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Critique? Anonymous Tue May 28 12:19:41 2019 No.13197823 [Reply] [Original]

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>>	Anonymous Tue May 28 12:27:57 2019 No.13197876 >>13197823 Read it out loud, and you'll see what the problem is.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 28 12:43:37 2019 No.13197963 >>13197876 How does one into good prose?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 28 12:45:13 2019 No.13197972 >>13197963 read more

>>	Anonymous Tue May 28 12:49:37 2019 No.13197991 >>13197972 Can you share an example of good prose?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 28 16:47:53 2019 No.13199265 Did.. did you at least like the story?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 28 16:49:56 2019 No.13199276 >>13199265 Not a patch on Catgirl Misaki, I'm afraid

>>	Anonymous Tue May 28 16:56:51 2019 No.13199311 >>13199276 Fair enough. Even though I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing.