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1930364 No.1930364 [Reply] [Original]

Does anyone want to read my poem lit?
If not I won't post ;_;

>> No.1930368
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1930368

that is one short fucking poem

>> No.1930367

It better be short. I ain't reading long crap.

>> No.1930371

depends on which poets and works you draw the most influence from

or just post it

>> No.1930373

This land has no equal
These shores hold no evil
The birds and the waves, the salt and the sand
I will long for the day when I may come here again
Morning fog as it is called in
Colorful streams show the beauty withitn
Patrol flies over in rhythmical swings
Young men swim with they boards they bring
Waves crash loud like mortar fire
Men who wear hats make wonderful liars
The testosterone sinks into the beaches
Mother nature falls down and beseeches
The boats cut through with the powerful waves
Under the foreign sun they bathe
Tribal dances, mud covered bodies
Thus begins the midnight follies
Ravenous locals slay the beast
with trained precision, then we may feast
Now I may return to nothing at home
And wait in the dark confused and alone

Guess what movie it's about...

>> No.1930379

>>1930373
tl;dr

>> No.1930380

>>1930373
It's about Wilson from Cast Away, isn't it.

>> No.1930381

>>1930373
It's more so song lyrics, but I feel it is poetic.

>> No.1930384

>>1930380
Noooo....

>> No.1930392

>>1930373

I don't give a shit what movie it's about, it's awful and you should feel like shit for ever thinking this was acceptable. eat a gun.

>> No.1930393

>>1930392
;_;
ok

>> No.1930395
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1930395

>>1930384
No man it's totally about Castaway he's laying on the beach hallucinating all the people talking to Wilson about it.


I HAVE MADE FIRE!

>> No.1930396

>>1930373

Breakin' 2: Electric Boogaloo

>> No.1930398

>>1930396
>>1930395
NOPE

>> No.1930400

>>1930395
That movie was the best advert for FedEx I have ever seen.

>> No.1930403
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1930403

>>1930398
Dude, I don't see what's so hard to understand about this, it's about fucking Castaway man. This poem is all about Castaway, you don't even get it.

>> No.1930420

>>1930403
I WROTE THE DAMN THING I WOULD KNOW WHAT MOVIE IT'S BASED ON

>> No.1930423

>>1930420
>Authorial intent
Death of the Author, get with the times faggot.

>> No.1930426

>>1930423
WATISTHISIDON'TEVEN

>> No.1930427
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1930427

i'm with behemoth: it's definitely about castaway.

>> No.1930430

>>1930427
GET OUT OF MY THREAD. NOW.

>> No.1930437
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1930437

>>1930430
don't be hater.

>> No.1930441

FINE. IT'S ABOUT APOCALYPSE NOW.
HAPPY?

>> No.1930442

Shut your fucking shitstain excuse for a mouth. Your opinions actually reduce the value of human life.

You fucking repulse me, you are like a smear of excrement under my nose, and I would be rid of you rather than I would cure AIDS.

Because if I cured AIDS, it may extend your wretched life, and I may be forced to more of this. So to summarise, why don't you fuck off and die. Of AIDS.

>> No.1930443
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1930443

why would you write a poem about Castaway?
that movie was kinda forgettable, what was even in that Fedex Package in the end?

>> No.1930444

I don't need your blatant Castaway advertising, OP.

>> No.1930452
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>>1930441
sorry, you're wrong. it's about castaway.

>> No.1930453

>>1930443
ITS A GREAT MOVIE YOU IDIOT. AND IT ISN'T ABOUT CAST AWAY

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>>1930453
>>1930453

>AND IT ISN'T ABOUT CAST AWAY

you sure?
seems like it fucking is

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1930461

>>1930457

>> No.1930463

>>1930457
Where's that Tao Lin book you dirty cheapskate?

>> No.1930467

it is interesting that someone would write a poem about castaway. that would not be my first subject of choice. of course, writing a poem about a movie would never be my first choice, but hey, that is just me.

>> No.1930482

>>1930467
>why.jpg
;_;

>> No.1930484

Considering that "Castaway" was a screenplay adaptation of "Enoch Arden" by Alfred Lord Tennyson, I think OP can write a poem that seems like "Castaway" to a bunch of ignorami.

Oh, hey Brownbear! My wrist is itching at the thought of your posterior. When are we getting together?

>> No.1930485

>>1930482
to what are you referring?

>> No.1930486

>>1930484
did your penis size grow when you wrote this?

>> No.1930491

>>1930485
My sad heart.

>> No.1930498

>>1930491
why so blue, panda bear?

>> No.1930503

>>1930491
No one likes my poem.

>> No.1930521

>>1930503
um, well, yeah, but everyone writes poems that other people don't like. i wrote some shitty ass ones before. god did they suck. i mean, yours is a fucking literary work of art compared to the diarrhea that i produced.

>> No.1930523

>>1930521
You like it?

>> No.1930530

>>1930523
didn't say that. i just said it was better than stuff i've written.

>> No.1930536

>>1930530
;_; i knew you didn't

>> No.1930540

>>1930536
quit being so sensitive. drink more.

>> No.1930566

>>1930540
Can't. I'm 17. And my girlfriend won't let me.

>> No.1930572

>>1930566
i have an idea for you: take back your testicles. your girlfriend probably has them in her purse.

>> No.1930574

>>1930566
Kill your old lady, who the fuck needs her. You're your own independent man, taking what he wants and maiming anyone who gets in his way. That's what being a writer is.

>> No.1930576

>>1930572
It only makes sense. She said i can when she turns 21 (2 years)

>> No.1930582

>>1930574
>Kill your old lady
>old lady
He's 17, not 40 and married.

>You're your own independent man
How the fuck would you know.

>taking what he wants and maiming anyone who gets in his way.
Ridiculous "motivational" tripe.

>That's what being a writer is.
How the fuck would you know.

>> No.1930585

>>1930566
whatta fuckin' fag dem nigga iz
hope jo ain't srious

>> No.1930592

equal and evil doesn't rhyme soz bro
p.s. try to keep your meter constant through the poem

>> No.1930600

>>1930592
It's actually song lyrics.

>> No.1932261

bump