2 minute quick write

[Anonymous No.1273639]

take two minutes and write a quick poem AND DON'T FUCKING LIE ABOUT THE TIME

your love is my garden and I grew from it

you planted the seed with you gentle hands by
digging into the soft red soil with
the nails of your fingers and
you watered it with your tears

that bud has blossomed and the roots
of the roots remain tangled and intertwined

from the soil protrudes not a flower or fine
but these emotions of mine

[OP No.1273650]

>>1273639

>fine

*mean vine

was trying to go too fast :c

[Anonymous No.1273656]

Took me longer than two mintues. Maybe five or ten minutes:

Niece

Your grandmother, my mother,
sends me a picture through email
of you sitting at a desk, crayon in hand.
I cannot make out the picture
you are drawing.

You are four years old.

I’m drunk and twenty years old, thinking
of dropping out of school.

You’re not
my daughter, but I still want
what’s best for you.

I do not want to think about the asshole
who is going to break your heart for the first time.
I do not want to think about the guy who will fuck you,
then never call you again.
This is inevitable.

But right now, you are four years old.
You are drawing a picture of a person
or maybe a dinosaur.

I can’t tell from the angle of the photograph.

[Anonymous No.1273679]

>>1273656
Uh. That's the most depressing thing I've read all month.

[Anonymous No.1273682]

>An Ode to the water bottle on my desk.

Like my life, you are all devoid of fluid
Of Sustenance and the things which make you so good.
Oh empty bottle, you make me feel down,
Like a vacuum cleaner or that new Jay Sean song.
With a fire in my pants, I am wanting to fill you
With fresh seed I bust a nut against thy eyebrow (Singular).

1:43 to write that. Conclusion: don't quit my day job.

[Anonymous No.1273685]

>>1273679
I don't know if I should take that as a compliment or not. I was going for a kinda depressed feeling? So I guess it's a compliment?

[Anonymous No.1273696]

Miles of coastline
Engulfed in mist
The winds from the sea
And the constant raining
Why do I live here?

[None !vceFUCKYOU No.1273703]

Blazing and raging as though I were to sigh
I loved her so but all I could hear was "Goodbye"
Her beauty is forever and charm stays everlasting
My neglectfulness of other is on the border of fasting
You shall live on for all time through my poem's lines
Your face is in the grass and all I see are signs.
Stay with me if you wish for joy
I am your one and only true boy

[Anonymous No.1273707]

Take, carefully, that step
Into blank chaos;
Breathe the ozone
of what must be;
Watch with
peeled eyes from
the corner of this life
and understand
nothing coheres connects
corresponds nothing
except these words.

[Anonymous No.1273708]

horses seem like cool people
they eat carrots
and does afraid of everything

[Anonymous No.1273873]

>>1273708
Hrm ... actually it should be:

horses seem like cool people
they eat carrots and
does afraid of everything

[Anonymous No.1273877]

>>1273707
this was good but what a horrible way to end

[Anonymous No.1273878]

>>1273696
>I SO DEEP HARGLEDY BARGLEDY

[Anonymous No.1273880]

>>1273656
cliche subject matter, interesting POV, horribly written, looks you typed a paragraph and slapped enter until the lines looked even

[Anonymous No.1273881]

>>1273703
it could work in like a children's book or something

[Anonymous No.1273884]

>>1273682
>OH SQUIGGLY LINE, WHY DO YOU AVERT YOURSELF FROM MY GAZE?

[Anonymous No.1273891]

make-hawk and Contagion

Drinking alone is wrong. It is, however, easier to stop being alone than to stop drinking.

Make home at the drop of a hat

I'm lucky to have you, because your affection is far from mutual.

not as funny as smart? Ah well, I've set the bar high with my intellect

it is worse to not hate yourself for others, but for (or rather, against) yourself. You should start now.


I like this book. She dislikes this book. Should I dislike her or this book?

This book is a token of my lack of respect for her, to me, from me.
This book puts a set of lenses in front of you, then breathes on them before you can see fit.
This book is half composed of ekphrastic shards, this brick, this mortar firing ironised shells of meaning, a board at which to stick the plastic darts words are.


I have now taken to carrying a purpose-built frame with me everywhere, in order that I might exclude her from my sight. As yet, she remains enraged but unexcluded. Having read this entry thus far, she now understands my purposes with the frame, but this knowledge does not appears to have appeased her at all.

[Anonymous No.1273893]

>>1273891
sounds strange, sometimes just plain stupid, but a pretty neat poem, some grammatical errors
>does not appear to have appeased her
fixed
and
>not as funny as smart?
i know this is technically correct, it just clumps on the tongue, you should change it

[Anonymous No.1273915]

Maranara sauce on your face,
leaping, in red, from a darken'd place.
Got me, spooked me-
you bet.
Got me, spooked me-
Spaghett!

[Anonymous No.1273917]

Cocksuckers everywhere,
Sucking on my cock.
Once bitches get a tastes,
It's hard to make them stop.
Rolling through your neighborhood,
Bonneville 99.
Try say that shit in my face,
It'll be gung-ho ass rape time.

all I got so far.

[Anonymous No.1273918]

ITT: angst-ridden fags spill their guts in angsty ways.

[Anonymous No.1273920]

Crimson lips, spread wide across-
the wrinkled universe of your face.
Your wit nourishes,
like spaghetti and meatballs.
I get the impression you need some rest.
I get your impressions, they are the best.

[Anonymous No.1273921]

Per chance some poetry, before a fortnight.

[Anonymous No.1273922]

pervert armchair aliens
from outer planet five
always coming to my door
speaking alien jive
they want an easy cupcake
treat me like an easy bake whore

[Anonymous No.1273923]

I turned to look
but she was gone
it was gone forever
lost within my own mind now
the madness surrounds the once clear garden of thought
my only muse now
the bottle

[Anonymous No.1273938]

>>1273893
cheers.
I don't like it, but hey, only a coupla minute wasted

[Anonymous No.1273939]

you,
too.

[Anonymous No.1273945]

Why is this board so fucking slow?
While all the while /b/ continues to grow
Sometimes I think I'm the only person on /lit/
Do people not enjoy good wit?