/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.22415302]

how would you describe a cat's eyes

[Anonymous No.22415313]

>>22415302
Weathery pits bearing unflections of its owner, the fictional literally (you) clicking away in front of the light, wet blinkpits blinking. Kys.

[Jon Kolner No.22415320]

>>22415302
Like two piles of shit in a barren dick.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=9uV_dAFONoA&pp=ygUSQmFyb24gcHJhc2lsIG1hcmNo

[Anonymous No.22415326]

>>22415313
what's wrong with you? why are you so negative?

[Anonymous No.22415328]

>>22415302
eyes of a cat

[Anonymous No.22415327]

>>22415320
>upvoted

[Jon Kolner No.22415331]

>>22415327

[Anonymous No.22415341]

>>22415302
The eyes of a snake

[Anonymous No.22415377]

>>22415326
The clicking and tiny ticking spazzed frantically and miss kitty's eyes showed now a twitch of being affected by her transgendered owner's meltthrough and the owner's selfhumming the starers glistened and inside the catskull a replay of a replay of owner mumbling about Ending it Wall: cat's whiskers astride, it looks at the door now now the door knob where the hunched owner is reflected hunched at owner's computer for yet another hour kitblinking hungrily it mrows. Screen lighting up owner's hormonally deflating face, owner's eyes backandforthing reading another thing on the light.

[Anonymous No.22415382]

>>22415331
What does this even mean
>>22415377
These are not even of the same color

[Anonymous No.22415386]

>>22415382
why would she wear the same color dress every day? lol are you actually a tranny

[Anonymous No.22415417]

>>22415302
cruel black diamonds floating in liquid jewels

[Anonymous No.22415518]

An azure sky of deepest summer.

[Anonymous No.22415759]

>>22415417
i like this

[Anonymous No.22415773]

>>22415302
Kitty eyes

>>22415313
>>22415377
Angry dork lol

[Anonymous No.22415784]

>>22415417
>>22415759
very cool, this would make me roll my eyes and if you do it again i'd drop your book

[Anonymous No.22415840]

>>22415784
multi tasking can be challenging, but you should be able to roll your eyes and hold a book at once

[Anonymous No.22415860]

>>22415302
They're just cat eyes. Everyone knows what they look like

[Anonymous No.22415918]

>>22415840
get him

[Anonymous No.22415944]

>>22415302
I wouldn't. One glance
for species identification and I immediately forget the fury little bastards existence.

[Anonymous No.22415976]

>>22415302
Pools of black sink into islands like the Caribbean sea, crisp yet somehow blurred, frantic yet focused. Devoid of all emotion except entitlement, as if possessed by an angelic demon.

[Anonymous No.22415988]

>>22415302
>>22415417
>>22415518
>>22415976
>Don’t use such an expression as “dim lands of peace.” It dulls the image. It mixes an abstraction with the concrete. It comes from the writer’s not realizing that the natural object is always the adequate symbol.

[Anonymous No.22416027]

>>22415302
Baudelaire has a few good poems about cats and I believe he describes the eyes in one

[Anonymous No.22416095]

Describe this hand in your best prose

[Anonymous No.22416099]

>>22416095
these are the hands of a faggot from /g/ shitposting on /lit/

[Anonymous No.22416135]

>>22416095
>She had an off-white pallor, like cheap butter left to molder in the back of a pantry, and her fingers resembled a doll's: a porcelain one. I could see her all dolled up in moth eaten lace. Her veins looked painted on. I brush my thumb over one to see if it'll smear. It doesn't, but she's cold as stone.

[Anonymous No.22416161]

>>22415302
Black ink through opal.
>>22416095
A bundle of slender blue-veined roots wrapped in tissue paper.

[Anonymous No.22416162]

>>22416095
My wife's hand

[sage No.22416168]

>>22415988
Where did this quote come from? I'd like to read more. Currently, I can't decide if I agree or not.

[sage No.22416173]

>>22416168
I mean what book/essay by the way. I know that is Ezra Pound.

[sage No.22416182]

>>22416095
The satin skin could have been lifted from the frame with pinched fingers.

[Anonymous No.22416199]

>>22415988
I apologize, I will review ABCs of Reading

[Anonymous No.22416224]

>>22416168
sorry for the late reply
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/articles/58900/a-few-donts-by-an-imagiste

[Anonymous No.22416248]

>>22415302
the petulant cat sat on the floor and stared at me. i just fed this thing two hours ago.

[Anonymous No.22416295]

>>22415302
When I saw this cat eyes, I got that feeling like, you know, our trip with my wife from Colorado to Texas for 4 hours. I didn't remember this path too much, just saw some places which mostly were too sunny and our road still was warm. I wasted a lot of money in this time, we drunk water and kissed with her, maybe in 9 am I stopped near a lake and it was gently greenish. Our road was almost adjacent to the water and my bare feet felt the heat from the asphalt well. I stood with my wife and looked deep into the lake for probably fifteen minutes, then we kissed again and drove on. Now, as it seemed to me, I saw two such places by the lake within the cat's muzzle.

[Anonymous No.22416320]

>>22415302
I would assume the reader has seen a cat before and refer to them directly: "cat's eyes"

[Anonymous No.22416385]

Catlike

[Anonymous No.22416392]

I have green eyes and my friend told me making eye contact with me is like looking at a cat

[Anonymous No.22416400]

>>22416392
u gay

[Anonymous No.22416405]

>>22416320
>>22416385
very nice, let the reader to the work.
in a way it can be even more immersive than trying to force a particular image on them

[Anonymous No.22416467]

>>22416400
No, I think my friend is gay

[Anonymous No.22416479]

>>22416467
it's not gay unless you meow while he fucks you

[Anonymous No.22416493]

>>22416479
What if I dont meow

[Anonymous No.22416502]

>>22416493
then it's just two dudes enjoying each others company

[Anonymous No.22416812]

>>22415988
Disagree
Kindly go fuck yourself

>>22416095
Her alabaster hand in mine felt soft and cold as a cloud. The faded teal of her veins and the light pink fingertips made it exotic, almost alien, and incredibly attractive.
I wanted to hold that hand for ever
and have her do lewd things to me with it and the rest of her bright marble body

>>22415302
The cat glared up at me with aquamarine eyes. Was it affection or annoyance? Hard to tell. I knew I had been a few minutes late to pour out his food.
He's only been with me for a couple weeks, yet already he demands a strict schedule with his incessant meowing and stratching at my counters
I can't deny those lovely eyes, though.

[Anonymous No.22416818]

>>22416392
You're cute :3

>>22416182
>>22416161
>>22416135
All based

[Anonymous No.22416825]

>>22415302
Cat-like

[Anonymous No.22416872]

>>22415302
---- Solaria ----
0802
June

Hers is black beyond belief, with eyes like fireflied lawn,
Reality friendly as ghosts go,

Beautiful and innocent as the best of design.

[Anonymous No.22416886]

>>22415302
balls

[Anonymous No.22416904]

>>22415302
sharp daggers that speak volumes. An unspeakable agreement of trust and comfort. Love gone to spoil.
Anxiously awaiting the promised affection of her man.
Incapable of speaking her mind but proudly displays her attitude and personality.
My life changed after I got a cat.

[Anonymous No.22416905]

the cat had unassuming almond shaped sockets but inside them burned the eyes of sauron.

[Anonymous No.22416909]

Describe this baby elephant with your best prose

[Anonymous No.22416920]

>>22416909
What a cutiepie
Prooh :DD

[Anonymous No.22417615]

>>22416904
I love how nigger cats are just shadows with eyes

[sage No.22417634]

>>22416224
All good! Thanks anon.

[Anonymous No.22417648]

>>22415302

should i get a cat? never owned a pet in my life

[Anonymous No.22418778]

>>22417648
>>>/an/

[Anonymous No.22418797]

>>22415302
The feline ocular apparatus possesses a distinctive allure, characterized by elliptical irises enveloped in a luminescent tapestry of chromatic hues. The eyes of a cat exhibit a liminal equilibrium between the predatory gaze and an enigmatic, contemplative depth. The pupils, iridescent in their variation from dilated to constricted states, serve as a visual symphony, orchestrating the interplay between light and shadow.

Such eyes, akin to polished gemstones, possess a phosphorescence that grants them a nocturnal prowess, facilitating the acquisition of ambrosial sustenance. They convey an aura of mysterious perspicuity, encapsulating both the creature's instinctual vigilance and its enigmatic coexistence within the human realm. Thus, a cat's eyes, much like the animal itself, are a paradoxical amalgamation of predatory prowess and inscrutable contemplation.

[Anonymous No.22418806]

>>22418797

[Anonymous No.22418811]

>>22416818
:3

[Anonymous No.22418883]

>>22418797
There ought to be some level of responsibility levied when using language. What the fuck, anon? Put down the thesaurus and stop fucking cats.

[Anonymous No.22418891]

>>22415302
In the soft moonlit glow of twilight, the cat's eyes gleamed like twin orbs of amethyst, capturing the very essence of the starlit heavens within their depths. Each blink unveiled a universe of secrets, as if the cosmos themselves had chosen to take residence in those iridescent pools. Veiled by velvety lashes, those eyes spoke tales of midnight rendezvous and whispered promises under a tapestry of constellations. With every shimmer and glint, they cast a spell, beckoning you to lose yourself in the labyrinthine mysteries they held, a captivating symphony of violet hues that danced between reality and the realm of dreams.

[Anonymous No.22418892]

>>22415302
Cat-like

[Anonymous No.22418997]

>>22418892
I entered the thread looking for this answer.