/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.21231320]

Am I the next great American novelist?

[Anonymous No.21231323]

tl;dr please

[Anonymous No.21231359]

The use of the word “inexplicably” here is incredibly clumsy - and I’m not reading anymore, as the question has already been answered (no, you will never be a “great novelist”).

[Anonymous No.21231360]

>>21231320
It reads like the absolute state of philosophy in 2322.
I don't know why it was so entertaining.

[Anonymous No.21231361]

>>21231320
Please do not post ever again.

[Anonymous No.21231403]

Tuned out after the first line to be desu with you.

[Anonymous No.21232067]

>>21231320

[Anonymous No.21232115]

>>21231320
Boring Burroughs

[Anonymous No.21232119]

>>21231320
not even the next great /lit/ novelist

[Anonymous No.21232167]

>>21231320
tl;dr please

[Anonymous No.21232191]

>>21231320
It needs to be indented a bit for me

[Anonymous No.21232209]

>>21231320
i got bored after one sentence because i didnt understand anything

[Anonymous No.21232259]

>>21231320
>great American
nothing ever was great american, american is a definition of cheap plastic mediocracy

[Anonymous No.21232392]

>>21231320
This reads exactly like what some bipolar undergrad thinks is 'genius' (when they themselves write it). It's not horrible;
it's convoluted, try-hard trash though. Refine, write for a market that isn't your own ego, actually try and engage and entertain rather than prove what a soi-disant 'genius' you mistakenly believe yourself to be and maybe you'll write something someone will want to read. Don't listen to the few friends you have that compliment you, either. Oh, and learn a second language because you have a somewhat intuitive but technically deficient idea of grammar that may be corrected by being forced to understand how language actually works.

[Anonymous No.21232540]

>>21231320
No

[Anonymous No.21232546]

>>21231320
you're preoccupied with trying to sound like a writer instead of actually being one.