Poetry Thread

[Anonymous No.19474038]

Try something new edition.
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[Anonymous No.19474046]

trying something new:

living like shit,
tortured my stomach
as it rumbles
digesting some fast food (in me belly).
either i'm watching some chick's onlyfans
or glued to the news on the telly...

that's the way it goes these days
but hey, at least i'm not shoving coke up me nose
(oh wait!)
getting paranoid the vaccines have us mind controlled.

[Anonymous No.19474236]

Running in a crowd,
In a faceless town,
I need to feel the touch of a friend.
In the countryside,
I wander far and wide.
The isolation gets me again.

I don't know where to go
When I feel like crying,
"Oh my!"
It's time to open myself,
Do something new,
I want to stop and grow up a bit.

Then suddenly, my power and confidence start swelling up,
Magically erupt.
And it's all because of the kindness that I feel
From people I don't even know.

Then suddenly, my intuition and my wisdom grow,
And then I know
That most of all I sense compassion's real
Thanks to strangers wherever I go.
Thank you for waking me up!

Until now, how many times I've tried
to tell you "please take care of yourself".
Then with tear-stained eyes, I sadly said "Good-bye"
as I waved and wished you "Farewell".

Then I think of how
how much longer I must wait.
I look inside myself,
And feel something new,
I want to stop and grow up a bit

It's all because, I'm feeling sad
and then I cry, I don't know why
The courage that I need, the power to succeed
Gives me the strength to fly

It's all because of when I see my friends, oh my
Every time,
They're always behind me pushing me on,
lighting the fire in me,

Then suddenly, my power and confidence start swelling up,
Magically erupt.
And it's all because of the kindness that I feel
From people I don't even know.

I won't forget, the times we shared on those pleasant days,
Always.
And I'll never lose the strength to succeed,
The courage to do what I must.
Your smile makes my heart explode!

[Anonymous No.19475044]

LITTLE ALBERT COULD NOT SEE
BECAUSE LITTLE ARBERT COULD NOT READ
AND ON THE SKY
AND DOWN ON EARTH
THERE WOULD NEVER BE A BETTER VERSE
THAN A CREEK THAT RUSH
SWAM THROUGH BRUSH
A TITLE A WORD
OF NATURE SHUSHED
CLEAN AND EMPTY
ALBERT SAT
IN A GRAVE POINTLESS AND EMPTY
WITH A GRAIN THAT TURNED TO DUST
AND SO WE SEE
A MAN WHO DIED
WITH NO ONE THERE
TO MOURN AND CRY

[Anonymous No.19475050]

Kill them all
That is all

[Anonymous No.19475404]

>>19474038
The question

Know

The answer

YES
>>19474046
nice blogpost
>>19475044
>>19474236
To long did not read
>>19475050
It kills them all
When they hit the wall
That is all

[Anonymous No.19475472]

>>19475404
>nice blogpost
thank you!!!
was just trying something new, some of these poems so dull make my face go blue. achoo. got the wuhan flu. get jiggy with it i can dance, you can too.

[Anonymous No.19475499]

>>19474038
So

They cum and go
These hoes

And yea, i'm sore

But another whore
Ups my score

>>19475404
my rates

[Anonymous No.19475698]

>>19474038
Yesterday
I fucked and sucked
with Chuck.

But now
with Sneed
all I do
is feed and seed.

[Anonymous No.19476125]

HEY YOU! LET'S GET THIS THREAD GOING PROPERLY

Here's a fun group project - how about everyone does a little poem about one of the 20-something tarot cards?

Should be fun.

[Anonymous No.19476143]

I wrote this for a model I fucked for a while after I split with my wife of 16 years. Such a damaged girl, suffered abuse as a child. I hope she’s ok wherever she is now.

Alight upon my arm, little bird
That I may gaze upon thy plumage
And if in time you must depart
And claws leave scars upon thy flight
Still I will trace the furrows fondly
On sinewed forearm gray.

[Anonymous No.19476411]

>>19476143
>I wrote this for a model I fucked for a while after I split with my wife of 16 years
Your way too old to be here.

[Anonymous No.19476811]

[Anonymous No.19476835]

>>19476811
checked
good, anon, I see some talent here
I really love
>fading in whatever way it is we fade from the world
and this image right here
>cast out beyond darkness into that vast unbroken commonage of space and time
this brings the exact feeling I had when I was younger and had these strange dreams of memories from my life somehow unfolding on an endless canvas of white blank spacetime
it feels inviting in a way, but also incredibly lonely
I'm not entirely sure you need the "keep going to fuck" bit, for me it took away some of the energy of the piece
other than that I think with some editing and switching out some more cliched imagery (and expanding some imagery like the faher, husband, citizen, it feels like there ought to be more definitions of 'you' there) you're on to something really nice

[Anonymous No.19476851]

>>19476411
>Your way too old to be here.
You've got it all wrong, newfriend.
1) there are a lot more olderfags here than you know
2) that guy, and all the other olderfags, have EARNED their right to be here. they've sown their wild oats, had careers, married, maybe had families, contributed to society, so if they want to fuck around here, they're certainly entitled.
Know who shouldn't be here?
Kids like you.
Why aren't you out establishing a career, finding a mate, starting a family, contributing to society -- I'll tell you why, because you're wasting your days here, shitposting in a place you imagine to be full of your peers, your online "friends" and compatriots, but which is, in fact, full of people who are complete strangers to you. And many are decades older.

If this place vanished tomorrow, they'd still have their careers, relationships, maybe kids, reputations, accomplishments, experience, and wisdom.
But what would you have?

[Anonymous No.19476867]

>>19476851
christ. old people on 4chan are really embarrassing.

[Anonymous No.19476871]

>>19476867
cringe retard

[Anonymous No.19476876]

>>19476871
yr using it wrong

[Anonymous No.19476882]

what happened to
us?
automatic and fake it seems
might be my juice
run dry
no dreams
is that hidden fear I feel?
redemptive memes
as means
to what ends?
the ride to lands
of the Promised

[Anonymous No.19476892]

>>19476882
>to what ends?
>the ride to lands
>of the Promised, my friends.

[Anonymous No.19476897]

>>19476876
I'm sorry, I meant
you'll never be a woman
you're critically retarded if you think age matters at all here
t. 20-something year old

[Anonymous No.19476913]

>>19476897
proper weirdo

[Anonymous No.19477021]

>>19476867
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