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Should I put the effort into polishing this up?

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/13752895/

It's readable, but it's only a first draft. /tg/ seemed to enjoy the stories, but it was geared towards them and might lack a more universal appeal.

General opinions would be nice, but I must warn you (and will probably kill this thread by this warning) that its pretty long.

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>> No.1578247

So long

>> No.1578326

>fantasy LARP

Stopped reading here.

>> No.1578341

tl;dr

>> No.1578358

I remember how much love this got on /tg/, so go for it. /lit/ is mostly whiny bitches that don't like fantasy, so don't trust them.

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>>1578326
I figured that would be the end for most people as well. I can't even give a synopsis of the story without making it sound too subculture specific, which I hope it really isn't.

>>1578358
Sometimes, it's better to listen to the advice of people that hate something rather than to listen to the people who like it. Not all the time, but new perspectives can be pretty valuable.

So far though, I think I might be able to trust that it's too long, at least for something that people would read on an image board.

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whoa.

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