Can I get some input on this? It's chapter 1 https://pastebin.com/zA4JYgC3 Braun and the Burning Blade Young Adult Fantasy novel

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Anonymous Sun Feb 10 14:50:57 2019 No.12572910 [Reply] [Original]

Can I get some input on this? It's chapter 1

https://pastebin.com/zA4JYgC3

Braun and the Burning Blade
Young Adult Fantasy novel

>>	Anonymous Sun Feb 10 16:33:22 2019 No.12573544 Quite bland and generic story. Below mediocre writing. Though that kind of story is rarely anything higher than mediocre anyway so do't beat yourself up about it.

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