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What does /lit/ think of rupi kaur’s new poem?

>> No.17418673

>120k likes
i hate women

>> No.17418698

>>17418667
nothing in particular

>> No.17418700

>>17418667
Damn bro... it’s so deep... really makes you think...

>> No.17418713

>>17418667
anxiety is wondering what will happen after you jump of the building and your head cracks open

>> No.17418734

perfect marriage of form of content. the way the words slip off onto each line.

>> No.17418746

>>17418667
women should not have permission to read or write

>> No.17418753

i actually had to check if its real because it's so absurdly basic

>> No.17418757
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17418757

>>17418673
>>17418746

>> No.17418767

>>17418757
i hate this fat, bald retard
i also hate anthony fantano
why are all fat, bald men retarded?

>> No.17418775
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17418775

>>17418767
>fat

>> No.17418783

>>17418775
fine
short and misshapen

>> No.17418787

>>17418757
Based rogan

>> No.17418786

>>17418775
>20 year old picture
ok

>> No.17418798

>>17418775
Something about him doesnt look right but i'm now sure what

>> No.17418802

>>17418667
total shit

>> No.17418805

>>17418798
He’s like 5’5 but says he’s 5’8

>> No.17418808

>>17418798
he's misproportioned from steroids

>> No.17418818

>>17418667
>breathe being caught in your chest
is this some abstract form of english that im not aware of or is plain wrong?

>> No.17418857
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>>17418667
>instagram description of the "poem" has more imagery than the "poem" itself
Does she feel anxious because literally everyone knows she's a hack?

>> No.17418864

>>17418857
she's too rich and famous to feel anxiety, she's just experiencing ennui and translating it into the terms her therapist uses.

>> No.17418886

that was just a statement

>> No.17418887

>>17418667
Idk but anxiety is fake

>> No.17418891
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17418891

i thought this was a satire of a rupi kaur poem at first

>> No.17418955

>>17418891
all women should be shot on sight
they should all have their skins peeled off of their infernal bodies
salt water should be poured down their once-covered backs
nails should be driven through their fingers and toes
i'd love to see the top of a woman's skull lying on the pavement without an owner
i'd love to just walk home one day and stumble upon a shard of bone and scalp and hair
i'd think, "golly, some whore must have gotten what was coming to her"
i'd smile and kick it along as i walked, as if it were a stone or a tin can
maybe i'd look for the rest of the body, but if the world were filled with more people like me, i'd know that it would be a fruitless search: the body would be buried deep under the muck of a swamp, or reduced to nothing more than ash
a careless mistake, maybe - leaving a shard of a woman's skull un-punished
but if killing and torturing women were as commonplace as i'd like it to be, i'd be able to forgive everyday mistakes like that (as i'd be able to, say, forgive someone stepping on my shoe by mistake)
alas, we don't live in such a world
all i can do is sigh...

>> No.17418985

>>17418667
Anxiety feels like i'm holding a fart
Inside of my ass
And it could be a shit and
Slip any second

>> No.17418999

>>17418753
hey women are just beginning to start their history, remember that.

Now if it remains basic shit like this after 1000-2000 years we should be worried.

>> No.17419009

>>17418999
anon if women are so retarded they can be oppressed by men for all of history until just now then..... wellllll.... maybe they're biologically inferior....

>> No.17419055

>>17418667
I like the little doodle that goes with it. Like a shity shel Silverstein

>> No.17419085

I'm impressed she's able to con so many people.

>> No.17419341

>>17418667
>breathe
Damn, is she ESL?

>> No.17420380

Bump

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>>17418798
HGH abuse has made his gut look ridiculous, he sucks in a lot to hide it.

>> No.17420556

>>17418985
Your version is superior, anon.

>> No.17420585

>>17418667
The basic bitch
She fell from the building
yes
YES
The bitch is a stain on the sidewalk

>> No.17420594

It gives me the confidence to know my shit could be published

>> No.17420758
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17420758

>>17418667
this one is better desu

>> No.17420818

>>17418999
What do you mean "just beginning" you fucking retard? You think not a single woman wrote poetry (or whatever garbage this shit in the OP is) before rupee kaur?

>> No.17421061

>>17420758
Based post.

>> No.17421073

>>17418985
There are plenty of female poets who are much better than rupi kaur.

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>>17418999
Not true they've just been (((liberated)))

>> No.17421880

>>17418775
Il duce phenotype

>> No.17421891

>>17418985
Based poet

>> No.17423769

Can /lit/ give a better poem for describing stress?

>> No.17423776

>>17418673
fpbp

>> No.17423793

>>17423769
i bet most people here can write better than a 10 year old, so yeah

>> No.17423797

>>17418667
It doesn't even rhyme

>> No.17423798

>>17418891
She does have nice feet tho