/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.22040116]

You CAN'T criticize my poetry, it's about the palestinians!

[Anonymous No.22040121]

>>22040116
Kek

[Anonymous No.22040122]

>mfw imagining every bitching ethnic is back in their ethnic homeland, unable to speak english and forced to mind their own ethnic business

[Anonymous No.22040127]

>>22040116
>you can’t criticize mien führer
>he’s all about the purity of the white race!

[Anonymous No.22040176]

>>22040122
>>22040116
>defending Israel this hard
Ah, but fascists have to stick together

[Anonymous No.22040178]

>>22040116
Nice try Mossad, still gonna hate Jews though

[Anonymous No.22040199]

>>22040116
The title is stupid, as is "struggle" art in general, but the poem is fine.
Too bad for Palestinians, though. They've been cucked every inch of the way since 1947 and still are only able to complain and procreate. Imagine being born out of pure spite for the jew

[Anonymous No.22040214]

if the purpose is to rouse support for the palestinian cause it would have been better achieved through a straightforward essay rather than a stupid obtuse poem. and if the cause is so important you'd want to do the thing which is most useful

[Anonymous No.22040219]

>>22040116
how is it a poem if it doesn't rhyme?

[Anonymous No.22040231]

>>22040214
The purpose is to bitch and complain and get status over fellow undergrads by asserting dominance in the "who had the hardest life" Olympics, but because all of them live comfortable lives of middling mediocrity, it's the "who has the same passport/skin tone/sexuality as someone who had a hard life" Olympics.

That or this poem was written by a Zionist Jew to drum up contempt towards Palestinians so they can continue to murder them with impunity. Which is quite possible. You can't put anything past the New.

[Anonymous No.22040232]

Palestinians are faggots. Imagine begin BTFO'd by thin-wristed money grubbers. I still hate Israel though, so as much as I don't sympathize with these rats I'm not changing my mind. Mudslim enemy trash -> Subversive hand-rubbing trash. All should go into the bin, but in proper order.

[Anonymous No.22040235]

>>22040232
getting*

[Anonymous No.22040274]

>>22040116
>links flower imagery to death
>ends poem taking ownership of flowers
Kek, he wants to suicide bomb Jessica.

[Anonymous No.22040350]

>>22040116
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Hitler was right
About the international Jew.

[Anonymous No.22040358]

>>22040214
>rouse support for the palestinian cause

From whom? Author openly antagonizes white people/western society and America as the central theme of the poem. Who else is supposed to come to the rescue of the Palestinians? Her cause would be much better served by finding commonalities (such as we are ALL being fucked by Israel and the jews) rather than attacking people who aren't her enemy.

But oh wait this is for female "look at me I'm a beautiful strong victim" status, NOT actual protest.

[Anonymous No.22040368]

I don't understand why she says in one line her dad is dead, and in the next that he watches (present tense) Al Jazeera all day.

[Anonymous No.22040374]

>>22040219
poems are a white supremacy patriarchy that has to be deconstructed and liberated from the shackles of nazis

[Anonymous No.22040437]

>>22040176
Let's compromise and nuke them both.

[Anonymous No.22040456]

>>22040368
they have Al Jazeera in paradise

[Anonymous No.22040457]

It is actually a powerful poem. Jews seethe about Palestinians because it is the one issue they don't have a woke moral cause to hide behind. It is pure open evil.

[Anonymous No.22040464]

>>22040457
Nah they do open evil all the time, see: 9/11, and the vaccine.

[Anonymous No.22040467]

>>22040456
Allah watches it while being carried by the angels all day

[Anonymous No.22040471]

>>22040219
I would argue that poetry based on meter is superior to rhyme but OP is neither

[Anonymous No.22040509]

>>22040116
Filthy anti-semitic drivel.

[Anonymous No.22040756]

>>22040116
>He watches Al Jazeera all day
No idea why, but this cracks me up

[Anonymous No.22040781]

>>22040509
Define anti-semitic in a way that does not exclude non-Jews amongst the various tribes of Semites, and that makes sense in a modern context, and that makes sense in your post.

[Anonymous No.22040866]

>>22040457
>It is actually a powerful poem
Not in the way he intended though. It's confessional poetry but when all a person can do is speak in cliched ideological soundbites the confession that comes through is their own lack of insight and insecurity.

[Anonymous No.22040881]

>our political fuck ups are actually YOUR fault, kafir

[Anonymous No.22040884]

The art of the oppressed is nothing more than an expression of narcissism. This is true no matter what group they belong to.
If the goal is to convince you how important their suffering is, they must first believe themselves to be important in order to express it.

[Anonymous No.22040974]

>>22040219
*clocks you at the bodega*

[Anonymous No.22040981]

>dead children become daisies just seconds after dying
Is it too deep for me? Was I filtered?

[Anonymous No.22040983]

>>22040176
>be a total whiny angry bitch
>anyone who is put off by this is a zionist fascist
Just don't be so annoying next time.

[Anonymous No.22040991]

>People die everyday
>I must admit I have a suspicion your (sic) gay
>As much as I hate the money grabbing jew
>it would be easy to look the other way if they came for you
>Jessica is out there fucking Tyrone
>while you cry in your poems and jerk off alone

[Anonymous No.22041014]

>>22040231
First world people have the harder lives anyway. I wish I grew up around death and challenge. Those people know nothing about mastering oneself in the face of anomie, having no sense of purpose, no roots, being a commodity, having to find meaning in callous media.
All they have to do is survive, while we are expected to create the world for them.

[Anonymous No.22041063]

>>22041014
>boo fucking hoo I have to mentally masturbate until I jerk out a purpose
Book a ticket to Palestine/Donbass/Syria faggot

[Anonymous No.22041222]

>>22040116
The 'I know I'm American' line is immortal and hilarious. Such a trashy poem.

[Anonymous No.22041244]

>>22040116
I actually really like that poem. LXXXVIII.

[Anonymous No.22041278]

This is better

[Anonymous No.22041282]

>>22040457
It's crazy that the Jewish controlled media constantly condemns Israel for the Gaza thing. Is it some clever double bluff?

[Anonymous No.22041321]

>>22040199
>Imagine being born out of pure spite for the jew
Uhh.. based?

[Anonymous No.22041445]

>>22041282
Yeah unironically. They virtue signal about it in media knowing nothing will be done when they have a total chokehold over American politics at every level.

[Anonymous No.22042677]

>>22040983
>just don’t bother me with your peoples plight!
>things’ll totally get better…. For me.
Casual antisemitism that does nothing to get Israelis gestapos off these people’s backs is worse than useless, it’s detrimental.

[Anonymous No.22042712]

>>22040116
Fuck you writing poetry about it instead of doing something substantial.
Check and mate, shrill moralizers.

[Anonymous No.22042762]

>>22042712
>fuck you, poet! Go pick up a gun and stop making me think about the the world!
>god, I hate art!
Ugly poseur. You should leave the board.

[Anonymous No.22042890]

>>22040116
>You CAN'T criticize my poetry, it's about the palestinians!
Who are you quoting here?

That poem kinda sucks
Free Palestine btw

[Anonymous No.22042995]

>>22040116
Remove line breaks and it becomes something a 9 yo could write.
>I wish. I tell. I want. I pick. I write.
This reads like picrel

[Anonymous No.22043016]

>Palestinians don't see the moon from jail cells and prisons
>It's so beautiful, the moon

[Anonymous No.22043028]

>>22042762
>stop making me think about the the world!
She didn't, and that is the truth of all mindnumbingly banal moralizing art. It provides no further stimulation for thought than a 90 second news segment.
I love art. What is in the OP is not art. That is the point.

[Anonymous No.22043180]

>>22040974
*throws quesadilla at the wall*

[Anonymous No.22043226]

>>22042995
holy based kid

[Anonymous No.22043250]

>>22040116
this poem makes me question my antisemitism

[Anonymous No.22043286]

>>22040116
Why the fuck do people write poems that don't rhyme? Just write prose at that point. The printing press has destroyed the need for non-rhyming poems, as they can more easily be expressed via prose and do not need to be easily memorized for oral tradition anymore

[Anonymous No.22043294]

>>22040116
Every Palestinian woman I have ever met is one of the following three (sometime two at once:
1. An insufferable SJW who sees the U.S. and Israel as once country, so hates both equally while bitching about how the U.S. treats Blacks and Mexicans is “literally the exact same as how Israel treats us.”
2. Hot and rich, her dad owns a gas station or something and she dresses in gaudy designer clothes and she is “daddy’s little Palestinian princess” but usually he dresses in the same old Djellaba he’s owned since before Israel existed.
3. Devout muslim, anti-Semitic, surprised that Americans aren’t anti-semitic. Bonus points if they ask you to go to Friday prayers with their chill older brother and ask if you know much about Islam.
Unfortunately, there are tons of type 1 and not many type 3.

[Anonymous No.22043295]

>>22043286

Why the fuck
do people write poems
that don't rhyme?

Just write prose at that point.
The printing press has destroyed
the need for non-rhyming poems

[Anonymous No.22043557]

>>22043294
#1 is correct

[Anonymous No.22043566]

The poetry is bad. End of story.

[Anonymous No.22043577]

>>22043566
>>22043295
>potry hasta rhyme!

[Anonymous No.22043611]

>>22043577
I never said it had to rhyme. Most of my favourite poetry does not rhyme. This poem is just plain bad no matter how you slice it.

[Anonymous No.22043717]

>>22040116
>I know I'm American
It's pretty obvious to us too.

[Anonymous No.22043725]

>>22040116

[Anonymous No.22043828]

>>22043294
God help me to marry #3 and be a good husband inshallah

[Anonymous No.22044558]

>>22043294
>I have known of only three Palestinian women, one of which was Huma Abedin

My favorite is this hero. I hope she’s well

[Anonymous No.22044561]

>>22040116
Noor is right. The kikes are doing terrible things

[Anonymous No.22044606]

>>22043286
The measure is English heroic verse without rhyme, as that of Homer in Greek and of Virgil in Latin; rhyme being no necessary adjunct or true ornament of poem or good verse, in longer works especially, but the invention of a barbarous age, to set off wretched matter and lame meter; graced indeed since then by the use of some famous modern poets, carried away by custom, but much to their own vexation, hindrance, and constraint to express many things otherwise, and for the most part worse than else they would have expressed them. Not without cause therefore some both Italian and Spanish poets of prime note have rejected rhyme both in longer and shorter works, as have also long since our best English tragedies, as a thing of itself, to all judicious ears, trivial and of no true musical delight; which consists only in apt numbers, fit quantity of syllables, and the sense variously drawn out from one verse into another, not in the jingling of like endings, a fault avoided by the learned ancients both in poetry and all good oratory. This neglect then of rhyme so little is to be taken for a defect, though it may seem so perhaps to vulgar readers, that it rather is to be esteemed an example set, the first in English, of ancient liberty recovered to heroic poem from the troublesome and modern bondage of rhyming.

[Anonymous No.22044715]

Anglos BTFO

[Anonymous No.22044778]

>>22042677
I dont care about brown people problems. You can be in a devastating civil war that killed off 90% of your population, massive famines, natural disasters, under occupation from whatever local warlord or international company turning your shithole into a banana republic. I just don't care. Stop talking about your problems and go away.

[Anonymous No.22044783]

>>22040122
>ethnic

[Anonymous No.22044791]

>>22044715
We wuz poet kangs n shieet

[Anonymous No.22044793]

>>22040116
The last bits are quite strong. Fuck Israel. Free Palestine.

[Anonymous No.22044799]

>>22044778
>Stop talking about your problems and go away.
No. They will haunt you forever. Read the poem.

[Anonymous No.22044833]

>>22040122
Alright, fuck back off to England or Scotland or wherever.

[Anonymous No.22044841]

>>22044799
It's still not a good poem. The author is bitching not just about westerners apathy towards his peoples plight, but because people rightly called him out for being a mediocre poet. He thinks he can get accolades just because he writes about heavily politicized topics. Write good poetry and you'll get your praises, write garbage and you'll get called out.