I offer a challenge

[Anonymous No.18042702]

You need to edit the last paragraphs of "I have no mouth and I must scream" to match to what would say a man who is severely demoralized about being circumcised to the point of insanity, the last words should end with "I have no foreskin and I must cream".

>Here is the text:
AM has altered me for his own peace of mind, I suppose. He doesn't want me to
run at full speed into a computer bank and smash my skull. Or hold my breath till I
faint. Or cut my throat on a rusted sheet of metal. There are reflective surfaces down
here. I will describe myself as I see myself:
I am a great soft jelly thing. Smoothly rounded, with no mouth, with pulsing
white holes filled by fog where my eyes used to be. Rubbery appendages that were
once my arms; bulks rounding down into legless humps of soft slippery matter. I
leave a moist trail when I move. Blotches of diseased, evil gray come and go on my
surface, as though light is being beamed from within.
Outwardly: dumbly, I shamble about, a thing that could never have been known
as human, a thing whose shape is so alien a travesty that humanity becomes more
obscene for the vague resemblance.
Inwardly: alone. Here. Living under the land, under the sea, in the belly of AM,
whom we created because our time was badly spent and we must have known
unconsciously that he could do it better. At least the four of them are safe at last.
AM will be all the madder for that. It makes me a little happier. And yet ... AM
has won, simply ... he has taken his revenge ...
I have no mouth. And I must scream.

Remember that for this to be possible you need to scan the literature about the harmful physical effects of circumcision, I would also suggest to replace AM with Mom since she inflicted this upon the man.

[Anonymous No.18042716]

The edit should still somewhat resemble the original text

[Anonymous No.18042740]

Here is a poem about circumcision:

Why'd you do it father, mother?
You couldn't use soap and water?
Did you think I won't remember?
That you flayed my precious member?

The procedure was excruciating
Mother, I'm not exaggerating
I had to wail and scream
Now my foreskin is beauty cream.

"Just a little skin", they laughed
One quick cut exposed my shaft.
I was only whole for a just a moment
A sacrifice with no atonement.

Now my glans are exposed
And all my plans, disposed
Who could think of this abomination?
I just sink into frustration.

Just remember who did this to you
The lying scheming filthy Jew
We'll never know what real sex feels like
Thanks to you, you evil satanic kike.

Why is it not criticized?
All I can think of is homicide
I wonder where he lives
That sadistic little spiv.

One day he will hear
A knock on the door
There I will appear
Before he drops to the floor.

[Anonymous No.18043421]

Not your personal army