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Hey lit, critique and read 5 chapters out of my new novel. (gonna be published on 1-1-12)

Ruthless trolls will be welcomed and loved.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MQuRkQku3igsqdp93F4DnM47Xoo02s7zfoDWEjshFKo/edit?hl=en_US

>> No.2180005

let's see

>> No.2180008

are you self-publishing it?

>> No.2180010

>>2180008
OP here

For now, yes, I thought as self-publishing revenue is much higher than general publishing, then it makes sense to me to begin with that, and if it is not particularly successful, I could then look for a real publisher.

>> No.2180018

I suppose this is worth bumping once.

Also if anyone is interested, here is the book's super-cheesy facebook page (icon made with incredibly mouse-skills)

http://www.facebook.com/KingdomSlayer

>> No.2180020

can you grant me access please?

>> No.2180021

>>2180001
>>2180001

hey dipshit, no one is going to read your novel if they need permission from you to look at the document.

>> No.2180024

>>2180021
You don't really need permission, you just need to copy and paste.

(but let me check again to make sure.)

>> No.2180037

baump

>> No.2180048

Not bad

>> No.2180053

I believe your chapter one title describes my sentiments best: NOPE

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"...the fearful figure, known to most by the name of Professor Chaos, decides to go downstairs and enjoy some delicious breakfastistries."

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>>2180066
Dude, I dressed as Professor chaos for Halloween.

>> No.2180153

I'm glad to hear your feedback on it, and also talking about butters, both will be accepted in this thread.

>> No.2180216

a lot of individuals have a hard time distinguishing what's important from what's trivial...hence they can't focus on the important.

like 1st year college freshman that don't realize that physics 101 is basically just 4 equations. Most kids think its 1000 equations they have to memorize

your writing suffers from this. you give detail on trivial things that corrupt the flow of the story

the positive: you're doing something and most successful people in life become successful by default; nobody else bothers to do anything