Anyone want to review my Gang Weed Joker screenplay?

[Anonymous No.19721042]

https://www.scribd.com/document/551280851/Unfiltered

[Anonymous No.19721060]

I'm not clicking that.

[Anonymous No.19721081]

>>19721060

[Anonymous No.19721210]

>>19721042
What the fuck is wrong with you lmao

[Anonymous No.19721224]

>>19721210
too based to live

[Anonymous No.19721804]

>>19721042
I meant to post something in the last thread you made about it, but I never got around to it. I found it a very fun read, and my mind has returned to it often since. The dialogue is top notch and most of the gags landed for me, though that might be because I've always been a faggot who loves all things theatrical and unironically loves Oscar Wilde. If I recall correctly, you mentioned that you were emulating the style of one act plays, and though I'm not super familiar with the medium, I could notice the resemblance. There's a real sense of polish with this, and everything feels like it's been made to flow well; I found myself reading the whole thing, and I don't usually read screenplays in one sitting. I could really feel the whole thing come to life in my head, which is a bit of a shame, because I can't imagine anyone actually adapting it properly, as I believe you mentioning in the last thread. All in all, I found it to be witty and well written, with a great pace and sense of humour, and I hope you post more stuff like it on here

[Anonymous No.19721868]

>>19721042
Is this the same script that was posted in /co/ a couple of weeks ago? Based.