POETRY GENERAL

[Anonymous No.20858080]

POETRY GENERAL

Write some original poetry, or post some OC you've been sitting on for feedback.

[Anonymous No.20858215]

WHY IS EVERY SINGLE CHILD BETTER AT POETRY THAN ME

[Anonymous No.20858571]

I feel I need to work on the middle stanza quite a bit. Not sure what to address.

Inspiration

There are nights in Manhattan when the sky opens up:
Some odd nights that might flatten the long rugged landscape
In one blow to the core. All the avenues change shape
And the buildings make way for the clouds' breath that corrupts.

It's not often, but sometimes, even still, from heaven
Comes a bolt down the Hudson as winds through rain wind,
And one shudders, not having the heart to go blind,
And waits for the chance to arise once again.

Many a strong gust has shaken the rooftops
Just for a moment and come to a rough stop
With an untimely grace.

Many a fury has passed overhead
Of the misfortunate and the misled
Without leaving a trace.

[Anonymous No.20858627]

>>20858571
>https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCN2nRnDk8c0enzoyEBoE3UA/videos

read the first line
<dang lol put your panties to the side.

[Anonymous No.20858633]

There is no science in her life
She is vulnerable throat in a throng of red
bled stained predator fangs

[Anonymous No.20858637]

>>20858215
gonna clean that up for me brother?

[Anonymous No.20858727]

Im in my dirty room
there's mold on the walls
in the shape of animals and sex
and i can feel the wind through the cracks

lou reed is playing on the computer
singing about heroin
and the sun is coming up, like a crashed ghost ship
the piss bottles are deflating

i can smell my father smoking in the other room
this day will be the same as the last
my legs are tired and my back aches
i have been laying here for a thousand years