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How do I write good smut between my protag and an android who is about to be smelted up once she completes her task of teaching him to fly a drone? It can include femme-dom

>> No.17561793
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>>17561775
LOL

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I need to make it kinda rapey because the protag has a gf and I don't want the reader to de-empathize with the hero too much

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DO NOT WRITE ABOUT THIS GIRL THIS IS NOT WHAT THE ANDROID LOOKS LIKE

>> No.17562065

>>17561803
You mean you want the android to rape the bloke so we don't despise him for cheating?

If a woman rapes a man (insofar as she can) it just makes the man look lame. Why not make the android SEDUCE him by (unwittingly) playing on his sense of compassion?

"I know they're going to melt me down soon... I just want to experience as much as I can first... please anon..."

That sort of thing.

Then make the protagonist racked with guilt a bit. Problem solved.

P.S.The sex can still include femdom. And it should.

>> No.17562084

the unbridled autism in this thread...

>> No.17562089

>>17562065
Or you could make her give him some potion or something. It really doesn‘t work for a man to get raped. Nobody will lust after him after that scene.

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>>17562065
Yes, exactly. After all women can't "rape" can they?

My current idea is to have the fembot stalk him through the stormwater networks (access to the ayy lmao base who makes the androids) then run up on him, trip, bang her head on the concrete and "drown." The hero is thusly compelled to give her mouth to mouth because, well, who wouldn't, right? But then she laughs at him and pins him down "androids can't drown silly" thus inducing his own rape(cis) instinct as she lets herself be pinned down.

>> No.17562132

>>17562065
Also the android was based off a scan of his brain, extracting a femme fatale he once lusted over. So she can play the whole "you created me blah blah boo hoo please rape me" card

>> No.17562143

>>17562107
that makes her a bit too sophisticated and calculating

surely if she's a short-lived android who was built as a flight instructor, she would be very naive and inexperienced in such matters

e.g. the darryl hannah character in Blade Runner
or even the Sean Young character
she's much closer to being human, but she's still very childlike and inexperienced

a sexually aggressive android is a bit icky, to be honest. I mean if that's what floats your boat, go for it, but my instinct would be to go the other way

>> No.17562187

>>17562143
She has to be blaze about her sexuality for it to work in the context of the book. She even spells it out to him. "Way to deny a dying girl's request. Even when all it would involve would be sticking your dick out. I guess you'd rather fuck a robot."

"Aren't you a robot?" He couldn't resist saying.
"Nice," she smirked, "but I meant the drone."

>> No.17562286

>>17562187
hmmm she sounds pretty annoying to me

surely you want her attractive, even if mad / evil?

>> No.17562301

>>17562286
Its only a sham so I can "justify" raping her anon, get a hold of subtext

>> No.17563072

Come on faggots, how do I pass off android rape

>> No.17563078

Do scottish androids dream of shagging electric sheep?

>> No.17563162

>>17563078
Welsh do

>> No.17564287

>>17561775
>>>>>not /lit/