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rate my poetry Anonymous Sat Jun 13 16:51:13 2020 No.15599564 [Reply] [Original]

To join the trade of water for blood
and slick sweetheart grip long rust
Donning blue paint and purple caiman flood
I oath heart and soul covered in dirt than dust

Throats echo deep the song that bound us
with nearer a decade that
to break the skeleton grip around us
of God King and bloodied law

By warplane resin bubble, they forge their reigns
A backbending righteous ventriloquist act and tell us
of the good to be gained from locking our own chains
and whipping our own backs

From ashes will is woken
Anointed brows must burn
a new brand of brethren unspoken,
the Wheels of Revolution turn

Overlook, they do, in miscalculating disdain
the fury and mire broiling behind their walls
Spinning old violence through teeth-cut veins
Behold! a taste of how the great can fall

and all the king's horses
and all the king's men
couldn't do shit

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Anonymous Sat Jun 13 16:51:37 2020 No.15599567

To wad up and toss tomorrow
like a bad idea you jotted down
while running out the door yesterday
and slip into a shadow more comfortable

Dandelion drafts and vulgar whips from passing branches
tell us to leave the musings to Yeats and Monét
Winter tau skin pushing a mid-summer pace
taking time to arrange chaos into neat, little rows

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 16:52:35 2020 No.15599574 Tushy Heh heh

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 16:53:37 2020 No.15599582 Brave Girl Set fire to thei ocean and waltz acreoss the rushing seas Crash! Burn! From ashes of Chaos, Creation is demanded Clever Girl Snatch up the clouds and graffiti the sky Thunder Lightening! Be so good, they have to look

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 16:55:06 2020 No.15599589 >>15599564 Hot diggity!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 16:55:21 2020 No.15599591 what the fuck kind of pose is that, looks weird why is she wearing shoes where is she and why

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 16:59:06 2020 No.15599614 Imagine the smell

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 17:00:02 2020 No.15599622 I'd cum on her back but I wouldn't call back

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 17:03:06 2020 No.15599638 >>15599564 It's good. Very captivating. I can't imagine how long it took to make the rhyme scheme. It's also very nice when spoken aloud. My only critique is that it lacks subtlety and a sort of style that makes it more than just normal poetry.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 17:03:15 2020 No.15599642 >>15599591 San Fran of course

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:01:34 2020 No.15600298 >>15599564 Fuck. This pic man. It's saddening. I'm so fucking horny and alone. I would give anything.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:10:12 2020 No.15600353 >>15599591 got to hide the balls somehow

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:10:45 2020 No.15600358 >>15599564 Rate MY poetry Nigger Nigger Nigger ASS ASS ASS ASS Nigger Tits Tits Tits Tits Vagina

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:11:51 2020 No.15600363 >>15600298 Being a hot girl in 2020 is such a fucking cheat code. I cant anymore bros.... i want to be reincarnated has a hot girl. Ill ride niggas dicks all night I dont care

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>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:14:11 2020 No.15600378 >>15600363 This is seriously sad. If you want to be a woman so bad, then castrate yourself, tranny. You're already so emasculated it won't change a thing.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:29:17 2020 No.15600461 >>15599564 This is the single most narcissistic image I've ever seen. I've made this comment more than once. Yes, I have it saved but I still can't bring myself to masturbate to it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:30:10 2020 No.15600472 >>15600353 But those are the best part!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:42:00 2020 No.15600537 >>15600369 the girl in that photo wrote the poems

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:53:22 2020 No.15600604 >>15599564 pls have a giant cock

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Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:53:26 2020 No.15600606
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>>15600363
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>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:54:38 2020 No.15600614 >>15599564 i like coffee but i wouldn't say it's good for you

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:58:31 2020 No.15600633 >>15599564 I want to FUCK this woman YES. YES I want to FUCK this WOMAN. YES. >:)

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 19:59:37 2020 No.15600645 >>15600633 I want to fuck that high schooler who was grabbing my neck all night

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 13 20:27:59 2020 No.15600842 >>15600606 she's a munter too