/Wish Mountain/ General

[Anonymous No.17954999]

This thread is for the Wish Mountain series. Are you up to date? What do you think about the story so far?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37998/wish-mountain

[Anonymous No.17955537]

simple bump

[Anonymous No.17955552]

>>17954999
Isn't that the guy who posts on /crit/ threads?

[Anonymous No.17955566]

>>17955552
Yeah, he also denies being an animefag, when seconds later, he confesses to being an animefag.

[Anonymous No.17955573]

We're not actually allowed to shill our bullshit writing here, are we?

[Anonymous No.17955576]

>>17955573
You can if it is free. Which Wish Mountain is on royal road.

[Anonymous No.17955577]

>>17955573
The crocodile fag has been doing it a while now.

[Anonymous No.17955593]

>>17955577
I miss Horea

[Anonymous No.17955609]

>>17955593
I’m not familiar with the reference.

[Anonymous No.17955620]

>>17955609
>he doesn't remember the solution of all philosophy
picrel

[Anonymous No.17955659]

>>17955620
Nope, guess not. Are you Whoria Belch? Also, have you read Shill Mountain?

[Anonymous No.17955673]

>>17955659
Nah, neither of those. I tried reading the Romanian but the self-fellating grandstanding was too much

[Anonymous No.17956001]

bump

[Anonymous No.17956041]

>>17954999
Alright, Shill. I’m about to finish my current read. I’ll give you a chapter to catch my attention.

[Anonymous No.17956862]

>>17954999
Just how desperate are you?

[Anonymous No.17957276]

bump

[Anonymous No.17957325]

I applaud your effort Wish Mountain guy and will continue to support you, because your writing makes me so irrationally angry that I can’t help but feel grateful to have been made to feel anything at all.

[Anonymous No.17957377]

>>17957325
Gotta respect his guts, if nothing else. He keeps writing and rewriting, but there's no improvement whatsoever. He just doesn't get it, he's not physically equipped to understand literature. His mind is like that of a small, daft child. But still he keeps at it, day after day. Wherever he goes to shill his fable, people tell him outright his story and writing suck. With open pity, they dissect it to pieces in front of him. Still he keeps asking. He bets his everything on this one dumb story, it's the hill on which he will be martyred. No matter how many times he's struck down, he comes back again and again with child-like faith that the answer will be different next time, that he's a lone prophet in a land of blind men. It's a constant uphill battle and you already know how it's going to end. But just this once, I tip my imaginary hat to his efforts, before he rolls down the hill once more, beaten.

[Anonymous No.17957385]

Mr. Borchard do you get paid to post writing on that website? It seems like it caters to a very specific type of person. I don’t think there are many of those people here.

[Anonymous No.17957399]

>>17957377
Don’t bully him he’s trying his best!

[Anonymous No.17957405]

>>17957385
It’s all isekai anime type stuff, like light novels basically.

[Anonymous No.17957474]

>>17957377
This is is disingenuous in so far that no changes have been made based on feedback.

[Anonymous No.17957581]

pop

[Anonymous No.17957610]

I honestly think he could write Sanderson level material within a few years of diligent work. I’m sure he’s still young—so keep at it, bro. You had the balls to post your work here and take the criticism, and that’s more than I can do.

[Anonymous No.17957744]

>>17957610
How are they alike?

[Anonymous No.17957761]

>>17957744
In terms of writing style, not that similar. I was talking more about the quality of writing.

[Anonymous No.17957764]

>>17954999
What kind of a name is Hress Dunter anyway? It's like you wanted to make an anagram of Dress Hunter but got lazy halfway.

[Anonymous No.17957847]

>>17954999
Sorry, I cannot get past Hress Dunter.
What the fuck were you thinking?

[Anonymous No.17957861]

I like the name Hress Dunter. It's not a name you're going to forget any time soon.