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[Anonymous No.15139558]

How to write a fighting scene ?
I need your help /lit/

[Anonymous No.15139584]

Best fight scene I've ever read is located in The Orchard Keeper when Sylder kills Kenneth Ratner page 37-40.

[Anonymous No.15139586]

Watch hella UFC and base it on tht

[Anonymous No.15139587]

>>15139558

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FgNjJ0oEXU8

[Anonymous No.15139590]

>>15139558
>Spinozafag vs. Guenonfag

[Anonymous No.15139595]

>>15139590
Are you comparing Spinoza enthusiasts with rodents?
Pretty fair.

[Anonymous No.15139603]

Ajax against Paris in the Illiad is pretty based

[Anonymous No.15139713]

>>15139558
I hope a rat eats the eyeballs of whoever set this up

[Anonymous No.15139767]

>>15139590
I'm not opening up GIMP for this nonsense, so use your imaginations.

[Anonymous No.15139776]

>>15139713
Same.

[Anonymous No.15139952]

>>15139713
Don't lie to yourself this is pure kino entertainment. To be honest . It would an interesting book the story of rat ( named kkk rat by /b/ tards ) fighting to survive in the chink blood sport . He gone against scorpion, lizards , centipedes, crabs and more .

[Anonymous No.15139966]

Read the fight scene in Don Quixote near the start where he fights with the servant of the group of ladies.

[Anonymous No.15139980]

>>15139952
I hate rats, got any where the rat dies?

[Anonymous No.15140021]

>>15139558
>guess I have a pet rat now

[Anonymous No.15140029]

>>15139980
Yes
>>15139980

[Anonymous No.15140043]

>>15139558
>>15139952
Rats are fucking vicious, that's crazy.

[Anonymous No.15140052]

>>15139952
/lit/ what can we add to this ?

[Anonymous No.15140063]

>>15139952
>Hey buddy, I got a new friend for you to play with say hi to your new roomma– OH GOD WHAT ARE YOU DOING STOP

[Anonymous No.15140161]

Why not post more for research purpose

[Anonymous No.15140187]

>>15139558
>>15139952
>>15140029
>>15140161
the gnostics were right

[Anonymous No.15140468]

>>15140029
fucking hell

[Anonymous No.15140563]

>>15140161
Why the fuck do they do this? What possible knowledge is there to be gained apart from "hurrr who would win in a fight"

[Anonymous No.15140591]

>>15140029
that's a mouse dumbass

[Anonymous No.15140602]

>>15140563
Entertainment my dear fren

[Anonymous No.15140616]

>>15140591
Happy

[Anonymous No.15140628]

>>15139558
wtf? did the croc have a heart attack?

[Anonymous No.15140650]

>>15140628
The rat bite his eye and brains around :27 mark

[Anonymous No.15140682]

>>15140187
kek
would agree

[Anonymous No.15140707]

I have seen an anon give his pet lobster(not peterson) Methamphetamines as an experiment on /sci/
Has lit ever matched such greatness?

[Anonymous No.15140710]

>>15140043
The chink probably starves the rats before making them fight.

[Anonymous No.15140736]

>>15140707
link/pic/vid plox?

[Anonymous No.15140765]

>>15140710
Also Mix with being paranoid because of constant fighting. If I had the power I would like to right a story of rat that was forced to fight. These fights seem interesting.

[Anonymous No.15140767]

i hate chinks and I have reported OP for possible zoosadism to relevant authorities including international orgs.

[Anonymous No.15140786]

>>15140736
>>/sci/thread/10808149

[Anonymous No.15140850]

>>15140767
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Z-LZO4vJNtM

Sadly the law don't care for rats or amphibians. YouTube freely only rat torture to exist on there site . Electrocution , drowning , starving and etc . Some even have 3 millions views .The only rule is no gore .

If it was doggo you may have a point

[Anonymous No.15140871]

>>15140850
yeah but they check out activities of people such as OP and there's usually an abuse thread that can be followed. fingers crossed.

[Anonymous No.15140907]

>>15140871
Why target a viewer and not the creator . As I said nobody cares about rat . There is no way he can average millions of views and keep his video up. if he was catching wild cats and drowning and electrocuted them

[Anonymous No.15140913]

This is disgusting and /op/ is a sociopath

[Anonymous No.15140914]

>>15140907
well its not just rats but fighting other animals

[Anonymous No.15140920]

>>15140850
Guess its legally "pest control" or some shit

[Anonymous No.15140941]

Read Lovecraft, he's an expert at fight scenes.

[Anonymous No.15140977]

>>15140920
Some of his videos get worst . The webm are interesting because at least they have a mean to defend themself. This guy just catch and kill .

[Anonymous No.15141033]

>>15140786
this fucking place

[Anonymous No.15141078]

>>15140920
>>15140850
its legally based.

moralfags get out.

[Anonymous No.15141120]

>>15140043
the rat clearly weighs like 4 times as much as the croc and the lizard thing

[Anonymous No.15141209]

>>15141033
think its missing some vids ,when the lobster is dancing high on meth

[Anonymous No.15141225]

>>15141209
kek, i thought it might of ended abruptly cuz someone reported him

[Anonymous No.15141248]

lol at you fags feeling bad about the fights

[Anonymous No.15141249]

>>15140563
Look at the writings on the vid. The only thing that's missing is a bat fight

[Anonymous No.15141403]

>tfw she keeps sucking after u nut
https://youtu.be/15PxMezKc50?t=118

[Anonymous No.15141417]

>>15140161
scorpions are so pointy, those two giant pincers and also the tail stinger

[Anonymous No.15141611]

>>15140616
still looks like a mouse
no

[Anonymous No.15141722]

>>15139558
>0:09-0:13
>Rat literally starts using the "death roll"
>I'VE ALREADY MASTERED YOUR GREATEST TECHNIQUES, SNAKEBLOOD. WHAT HAVE YOU NOW?

[Anonymous No.15142214]

>>15139558
I'd like to read a Mishima story based on this little fracas

[Anonymous No.15143310]

>>15140563
>thinking they do this for knowledge
Ever heard of cock fights or dog fights, you retard? People bet on this shit.

[Anonymous No.15143732]

>>15139558
i have two examples of fight scenes ive written, one is very vague and presented from the fighter's adrenaline rushed perspective. i want fights like these to be trance-like or dreamlike
>The crooks spoke but Pete couldn’t make out what they said nor what their faces looked like, his ears plugged and his eyes in a haze. Two of them fell upon him and he stumbled against a brick wall his head ringing. But his wrists were big and his hands were big and in a muffled flurry of punches and strikes one fell into the street and retreated with two more in tow.
When Pete snapped out of his slur he found his mouth blabbering gibberish and drooling, his curled knuckle swollen and readied above the bloodied face of a boy below him.

this is a more vivid and heroic style of fighting i feature in a historical fiction:
>The Wako put sampans into the water and row out to meet the christians. They loose their yumi bows and fire their arquebi and a pirate peppers them with a chinese repeating crossbow. A burning arrow hits its mark in the Scotsman’s keg and the fire spreads quickly to the powder. But no high or lowlander tosses cabers like he and he lugs the keg at the leading sampan blowing it in two and sending the pirates into the air like a fountain of dismembered limbs and gore. The flanking boats capsize from the shockwave and the christians hurry to slaughter their pursuers. Samurai swings his kanabo with ease and Arjan fights his way forward with a dao plucked from a cold dead hand.

[Anonymous No.15143861]

I just want to know how fights work and see more badass rat shit, is that so much to ask without spooks running in here with their PETA bullshit? It's a rat fighting things it will likely end up eating who cares you can't save this rat, since it is likely already dead. Might as well see his win streak.

[Anonymous No.15143872]

>>15139558
"all the pretty horses" has a great prison knife fight in it, mostly because the actual fight obvious is over in just a few seconds but the description stretches out to mimic how time would stop during that level of immediate stress