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Should I break it up with "He drinks more vodka" and "He ashes his cigarette," etc. or just have one giant paragraph?

I think it may be funnier to just have an enormous run-on sentence for the entire page.

If I only write the dialogue, the actors would know to improvise some physical movements in between, right?