I made an erotica book

[Anonymous No.12573893]

I published my first ever book on Amazon, and it's an Erotica tale.

The title is "Drool Ghoul". It's my attempt at writing a story that has a mixture of horror and erotic elements. Given that this is my first ever public work, I do not know how successful it was.

You can read it for free if you have Kindle Unlimited. Otherwise, the ebook's 3 bucks (the printed version should be here in a couple of days).

Parts two and three are currently finished; they just need to be edited and revised before publishing.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07MFXKSRN

Give me feedback; tell me what you think.

[Anonymous No.12573908]

>Drool Ghoul

[Anonymous No.12573936]

>>12573893
>Drool Ghoul

[Anonymous No.12573958]

>They never imagined what trouble you'd get into.
what
>A new voice in erotica, Amaranth Lessiner began her career as a cook before discovering literature as a creative outlet. Having always embraced her sexuality, it was a natural fit for her to begin writing detailed depictions of her vivid fantasy life. For the sake of sticking to the title of "self publisher," she does everything by herself; from writing to editing and formatting
oh I see

[Anonymous No.12573966]

>>12573893
>Drool Ghoul

[Anonymous No.12573984]

Nothing can beat the vampire catgirl book. Stop trying OP

[Anonymous No.12573991]

>>12573893
Do you have anything on Literotica?

[Anonymous No.12574073]

>>12573991
No; I haven't made anything for Literotica yet.

[Anonymous No.12575003]

>>12573984
Link, pls?

[Anonymous No.12575380]

>>12573991
>>12575003
Yes please, I remember the thread but did not save the screenshots. It was a masterpiece.

[Anonymous No.12575395]

>>12575380
It's on Amazon if you want to check out the reviews and artwork, but here's the Pastebin

https://pastebin.com/EJ4NuFV5

[Anonymous No.12575409]

>>12575395
>....When mankind was already super advanced and living here on the 4th rock from the Sun.....about 54.6 million kilometers from Earth..that is..on Mars, that's got artificial oceans and trees and lakes and the works, in the very far future, which is now, where the real sun had been replaced with a false sun. But yet the innocent mortals inhabiting Mars found powers of darkness running amok due to there being sunless night when it was nighttime, just like on Earth from which these bloodsuckers hailed, having traveled here to Mars as undesired but unfortunately unavoidable stowaways. I.e. the sons and daughters of Cain. Vampires. Could nothing stop them? Or was the mankind really, simply, heartbreakingly alone after all?..........

Off to an amazing start

[Anonymous No.12575480]

>>12573893
>I published my first ever book on Amazon
wow congrat--

> and it's an Erotica tale

[Anonymous No.12575515]

>Amaranth
For serious bro?

[Anonymous No.12575597]

>>12573893
I feel like I'm reading an erotic Goosebumps book, with some big boy words thrown in for some reason.

[Anonymous No.12575811]

>>12575409
OH NO NO NO NO

[Anonymous No.12575858]

>>12575409
Jesus christ the Dunning Kruger effect is strong


>>12573893
OP, you're retarded. Read some more, and maybe learn some elementary school grammar before you even attempt writing anything.

[Anonymous No.12575865]

>>12573893
Who the fuck reads erotica?

Give me one book that will definitely give me a raging boner

[Anonymous No.12575869]

>>12573991
people use literotica?

[Anonymous No.12575888]

>>12575858
You're the one who needs to work on reading comprehension.

[Anonymous No.12576706]

>>12573893
>For the sake of sticking to the title of "self publisher," she does everything by herself
>Book cover illustrated by Danielle Romy.

You think you're some epic b8master, don't you?

[Anonymous No.12577274]

>>12573893
>Drool Ghoul
heh