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22289890 No.22289890 [Reply] [Original]

Writers should give all of their locations and characters extremely vivid descriptions. I don’t want my imagination to have any wriggle room

>> No.22289910

Descriptions are just dead space to me because I can't visualize

>He had a _____ with _____ and a slight _____ _____. His _____ was _____ and he carried a _____ by his side like a _____. He looked across the _____ and saw, about _____ away, a _____ filled with _____.
Alright, got it. So what actually happened?

>> No.22289914

>>22289910
Sub-100 IQ post

>> No.22289923

>>22289910
He had a boner with his penis and a slight ball sack. His cum was concerning and he carried a dildo by his side like a wife. He looked across the schoolyard and saw, about an BBC away, a loli filled with curiosity.

>> No.22289947

>>22289890
congrats,you are an uncreative ignorant
you should stick with your capeshit movies

>> No.22289950

>>22289890
If he described them you wouldn't understand and if he didn't you wouldn't either. You're apparently too retarded to read and also lack imagination.

And you smoke. You shouldn't do that. It's bad for your health. And your top hat indicates you're some sort of goddam jew bankster

>> No.22289962
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22289962

>subvisualizing

>> No.22289966

>show don’t smell

>> No.22289969

Protagonist's personality should be bland enough to allow for self-insert

>> No.22289978
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22289978

Detailed descriptions of locations go straight into the memory hole as far as I'm concerned.
>it's a [big/small] room in a [nice/shit] place and it has [1/2/3/4] windows
That's all I'll remember and my imagination will generate the rest.

>> No.22289987

>>22289890
low t

>> No.22289992

This is now a 1990's era subs vs dubs thread

>> No.22290001

This is now a where the fuck did I put that glass I know I had it in the room how do you even lose a glass thread

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22290008

this is now a 4channel pass country club. if you’re not paying money to post you’re poor.

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22290024

this is now a henlo and how's ya doin' thread. i am fine also thank you

>> No.22290110

>>22289890
>vivid character descriptions
>imagine them totally differently anyway

>> No.22290620

>>22289910
>I can't visualize
NGMI

>> No.22291764

Here you go
>The surfaces of your room are slick with cum and other bodily fluids like the inside of a woman’s pussy, but you are not in a woman’s pussy because you are a homosexual man with severe aids, in fact this room is a padded cell and you are inside of it because you are severely mentally ill

>> No.22292112

>>22291764
>doesn't even mention the colour of the pads
0/10