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Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:39:15 2011 No.1986624 [Reply] [Original]

What do you think? pic unrelated.

>It was broken words that she said to me;
>“My blood runs deep why won’t you let it bleed?”
>The peoples crown lays at my feet;
>A dumb animal trying to crawl.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:39:15 2011 No.1986625 >Steelers fans

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:41:15 2011 No.1986627 >has worked at sams club I bet she's so proud.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:42:15 2011 No.1986629 >post an image more interesting than post content You should know better.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:43:15 2011 No.1986633 >>1986627 And she studied at the carrer training acdemy. He parents must be so proud.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:43:15 2011 No.1986635 >>1986629 I should -- was hoping for traffic.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:46:15 2011 No.1986640 Is that picture real?

>>	Dr. Seussicide (SLAF) Thu Aug 4 15:48:15 2011 No.1986645 File: 12 KB, 240x200, ladysovsaywhat.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >That image Also, what you wrote is pretty bland and sounds like something the girl in the picture would write.

Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:50:15 2011 No.1986648

I HATE EVERYONE WHO CANNOT USE A SEMI-COLON PROPERLY YET STILL FUCKING CONTINUES TO USE THEM. YOU STUPID WHORES. THEY CONNECT FUCKING COMPLETE, RELATED SENTENCES. A DUMB ANIMAL TRYING TO CRAWL IS NOT A FUCKING COMPLETE SENTENCE. BOTH OF YOUR RETARDED FUCKING SEMI-COLONS WOULD BE BETTER SUITED AS COLONS.

OR BETTER FUCKING YET, JUST DELETE THIS SHIT BECAUSE IT MAKES NO FUCKING SENSE AND IS A SHITTY POEM. SO YOU DON'T WHINE SO HARD YOUR EYES SINK INTO YOUR SKULL, CRUSHING BONES AND EVENTUALLY FALLING OUT OF YOUR BAWWING MOUTH, I'LL TELL YOU WHY, AS WELL.

Your ideas are very unconnected and that leads to insensible, loose writing which is not a pleasure for anyone to read. You also use horribly unoriginal language and incomplete/shallow metaphors. This poem is shit and if it's the best you can do there is nothing to be done to help you.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 15:54:15 2011 No.1986656 >>1986640 Of course it is. I find it hard to believe that someone on 4chan hasn't seen the shit-fuck load of collages of cunty retards on facebook all saying that Japan deserved the earthquake as pay-back for Pearl Harbor. It was kind of a big deal.

>>	Pointman Thu Aug 4 15:55:00 2011 No.1986657 File: 12 KB, 200x300, 1312487733941.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] OP, I'm going to be honest... I'm hating that use of a semi-colon. Also > "My blood runs deep; why won't you let it bleed?"

>>	Pointman Thu Aug 4 15:56:15 2011 No.1986659 File: 43 KB, 320x320, 1307663470675.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] OP, I'm going to be honest... I'm hating that use of a semi-colon. Also, > "My blood runs deep; why won't you let it bleed?"

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:24:15 2011 No.1986710 >>1986624 I cant get over how retarded this is as a piece of writing. Complete drivel. Just meaningless. It means NOTHING

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:26:15 2011 No.1986717 >>1986656 >someone on 4chan >hasn't seen It's called a newfag

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:28:15 2011 No.1986723 File: 195 KB, 500x263, 9827428439-2834-.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Poetry better than the OP's general? Here I go: Blargle blargle I'm so dumb But still better than the OP

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:30:15 2011 No.1986730 > startings arguments on facebooks Dont do this guys, seriously.

>>	Dr. Seussicide (SLAF) Thu Aug 4 16:33:15 2011 No.1986740 File: 79 KB, 441x485, ladysovfuckyou.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>1986717 >uses the term newfag. I'm not the guy you're refering to, but seriously. Fuck off.

Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:41:56 2011 No.1986772
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>>1986640

Here's another one.

I know it's immature, but Seminole always makes me snigger. Also, the Facebook twat is so fucking boss-eyed I can't tell if he was looking at the camera, or scoping out some fat woman to the left.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:49:15 2011 No.1986797 File: 74 KB, 500x540, 283990_253372821355695_225856587440652_1074085_5568535_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Fuck poetry, I demand more Pearl Harbor karma posts.

>>	Mad Scientist Hououin Kyouma !/mnJQs7QaU Thu Aug 4 16:52:15 2011 No.1986802 People like her actually exist? NATURAL SELECTION BLOODY WHEN!?!?!?!?!

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:53:15 2011 No.1986805 >>1986802 Billions and billions of them, my friend.

>>	Mad Scientist Hououin Kyouma !/mnJQs7QaU Thu Aug 4 16:54:15 2011 No.1986809 File: 74 KB, 359x1000, Yotsuba_by_Morcegou.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>1986805 Pic very related. Social networking, the cancer of the internet.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:56:15 2011 No.1986815 The worst thing is, I would definitely fuck Alexis Radovitch. I love those chubby blondes, and I don't care much about politics, pearl harbour or japanese people tbh.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 16:57:15 2011 No.1986817 File: 498 KB, 880x3892, tsunami_compilation.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>1986815 What about this posse?

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 17:01:15 2011 No.1986822 File: 52 KB, 547x384, tsunami_reponse3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What is it with Florida and hatin' on the Japan-man?

>>	Dr. Seussicide (SLAF) Thu Aug 4 17:01:15 2011 No.1986825 File: 73 KB, 635x423, ladysovwoah.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] The funny thing is, they are screaming karma. What the fuck is going to happen to America for Hiroshima and Nagasaki?

>>	Mad Scientist Hououin Kyouma !/mnJQs7QaU Thu Aug 4 17:03:15 2011 No.1986828 File: 108 KB, 320x240, tumblr_lp5xjqBLQW1qk2omx.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>1986817 Then, I wish Cancer on all those folk.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 17:06:15 2011 No.1986840 >>1986817 I didn't know americans are so butthurt over pearl harbour...in comparison to other battles in ww2 not that many people died

>>	poweroffacing !!XH7uIQnxMO2 Thu Aug 4 17:08:15 2011 No.1986845 File: 59 KB, 770x1024, leonardo_dicaprio_teenager.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm confused. Do these people actually think karma applies to a national collective rather than individual people?

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 17:08:15 2011 No.1986846 >>1986825 Most are what comes around goes around. Do American schools actually teach the fact they nuked Japan, and these people are just ignant, or is it one of those "we don't talk about" subjects?

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 17:10:05 2011 No.1986852 >>1986840 Americans aren't butthurt over Pearl Harbor, but if they were it would be more about the sneak-attack aspect than the death toll. >mfw I try to think of a time when Japan was discussed favorably in a high school history book

Anonymous Thu Aug 4 17:12:15 2011 No.1986855

>>1986846
Of course we teach it. And we say that many people disagreed with the action as well, because of all the civilian deaths. The ultimate reason given is that, due to Japan's tenacity, a ground invasion would lead to many more casualties than the actual bombing. I think that's true, but I still don't know how I feel about Hiroshima and Nagasaki.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 17:23:15 2011 No.1986876 >>1986846 No, most everyone in america knows about, and is very proud of, the fact that america dropped the a-bombs, and see it as "necessary to ending the war" or "saving millions of lives" or "what the gooks deserved"

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 18:58:15 2011 No.1987068 I don't get this Japan karma stuff. I'm pretty sure we got payback when we dismantled their entire empire, nuked two of their cities, and made them sign a peace accord stating that the emperor was not the son of Amaterasu.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 19:00:15 2011 No.1987072 >>1987068 There is retribution, and then their is plain being a dick. What America did was the latter.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 19:03:15 2011 No.1987086 >>1987072 I'll give you the bombings, but we needed that empire done for and international recognition that the emperor is divine could only lead to trouble.

Anonymous Thu Aug 4 19:06:15 2011 No.1987096

>>1987068
Only uneducated white trash could honestly think that.

Japan made a military attack on a military instillation. America nuked and firebombed women and children.

Its kind of how everyone loves to bring up concentration camps, but not Dresden.

When the losers kill, its murder. When the winners do, its a causality of war.

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 19:08:15 2011 No.1987101 >>1987096 casualty, not causality* derp

>>	Anonymous Thu Aug 4 19:12:15 2011 No.1987117 >>1987096 All I was saying is that Japan doesn't have an bad karma coming their way after all the stuff we did to them. Japan was swallowed by a tsunami because it's the most geologically unstable place on Earth.

Anonymous Thu Aug 4 19:27:15 2011 No.1987174

>>1987096
Excusing Japan just because PH was a military base is just lol. I guess that makes all the shit they did in the Philippines alright as well, huh? Hey, just as long as it's against enlisted men and not women and children surprise attacks and war atrocities are a-ok!

Besides, I'm sure Germany and Korea are plenty envious of how things turned out in post-war terms for Japan considering what the Soviet Union had planned for them. So you can take your apologist attitide and fuck right off, thanks.

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