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14284551 No.14284551 [Reply] [Original]

is it cringe to write a poem about a girl but not for her to personally ever read? like if i used her real name and somehow she found it and realized it was about her would it be a bruh moment?

>> No.14284572

The odds of you writing a poem for a girl, not giving it to her, not intending her to read it, and then her anyways finding and reading it seem extremely small. I can't read between the lines here. Has a girl found a poem you have written about her and you are concerned it comes off creepy? Or are you writing a poem about a girl and wondering whether or not to send it?

The first scenario you would probably be in the clear unless you really did use her real name in which case it probably is some mix of flattering and creepy, In the second case yes you should send it to her, if you want to be a poet you must embrace passion and risk taking.

>> No.14284581

If you show it to your boys, it's cringe. Write it to get the feels out.

>> No.14284587

First of all poetry is gay.

I don’t know why people think that writing a poem for some dumb whore is going to get them laid. When has this it worked?

If you’re unattractive everything you write, even a masterpiece, is going to seem creepy.

If you are attractive then you don’t even have to write anything.

>> No.14284599

>>14284551
You shouldn't ever be afraid of telling the truth Anon, if it's what you really feel is it more important that you are able to express it poetically or that you might make someone feel awkward for a little while?

>> No.14284610

>>14284572
>>14284581
>>14284587
my point is can you write a poem about a girl without coming off as wanting to fuck her or is it impossible?

>> No.14284613

>>14284587
Shakespeare was bald and got mad pussy, opinion disregarded.

>> No.14284642

>>14284551
Write the poem about her, use her real name, and send it to her directly. I've done this before and as embarrassing as it may seem they're usually happy to learn someone was thinking about them.

>> No.14284659

I’ve done this and keep it to myself in a sort of poetry and drawing journal. I don’t really care if it’s cringe or not.

>> No.14284665

>>14284610
Sure anything is possible but what a stupid question. It sounds like you do want to fuck her and so that will probably come across.

>> No.14284707

only if its a shitty poem

>> No.14284873

>>14284551
pretty cringe to write a poem for a woman you haven't procreated with

>> No.14284878

>>14284659
Post it

>> No.14284883

>>14284642
>>14284659
post please

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>>14284610
I don't know OP. Ask this guy.

>> No.14285947

>>14284610
You can. For example, you could write a poem about how a girl you know is ugly and disgusting and nobody will say that you wrote the poem because you wanted to fuck her.

>> No.14285976

>>14284610
Why would you write a poem about a girl and contemplate sending it to her if there wasn't some attraction?

>> No.14286003

Don't be afraid, anon. Just ask her for feet pictures.

>> No.14286027

>>14284551
it is cringe to orbit girls

>> No.14286042

poems tend to be cringeworthy no matter what they're about, it's the nature of the medium
just write your feels brah