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[ERROR] No.1731420 [Reply] [Original]

After girls have
been gone awhile
let me come in
and see your smile.

Tell you about me,
In general ways
Of general things.
While we lay in your
Soft bed cuddling.

You’d me remind of things
I might’ve forgotten,
Though some of what I say
doesn’t make sense at bottom,
you stroke my hair with
my head on your bosom.

Around my eyes stickiness
Of saltwater drying will
Rub off with your soft caress
As I wonder at how strong
You are, and your cleverness.
It would never ever change.

You’d never ever change in vain,
You’d never do this just for gain,
You would laugh, but not at my pain,
But with me squeezing you again.
Always my Venus and so motherly,
in your embrace light and balmy,
You’re always the one who calms me,
My feminine and wise swami.

>> No.1731422

p.s. this was a one off i just had to say it out loud...

>> No.1731443
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>> No.1731477

Daww. I liked the poem.

>> No.1731481

I like to eat pussy.
I really
really
do.

>> No.1731482

>>1731481
no keep your pervy shit out of my thread please, this is not meant for you.

>> No.1731488

>swami

>what the fuck
Any shit that rhymes is good right?

All your other rhymes are cheap as hell and have all been said a million times. I swear if there was another stanza you would have tried to rhyme 'high' with 'sky' and then I swear I would have killed myself.

>> No.1731491

this wasnt meant to be good im not a poet. i was just getting something off my chest.

>> No.1731493

>>1731482

It's not perverted to eat pussy.

>> No.1731494

What? Are you Tybrax? What happened to th WVwhatever trip?

>> No.1731496

>>1731494
don't be so cruel, it's too early to make fun of that tragic shit

>> No.1731499
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>>1731494

he doesn't want his reputation to precede him, or something.

>> No.1731500

I want to fuck you
until your mother aches
until your father's balls ascend
until your gay brother sings with need
until Vishnu gets a nosebleed
until next door smells it.

>> No.1731510

Terrible poetry

>> No.1731514

thanks for keeping this bumped guys :)

>> No.1731521
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>>1731500
I saved this.

>> No.1731533

>>1731496

What tragic shit? Are you making fun of Ty?

>> No.1731539

>still no reply
:*(

>> No.1731544

>>1731499
Don't be mean to Ty. Can't you see past his exterior and into his heart? <3 Ty.

>> No.1731552

>>1731514

ONIONRING

get in here and say something nice about his poem

he won't stop until you do.

>> No.1731556

>>1731521

thanx bro

>> No.1731566

I lol'd. That poem is fantastically bad.

>> No.1731806

>>1731566
I disagree. It is a lovely poem.

>> No.1731826
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1731826

>>1731806

Your reading comprehension is weak, tripfag.

>> No.1731905

>>1731826
I enjoy you greatly as well, softsabre.png guy. Can i call you Russell Stover for short? ^_^ I'd also like to apologize for my late post, i was concocting dinner. Would your write me a poetry about my horrific reading comprehension, SoftStoversabre.png guy?! ^_^

>> No.1731918

It's better than half the reeking shit anonymous comes up with anyway

>> No.1731924

>>1731905
> ^_^

I don't want to impede, but you do know you're a douche canoe, right?

>> No.1731930

>>1731918
And better than all the cancerous sludge tripfags come up with. Yes.

>> No.1731931

ive already made other plans now but do you think she's ignoring this thread d&e?

>> No.1731947

Not sure I like your enjambment...

>> No.1731949

>>1731931
gee ty hard to say

>> No.1731953

ok deleting in 10 minutes or something. say ur worst

>> No.1731985

>>1731924
I don't believe there's any valid reason to be rude, do you? ^_^ Do you honestly think the rude path to life is the correct one?

>> No.1731985,1 [INTERNAL] 

my bed is pretty hard. other than that it's a nice imagery.

>> No.1731985,2 [INTERNAL] 

Let me take this other glove off
As the vox humana swells,
And the beauteous fields of Eden
Bask beneath the Abbey bells.
Here, where England's statesmens lie,
Listen to a lady's cry.

Gracious Lord, oh bomb the mudslimes.
Spare their women for Thy Sake,
And if that is not too easy
We will pardon Thy Mistake.
But, gracious Lord, whate'er shall be
Don't let anyone bomb me.

Keep our Empire undismembered
Guide our Forces by Thy Hand,
Gallant blacks from far Jamaica,
Honduras and Togoland;
Protect them Lord in all their fights,
And, even more, protect the whites.

>> No.1731985,3 [INTERNAL] 

Think of what our Nation stands for,
Books from boots and country lanes,
Free speech, free passes, class disctinction,
Democracy and proper drains.
Lord, put beneath Thy special care
One-eighty-nine Cadogan Square.

Although Dear Lord I am a sinner,
I have done no major crime;
Now I'll come to Evenening Service
Whensoever I have the time.
So, Lord, reserve my for a crown.
And do not let my shares go down.

I will labour for thy Kingdom,
Help our lads to win the war,
Send white feathers to the cowards
Join the women's Army Corps,
Then wash the steps around thy Throne
In the Eternal Safety Zone.

Now I feel a little better,
What a treat to hear Thy word,
Where the bones of leading statesmen,
Have so often been interr'd.
And now, dear Lord, I cannot wait
Because I have a luncheon Date.