Critique my flash fiction

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Critique my flash fiction Anonymous Fri Apr 23 14:48:18 2021 No.18095460 [Reply] [Original]

PASSION OF THE WARTHOG

imagine, if you will... a giant, lumpy, pulsating penis. you quiver with terror as the warthog moves toward you, lustful intentions glinting in his eyes. as you feel his throbbing cock begin to corkscrew into your rectum, you screech with whorish lust and the warthog enormous deformed penis splatter your guts with lumpy, yellowish semen

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 23 14:50:01 2021 No.18095473 >>18095460 Your description of the warthogs' features are very speciest. You're putting words into the warthogs' symbology. Why should we think it is lustful?

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