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[Anonymous No.21437636]

How do I write the prose for a sex scene for a porn novel?

[Anonymous No.21437639]

Write what you know

[Anonymous No.21437687]

Please make the guy a shy nerdy virgin who ejaculates too fast, it's my fetish

[Anonymous No.21437698]

Do it like James Joyce.

>My sweet little whorish Nora,

I did as you told me, you dirty little girl, and pulled myself off twice when I read your letter. I am delighted to see that you do like being fucked arseways. Yes, now I can remember that night when I fucked you for so long backwards. It was the dirtiest fucking I ever gave you, darling. My prick was stuck up in you for hours, fucking in and out under your upturned rump. I felt your fat sweaty buttocks under my belly and saw your flushed face and mad eyes. At every fuck I gave you your shameless tongue come bursting out through your lips and if I gave you a bigger stronger fuck than usual fat dirty farts came spluttering out of your backside. You had an arse full of farts that night, darling, and I fucked them out of you, big fat fellows, long windy ones, quick little merry cracks and a lot of tiny little naughty farties ending in a long gush from your hole. It is wonderful to fuck a farting woman when every fuck drives one out of her. I think I would know Nora’s fart anywhere. I think I could pick hers out in a roomful of farting women. It is a rather girlish noise not like the wet windy fart which I imagine fat wives have. It is sudden and dry and dirty like what a bold girl would let off in fun in a school dormitory at night. I hope Nora will let off no end of her farts in my face so that I may know their smell also.

You say when I go back you will suck me off and you want me to lick your cunt, you little depraved blackguard. I hope you will surprise me some time when I am asleep dressed, steal over me with a whore’s glow in your slumbrous eyes, gently undo button after button in the fly of my trousers and gently take out your lover’s fat mickey, lap it up in your moist mouth and suck away at it till it gets fatter and stiffer and comes off in your mouth. Sometime too I shall surprise you asleep, lift up your skirts and open your hot drawers gently, then lie down gently by you and begin to lick lazily round your bush. You will begin to stir uneasily then I will lick the lips of my darling’s cunt. You will begin to groan and grunt and sigh and fart with lust in your sleep. Then I will lick up faster and faster like a ravenous dog until your cunt is a mass of slime and your body wriggling wildly.

Goodnight, my little farting Nora, my dirty little fuckbird! There is one lovely word, darling, you have underlined to make me pull myself off better. Write me more about that and yourself, sweetly, dirtier, dirtier.

JIM

[Anonymous No.21437734]

>>21437698
Man, an epistolary porn novel might be interesting.

[Anonymous No.21437740]

Focus on physicality, the masculine form contrasting the feminime. Themes of domination, submission, surprises, spontaneity, conflict, anticipation etc. Make the actual sex last, don't conclude it too quickly, but don't underestmate buildup as well. However the non-sexual buildup should be as short as possible, and you should get into sexually charged situations as soon as possible. Also make the post-sex stuff short as well, no one's gonna read that shit.

t. jerks it more often to written porn than visual porn.

[Anonymous No.21437742]

>>21437639
I…uhhh…anon…

[Anonymous No.21437759]

Write about physical sensations and emotions. What's happening inside the heads of the characters is just as important as descriptions of what they're doing.

[Anonymous No.21437768]

>>21437698
I won't trust one sigh of anyone who dare to put this man on a high ground.

[Anonymous No.21437773]

>>21437636
When writing sex scenes there is no such things as an overuse of onamonapia.

[Anonymous No.21437782]

>>21437687
Just imagine how many foreskins bill gates has ripped off with his teeth and fingernails LOL

[Anonymous No.21437814]

>>21437636
Write it as if it were a combat scene in some action intrigue novel, or a fantasy novel. You need to view the process of sex as a battle/duet, giving each player their own distinct intention and bringing out eroticism from the mutual tension/desire. You can’t just dissolve the tension brought about by sexual intrigue as soon as they whip out their genitalia; they each need to retain and give in equal measure, not fully exhausting themselves until climax. Afterwards, they should be tentative towards each other, or experience some kind of epiphany.

[Anonymous No.21437852]

>>21437698
>till it gets fatter and stiffer and comes off in your mouth
>comes off
poor choice of words

also I fucking love how he just signs it 'jim'

[Anonymous No.21438045]

>>21437698
Is it degenerate that I actually like his sexual letters? I'm not into scat but the fact that Nora would shit and fart for her beloved is oddly romantic. The idea of prim and proper people being secretly filthy is also kind of hot??

[Anonymous No.21439004]

>>21437636
When writing, the focus, should be on the sensations felt by the two, and their inner monologues and thoughts during the act.
Many other forms of media are capable of displaying the physical act of sex with far more clarity than writing.
Physically describing it play-by-play is also difficult, owing to their only being so many synonyms for penis, vagina, and breasts, and a lot of them being exceedingly crude. One can attempt to convey meaning through metaphors and other such techniques, but that can often come off as too flowery and whimsical.
Where writing succeeds in allowing you to describe the things which each side is feeling and how they are feeling pleasured and enjoying the act. Leaving the physical aspects somewhat vague can also allow the reader to insert their own preferred elements into the events.
Also, you're writing a porn novel, so the consumer base is going to be women. Take that into account when considering how you write it up

[Anonymous No.21439405]

>>21437636
What is the purpose of the sex scene? If you know that you can figure out how to write it

[Anonymous No.21439582]

>>21437636
My brother, if you want honest advice, just say they fell into each other's arms over the bed and forgot the world for one sweet night.

[Anonymous No.21439597]

show don't tell

[Anonymous No.21439608]

>>21439582
>this is the most boring porn novel ever!!!

[Anonymous No.21440336]

He put his pants down and his massive rod flew out and smacked her in the face, she held that heavy sausage and began to suck on it, forcing every inch down her tight hole until her lips kissed his hairy sweaty balls.

There.

[Anonymous No.21440354]

>>21437636
By writing it.

[Anonymous No.21440420]

>>21437636
ChatGPT's attempt:

Write a 500 word description of the physical appearance of a penis plunging into a vagina

The penis was a long, cylindrical organ, with a smooth, fleshy texture and a slightly curved shape. It was a deep, reddish-pink color, and was covered with a thin layer of skin that was dotted with tiny bumps and ridges. As it entered the vagina, the penis was surrounded by the warm, moist folds of the labia, which parted and stretched to accommodate its size and shape. The vagina was a dark, pinkish-red color, and was lined with a layer of soft, delicate tissue that was lubricated by a clear, slippery fluid. As the penis moved deeper into the vagina, the tissues of the vagina stretched and expanded, forming a tight, snug fit around the shaft of the penis. The movement was slow and deliberate, with a gentle rocking and thrusting motion that was both rhythmic and sensual. The penis and the vagina moved together in perfect harmony, forming a seamless, synchronized connection that was both physical and emotional. The sensations were intense and pleasurable, with a rush of warmth and pleasure that radiated from the genitals and spread throughout the body. As the penis reached its full length, it was enveloped by the soft, warm embrace of the vagina, and the two organs became one. The sensation was one of complete and total union, with a feeling of deep, intimate connection that was both intimate and profound. Overall, the physical appearance of a penis plunging into a vagina was one of raw, primal energy and sensual pleasure, with a complex and beautiful interplay of colors, textures, and sensations that was both fascinating and mesmerizing. It was a reminder of the incredible power and beauty of human sexuality, and of the incredible, transformative potential of the human body. As the penis and vagina continued to move together, the sensations became more intense and more pleasurable. The penis throbbed and pulsed with a life of its own, and the vagina tightened and relaxed in response, creating a dynamic and ever-changing pattern of sensation and pleasure. The rhythm of their movement was slow and steady at first, but gradually increased in speed and intensity, as they both became more and more aroused and excited. The sounds of their breathing and the soft, wet noises of their bodies moving together filled the air, creating a sensual atmosphere. The tension and anticipation continued to build, and the sensations became almost overwhelming. The penis grew harder and thicker, and the vagina became more engorged and sensitive, as they both approached the peak of their arousal. And then, in a moment of pure, intense pleasure, they both reached the climax of their passion, and their bodies exploded in a powerful release of energy and emotion. The penis pulsed and spasmed, filling the vagina with its hot, sticky seed, and the vagina contracted and squeezed, sending waves of pleasure and satisfaction coursing through their bodies.

[Anonymous No.21440677]

this is a bit out there idea but have you considered reading porn novellas and then emulating the ones you like