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http://suchasviolence.tumblr.com/

this is my tumblr where i post all my writing...i'd appreciate some feedback please :)

>> No.1902708

Based on the image you have chosen, I wouldn't touch your blog with a ten-foot pole.

>> No.1902712

Your writing reminds me of "Through a Black Hole Cemented".

>> No.1902713

>>1902708

well, other than harry potter series, it's my favorite book, but whatever

>> No.1902721

>>1902713

What is it about?

>> No.1902724

>>1902713
Get. Out. How old are you, twelve?

>> No.1902726

>>1902713
>harry potter
troll, or 15 year old? YOU DECIDE

>> No.1902727

>>1902724

19...

>> No.1902729

I actually clicked the link despite you picking a bad book picture.

> Like violence, you have me.
>mfw you title your tumblr after blink 182 lyrics.

I stopped reading there.

>> No.1902733

>>1902729

Confirmed for angsty 15yo.

>> No.1902737

>>1902733

god damnit, i'm 19

>> No.1902740

>Derping around /lit/.
>Find post and visit blog.
>WALL OF TEXT IN MY FACE
>FUUUUUUU

OP, get a better layout, for fuck's sake.

Also, your writing seems to be down there with Through a Black Hole Cemented and The Eye of Argon. Do not want, OP. Do. Not. Want.

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>>1902700

OP why didnt you choose a smaller font?

Its fucking unreadable.

>> No.1902748

>>1902740

never heard of them

>> No.1902751

If you want to read the awful crap you are being compared to go here.

http://pdfcast.org/pdf/through-a-black-hole-cemented

>> No.1902753
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1902753

Pic is OP. Her description of herself on her other blog:

>katie (noun): 1. nineteen. 2. mother. 3. nerd. 4. one who possesses a habit to flip the fuck out on occasion. 5. one who becomes excited over seemingly trivial things. 6. one who swears very often, favoring the curse "fuck". 7. one who tends to become obsessed with something new every day. 8. one who is in love with each person she has ever met in some way, shape or form. see also: entire tumblr page.
>synonyms: awesome.

....
I'd tap that, after taping her mouth shut.

>> No.1902755

>>1902737

If you are 19 you are still a baby at heart if you title your shit after emo-pop lyrics.

>> No.1902757

>>1902753

Teenage mom? Confirmed for retard. Just leave now.. please.

>> No.1902759

>>1902753

> 3. nerd

oh god my laughing tears are acid

>> No.1902760

>>1902753
what does this have to do with the writing though

you guys are such aspies it's ridiculous

>> No.1902761

hahaha teen mom...this shit is funny.

oh, and the writing sucks dick

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>>1902760

>first time on /lit/
>expecting everyone agrees with her shitty blog

mfw

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1902769

Looks like a slut.

>> No.1902767

>>1902760

hmm...what does the writer have to do with the writing? probably nothing

>> No.1902771

>>1902753

Sounds like a great lay.

>> No.1902776

>>1902760
> implying you don't have to know the author to fully understand his/her work.

>> No.1902777

>>1902760

I'm reading it. but knowing the face behind the writing just gives the writing a whole new dimension.

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>>1902767
shouldn't writing be judged on its content

at least that's the response i keep getting when i post this image

>> No.1902780

>>1902777

trips mofo.

the font is aweful. I would read it though. But its really unreadable

>> No.1902782

>>1902767
We've already established that her writing sucks and her blog is almost unreadable. Since she didn't ask for concrit or suggestions,(only plain feedback) the rest of this thread may be used to poke fun at her, troll, and ask her for pictures of her tits.

OP, we gave you feedback. Now post tits.

>> No.1902784

Oh god. I'm actually reading one of these.

Guess what the topic of our sterotypical emo-writer is? GUESS!

CUTTING

>> No.1902786

>>1902778
I hate you OP.

this pic is horrible. Ignorant wannabe

>> No.1902793

>>1902784

OP please go away. Writing about cutting is ass. Do it or leave it.

>> No.1902796

>>1902778

What your picture is implying is that they are shitty authors based on how they look. What we are saying is that reading the notebooks/private letters of joyce can add another dimension to the work. Same with any author, including fantasy ones. If they talk about symbolism in their work in interviews it adds to the work, If they are anti-semites then we can go back and look at their fantasy work and see how that plays a role in how they write. You get the idea.

>> No.1902798

oh
i think i get it

>> No.1902801

>>1902796
>What we are saying is that reading the notebooks/private letters of joyce can add another dimension to the work
no it can't

>> No.1902813

I'm going to skip the whole "I'm an angry neckbeard" thing and just respectfully say that I don't enjoy your writing style. Not saying it's bad though.

>> No.1902821

>>1902801

Oh well that just means you are acting retarded to troll. I don't care enough to argue with someone who is such a blatant troll. You will never be D&E so give up.

>> No.1902826

>>1902821
>You will never be D&E so give up.
hot dam u figured me out

>> No.1902836

i'll be honest with you guys, the link i posted above isn't mine, i'm another girl who just hates the stupid bitch and thinks her writing is terrible.

>> No.1902845

>>1902836
Really now?

>liar

>> No.1902866

>>1902713
Gotta be a troll.
>>1902721
Whiny little bitch.

>> No.1902868

>>1902845

no, i'm 100% serious. i mean, i don't care if you believe me because my only goal was to post her link here and watch you guys mock her to death, which i accomplished, so i'm happy.

>> No.1902880

>>1902868
don't be such a bitter bitch.
lose some weight and maybe you will find a drunk enough guy to take your virginity.
fucking cunt