/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.1258602]

A QUESTION:
Okay, so this so /lit/, if you were writing a story in 3rd person and you had a main character that was a male, how would you describe a woman's chest?

I wrote 'breast' but had been advised by some idiot to use to word 'knockers' or 'tits' despite the fact it doesn't go with the language of my narration. So what do?

[Anonymous No.1258613]

Make up a word for them.
Try to make it impossible for any reader to decipher what your word represents.
Instant hipster cred.

[Anonymous No.1258622]

Use whatever feels comfortable to you. If you go for something that feels weird to use it will stand out in your writing.

[Anonymous No.1258626]

racktomatoes

[Anonymous No.1258630]

if you arent 14 you call breasts "breasts"

[Anonymous No.1258631]

>>1258613
her wereldiv shook as she bounced up and down

I just used captcha to replace the word breast.

[Crimson !CoijTZkBUc No.1258633]

breast is fine, don't listen to advises given be idiots.

[Anonymous No.1258638]

>>1258630
I'll let the 26 year old who has been working on a degree for nearly seven years know that. He's the one who insisted I change the word to tits.

[Anonymous No.1258639]

>>1258631

[Anonymous No.1258682]

Oh, yeah! Shake it, madam! Capital knockers!