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How do i know if the story that i'm writing is original?
It's basically an autistic neet incel revenge power fantasy, is there anything similar already out there?

>> No.15194496

post it and we'll tell you

>> No.15194596

>>15194496
I have not even started writing it down, it's just in my head. The basic idea is that the protagonist is an ugly piece of shit that gets plastic surgery and becomes a "chad", he fucks around with many thots, but his target is his highschool crush. The plan in his mind is to make her fall in love with him, force her leave her husband but then dump her. Which leads to her suicide even though the protagfag didn't expect it. Then the protagfag either also kills himself or finds a way to cope with his actions.

>> No.15194765
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>>15194496
it's a shitty idea isn't it?

>> No.15194782

>>15194596
>Then the protagfag either also kills himself or finds a way to cope with his actions.
This part doesnt make sense. Chads dont kill themselves.

>> No.15194796

>>15194482
Read Descartes' meditations

>> No.15194802

>>15194596
That... actually sounds kind of intresting, like a modern othello in a way
If your good at psychology there's a lot you can do with this

>> No.15194814

>>15194596
The protagfag killing himself kind of comes out of nowhere though. If he were to suffer so much from her suicide, then he wouldn't have been able to leave her at all.

>> No.15194826

>>15194596
anon, depending on the execution, that story could be pretty original. id read it. i dont know if anyone would publish it, but if they did, id read it.
you'd just have to query it describing it as, "A chilling expose on modern misogyny" or some shit like that, to sneak it past the gatekeepers

>> No.15194857

>>15194826
A chilling expose of the authors misogyny

>> No.15194877

>>15194782
>>15194814
Well i forgot to mention that she writes a suicide post to him where she reveals to him that she was aware of his real identity and that she also always had a crush on him but that his behaviour in highschool towards her was somewhat dismissive. He then remembers an when another one of his class mates pretended to be interested in him but then humiliated him, which is what lead him ignore and view the hints that the crush was giving as a joke.

>> No.15194880

>>15194826
>>15194857
Obviously OP needs to embed his story within a greater story about an angry frogposter who is writing the text in question

>> No.15194884

>>15194857
fucking kek

>> No.15195013

>>15194596
Actually interesting. It could use a tweak there and there but you're able to work it out. I believe in you.