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How's this shaping up, boys? This is a revised version of my travel memoir I posted earlier this week, adjusted with your commentary in mind.

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>> No.18828346

>>18828320
you a nigga.

>> No.18828376

>>18828346

<3 :')

>> No.18828895

>>18828316

I want to hate it, but I can't. I respect your determination OP. This is good. I'd read this, and enjoy it too, I think.

>> No.18829929

>>18828316

You're still using that 2nd-person tense for some reason, but other than that you're pretty much set. Nice job.

>> No.18830407

>>18828316
I like it. Enjoyed the subtle commentary on American arrogance. Tell us more.

>> No.18830716

>>18828316
what word processor are you using

>> No.18830798

>>18830716

Google docs, always. Just ADHD'd out earlier today and decided to switch the pages together in MS paint.

>>18830407
Thanks brother. Well, it'll all be up on my Substack in the next 2-3 weeks. I already have some travel writing up on there. You can sub / check it out if you want:

>www.goodperson.substack.com

>> No.18830855

>>18830798
Stitch the pages together*

>> No.18831243

Just post the whole thing when you're done with it as opposed to little pieces here and there. We need a sense of what the project is in its totality than disparate snippets here and there