any thoughts on the rest of the Mote series?

>> No.22847342

>>22847319
what browsing /pol/ 24/7 does to a mf

>> No.22847346

>>22847319
you faggots are as deranged as twitter woke whores

>> No.22847360

>>22847342
epic reddit post, wish i could upvote :DD

>> No.22847395

>>22847360
if you keep opening your mouth i will put MY COCK there just like kellhus

>> No.22847422

of course the newfag would be the bakkerposter

>> No.22847433

>>22847342
>>22847346
nice b8

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>>22847141

>> No.22847748

>>22846907
A few options:
>Fantasy which simply does not appear to pander to 2023 lib tastes and beliefs, no Netflix style tokenism, "think of the precious refugeerinos/faggerinos/blackerinos/etc." and so on.
Not an especially sound definition, but what 99% of people looking for "conservative fantasy" are probably looking for.
>Fantasy which actively espouses or glorifies conservative values to some degree. Could be respect for tradition and traditional social structures, rejection of lib narratives of progress, certain treatments of religion and faith, etc.
Somewhat more robust, though obviously what exactly qualifies will vary from person to person the same way people disagree on what genuine "progressive fantasy" is.

Both categories could obviously contain stuff that was progressive at time of publication, given how the lines have shifted.

>> No.22847825

>>22847748
So basically Lord of the Rings, Narnia, the bible etc.

>> No.22847857

>>22847748
>>Fantasy which simply does not appear to pander to 2023 lib tastes and beliefs
Why that specific year? What if it panders to 2018 libe tastes and beliefs? Is that okay?

>> No.22847867

>>22847748
I feel like your definitions are way too specific, and you seem like the kind of person who would exclude a fantasy book or series from being "conservative" if a single liberal person liked it.

>> No.22847878

https://www.brandonsanderson.com/state-of-the-sanderson-2023/

>> No.22847898

>>22847857
Actually it's current year + 8

>> No.22847942

>>22847939
>>22847939
>>22847939

>> No.22848074

>>22845290
No it's us Scifibros who need to separate from you.
>>22845322
Irrelevant
>>22845554
We sure would do better even with dead threads than sticking with pretentious peasants like you
>>22846164
Sci-fi is for people who know reality is awesome enough to tell stories, you just have to fast forward time. Fantasy is for dreamy little girls who don't care about what's real and not and just want to egotistically express their pseudo-imagination.
I confess at least their universe is based on the old european folklore. Maybe the only good thing in fantsy.
>>22846221
Those two genres actually have nothing in common. And even further, people can like one and not the other.

>> No.22848144

>>22848074
>We sure would do better even with dead threads
You guys couldn't even maintain that lol. See you when your sci-fi threads stop being posted bro, I promise I won't gloat too much.

>> No.22848150

>>22848074
>pretentious peasants
Talk about a confused insult. Is he acting above his station or acting like an uneducated rustic? Make up your mind!

>> No.22848191

>>22842770
I love his tales. The barrel of Amontillado is my favorite. Europeans love him because everything is european in him.

>> No.22848220

>>22848150
>thinks only upper-class people can be pretentious.
I pity you.

>> No.22848334

>>22848220
Yeah everybody knows those rural farmers are always putting on airs and acting all worldly. That's what people think of when they hear the word "peasant", after all, a guy who tries to pass himself off as sophisticated.

>> No.22848489

>>22847334
The sequel is really good, but skip the 3rd book. The earlier Pournelle CoDominium books are next on my list, I'll report back. Larry Niven's short stories are generally better than his novels, but Protector and World of Ptavs are solid