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WRITE, AND POST, A HAIKU.

ORIGINAL CONTENT ONLY.


DE SOL PRIVADO

TÓRNASE EL HUMOR HOSCO;

PÁLIDA LA FAZ.


EN PÚBLICO SOL

CLAREASE EL ÁNIMO,

TUÉSTASE LA TEZ.


« 零 »

>> No.16782228
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16782228

Questions, how to deal with commas here.
Do I say

"Rome was beautiful once"
or
"Rome was beautiful, once"

?

>> No.16782248

>>16782228
For poetry, proper grammar isn't a necessity. Try whatever flows better and rhythmically fits in your poem. Imagine your reader pausing at every comma, would you still want to put said comma(s) there?

>> No.16782250

>>16782228


WITHOUT COMMA, BUT THERE ARE SIX SYLLABLES IN THAT VERSE.

>> No.16782252

>>16782248
>For poetry, proper grammar isn't a necessity.


FALSE.

>> No.16782412

I'm the backwards man
Not ready I was shown the end
How can I be it

>> No.16782424

Cooking to relax
Nurtures your body now
Eat later again

t. eating /lit/erator

>> No.16782452

>>16782424
super nice

>> No.16782515

Man struggles to swim
I watch the water ripple
As he starts to drown

>> No.16782722
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16782722

Eres la madre

La madre que no tuve

Madre María

>> No.16782810

>>16782225
Stand in hallway
for forgetting homework
Mogami river
–Yukko.

>> No.16782920

talking shit with anon
ay anon what is the soul?
shit nigga I dunno

>> No.16782951

silent, the sun sets
and the forest sleeps. it's time -
to grow high inside.

>> No.16782978

>>16782951
Cannabis shrinks your brain, so it would rather be "to shrink high inside".

>> No.16783742
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16783742

>>16782722
Superb.

>> No.16783869

Put on my facemask,
Into worldly fray I go,
Into COVIDland.

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16783876

>>16782225
Isn't the last line supposed to tie it all together by juxtaposing with something different? YALLMOTHERFUGGERSCAN'TEVENHAIKU

>> No.16783920

>>16783742
gay as fuck

>> No.16784003

>>16783876


NOT NECESSARILY.

DO YOU EVEN KNOW SPANISH?

EVEN IF YOU DO UNDERSTAND THE HAIKU I DOUBT THAT YOU COMPREHEND IT, OTHERWISE YOU WOULD NOT HAVE POSTED THIS.

>> No.16784050
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16784050

Empty bed I lay
The flesh and thick saliva
She swallows, gulp, down

>> No.16784203

a late afternoon nap
marmalade corridor head
joy of limping dog

>> No.16784502
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>>16783869
Reminds me of pic related
lmao

>> No.16785122

City sky at night
Even of the stars I'm robbed
Everything is gray.

>> No.16786106
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16786106

There once was a boy,

Autistic in CAPS; his name:

Kevin, cum genius.

>> No.16786162

Black box of terror
Tell me what I do not know
Relay to others

>> No.16787383
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16787383

Confusion abounds
Without reason it exists
Buzzing silently

>> No.16787704

again I cant sleep
plant stands dark against window
woman swirls through mind

>> No.16787718

>>16787704
I feel it...

>> No.16788166

>>16783869
>>16784203
>>16786106
>>16787383
Nice work, Anons :)
>>16782250
>>16782252
>>16784003
Cringe.

>> No.16788185

Shoulders wide as mans
A womb you never will have
Go forth, and dilate

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16788187

>>16788185

>> No.16788190

>>16782225
I briefly found God,
He discarded all mankind,
For his firstborn son

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16788214

Keep me com-pan-y
Cute thing with mind-rot, oh shame!
Oh, paperbackdreams!

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16788236

Sometimes I wonder-
if there's more to life than... this.
I'm afraid there's not.

>> No.16788343

>>16788214
Your presence soothes me
Even through your black-screen home
Your voice cures my ache

>> No.16788472

My heart's mountain shrine
covered in thick winter snow;
A lone pine still green.

>> No.16788479

Unable to sleep,
I lay remembering home;
The midsummer rains.

>> No.16788525
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16788525

>>16788472

>> No.16788527

>>16782225


life like a snowball
tiny then big then melted
the whole time water

>> No.16788588

Under a quiet heart
Rest so weary comes to thee
Astonishing grace

>> No.16788673

>>16788527
Lol. Nice.

On a cold blue pond
Red leaves fall, fast like white doves
Trees are on fire

>> No.16788694

>>16788673
thank you! I'm working on a song from this

>> No.16789066

I walk down the slope
the hill descends beside me
it knows who I am