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Anonymous Sat, Jan 22, 2022 15:16:33 No.19791859 [Reply] [Original]

>tfw cant write to audience

this is feedback on my freelancing

The poem you wrote is fascinating, you are truly talented!
I'll approve it for sure, but I can't replace the intro with this poem. it doesn't convey all the details in the original text in a clear way, and these details are important for the plot. I will try to find a place for it in the book.

I think your talent is more suitable for creating poetry, this is a short poem in the book you can apply your magic on. perhaps we can work on it next?

Thanks again, have a nice weekend!

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 22, 2022 15:32:35 No.19791933 File: 107 KB, 500x637, 1630425491202.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>19791859 >pic I choose the fifth way

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 22, 2022 19:53:08 No.19793031 >>19791933 This man knows the truth, we will find a way out of this suffering brother

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