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Anonymous Wed Dec 19 19:52:54 2018 No.12254202 [Reply] [Original]

What do you guys think of my writing?

https://pastebin.com/nuFcuYwQ

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 19:56:02 2018 No.12254214 File: 1002 KB, 250x251, We Just Don't Know.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12254202

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 19:58:51 2018 No.12254223 i suggest writing something that doesn't make me lose track of what you're trying say in under four sentences. i'm looking through this and it just looks like a lot of bs

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 22:09:59 2018 No.12254907 >>12254214 ?

CUNT Wed Dec 19 22:15:51 2018 No.12254938

As I was reading it, as my eyes passed from sentence and sentence, as it glazed across the punctuation marks, I was thinking to myself, although also, in truth, uttering some remarks aloud, and with aforementioned reading, thinking and uttering completed, I pondered, meditated and cogitated, but, and here, I believe, is the rub, as it were, and it is that the reading, thinking, uttering, pondering, meditating and cogitating weren't enough, so only in excreting did I find actual cogency.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 22:48:31 2018 No.12255125 >>12254938 cunt

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 22:52:13 2018 No.12255150 Youre trying to hard man. relax

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 22:54:36 2018 No.12255157 File: 73 KB, 840x348, DFE4CBF0-3A60-4FAB-BEF8-1AA295C6CB31.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12254202 >https://pastebin.com/nuFcuYwQ this is u

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 19 23:33:01 2018 No.12255359 >>12255157 i dont get it

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 00:00:29 2018 No.12255482 >>12255157 Ergo congito thread/

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 00:08:28 2018 No.12255509 In short, type less, say more. That intro run on is particularly painful, I feel like I’m listening to a suttering little kid try and explain his day to me. Also there’s no need to keep repeating venders name, we get it. Pronouns exist for a reason.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 00:13:26 2018 No.12255527 >>12254938 Kek'ed

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 03:58:48 2018 No.12256343 just a shit dfw clone with no personality

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 04:25:14 2018 No.12256401 >>12254202 >https://pastebin.com/nuFcuYwQ You're a try-hard. Stop jerking yourself off and write something meaningful.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 04:39:51 2018 No.12256448 >>12254202 I kek'd. Good job!

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 11:00:32 2018 No.12257405 >>12256343 >>12256401 >>12256448 fuck u all

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 11:07:03 2018 No.12257431 too much faff condense it

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 13:51:50 2018 No.12258064 Unreadable.

>>	Anonymous Thu Dec 20 14:32:43 2018 No.12258211 Next time just post in the crit thread

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