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Hey /lit/, does the line "Hell is for eternity only because every second feels so" make sense grammatically? Sorry for a derp question but I'm tired as fuck. I'll delete this as soon as I get a semi-consensus, I promise.

>> No.1321676

try:

"Hell is eternal only because every second feels so."

>> No.1321678

seconds don't feel like eternity to me. they come and go pretty rapidly, really. i'm just not sure i can relate, OP.

>> No.1321682

>>1321678
i'ts a little something called HYPERBOLE.. maybe you should look into it

>> No.1321687

>>1321676
Thanks, but it needs to be in iambic pentameter. Do you think that it's just unclear or that it's just plain wrong?
>>1321678
The idea is that every second is so horrible that it feels like forever.

>> No.1321689

>>1321687
*every second in hell

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