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14584863 No.14584863 [Reply] [Original]

Post your short story ideas. It's not like they're going anywhere.

>> No.14584872

>>14584863
Burn yourself you pestilential Jew. These threads are the lowest shit you can get to.

>> No.14584878

>>14584863
OP sucked cock.
Plz no steal original idea

>> No.14584886

The Man of Stone

>> No.14584939

>>14584863

So basicly there's this resource rich, very uninhabitable planet that is fought over by various corporations and noblehouses. It has a very weak central goverment that holds the factions in sway by use of its central bank and relies on the far away threat of imperial military power, but as long as they get a cut of the mining/extraction profit they let the parties do whatever they want, including slavery and murder.

At this point we enter the short flash fiction novel at the point where one party hopes to destroy another operation by inciting a slave rebellion, but this slave rebellion spreads over the planet and spreads to the weak capital city.
Profits going down violence between the powers grow and the planet plummets further into krieg.
This war then plays out, local tribes join for autonomy - causing a few years delayed response by the imperial military. Then the planet is truly ravaged by war but meanwhole tje corps have stabilkzed thw slaves and are continoing mining.
Maybe.. 5-6 pages?

>> No.14585079

>>14584863
Some ideas:
>A salesman at an upscale women's boutique with a pantyhose fetish begins profiting off surreptitious photos of young women trying on stockings, until he finds out his son has bought some of the photos
>A father takes his pubescent son hunting in the mountains while going through divorce over an extramarital affair. In the course of the hunt, he accidentally shoots his own child and must race to a hospital. Partly a retelling of Abraham and Issac.
>A shy, awkward teenager becomes a popular streamer after creating a persona in which he wears a mask and speaks through a custom-made speech synthesizer. As his fame and fanbase spreads he has to contend with his split personality, that he's more successful than his parents, and the anonymity he has to maintain to keep it going.

>>14584872
>pestilential
This is a nice word.

>> No.14585097
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14585097

Not really a novel idea but more of a manga/light novel idea and it's really just a very rough draft. You have your average MC who one day meets the 3 daughters of friends of his parents. They drop them off and tell the MC that he has to take care of them for a few hours. The 3 girls are your typical hot anime babes and the MC thinks he'll get to do your typical harem comedy hijinks but he soon finds out that the 3 are severely mentally retarded, being biologically in their late teens but being closer mentally to 5 year-olds. They proceed to drive the MC insane by drawing all over his walls in crayon and permanent marker, eating up everything in his fridge, throwing temper tantrums whenever they don't get their way, playing with their stuffed animals and crying and whining incessantly. At one point one of them will ask him to accompany her to the bathroom since she isn't yet potty trained. The MC is so mad and frustrated that he decides to rape her in the bathroom and attempts to do so until the girl pisses herself in fear and he gets grossed out. The parents then come back at this moment, find out that the MC tried to rape one of their daughters and the scene changes to a courtroom where the MC gets sentenced to prison for trying to rape a mentally disabled person. The manga/light novel is supposed to be a deconstruction of the tendency of anime and manga to feature female characters that are physically developed but exhibit childish mannerisms/intelligence so the reader finds them "cute", and what would actually happen in real life if you had a bunch of physically developed girls who behaved like actual children.
Opinions?

>> No.14585110

>>14585097
Someone already did this, but it was torture instead - and the boy was being tortured

>> No.14585137

>>14584939
sounds kinda like dune

>> No.14585173

The young narrator spends a month at his grandparents' farm during the summer. Also living there is his detached, recently-divorced uncle whose unusual demeanour and enigmatic intellectual studies alternately confuse and inspire the young narrator.

>>14585079
The second one has potential if done correctly.

>> No.14585180

>>14585137

Yeah but the premise is that it actually isnt dune.

>> No.14585224
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14585224

>>14584863
Story:

Man rests upon the direction and ego complexities of another before necessarily moving on. Must be Visionary art, and intuitively apprehended. Inspired by a certain responsibility of self consciousness not to be dissolved into or forego choice to the collective character. Some sort of ulterior distraction to focus that other man and the group around him. He is friends with the protagonist. One always maintains collective character however, we can only go against parts of it. A redish sunset in which one can just see the still strong rays of the sun. The inhabitance has been a farm in, surrounded by piked fence, and a thrice crossroads which wagons are likely to stay. 15th/16th/17th century. But with the glaze of an unsubstantiated dream. The aesthetic itself has a value that has been to say but one must organise basic tenants of the past and future for that setting to even be a possibility. I do not plan much introspection, more left to exterior thought. Any monologue to others or himself is still this "known" character. Girl hears from below the protagonist monologueing to himself next to a tree(outloud) and is confused by this action. This event has greater symbolic importance.

Maybe a short-story, maybe not.

>> No.14585237

>>14585224
>Some sort of ulterior distraction to focus that other man and the group around him.
Such as a constant arguing or problem about something, which does not change.

>> No.14585244

>>14585224
Meant to say pub, not farm.

>> No.14585341

>>14585097
I've looked after both children and retarded people, never needed to rape my frustrations away. This is commentary that has already been made but in an extremely unbelievable and unrelatable form despite attempting to be the opposite