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14803339 No.14803339 [Reply] [Original]

Three people tried to fix my sentence and fucked it up to hell and back. I lost the original too and I'm far to sleep deprived to figure our how to recover my old work. How the fuck do I fix my sentence, /lit/?

"For example, when talking about the idea that caring about what is your own and not what goes against what nature entails is what number 1,2, and 5 focus on"

>> No.14803389

>>14803339
Bruh
You the kinda guy who posts here about 25 word essays aren't ya

>> No.14803401

>>14803339
your sentence is so shitty that it's unclear as to what you're trying to say

>> No.14803425

Took me 20 minutes, but I figured it out.
>"For examples, sections 1, 2, and 5, all focus on caring about what is your own and on what goes against nature."
Is that good enough?

>> No.14803432

>>14803389
It's a 4 page essay actually.

>> No.14803464

>>14803339
just say "1 2 and 5 focus on caring about your own and not what goes against nature" you fucking retard

>> No.14803471

>>14803464
which is still a shitty meaningless thing to say, even not knowing your essay, by the way

>> No.14803829

>>14803471
I'm referencing three paragraphs in an essay based on Epictetus you dope. I hope your high horse dies in a ditch.