/lit/ any advice on how to slow pacing down? I thought I'd give writing a shot to try and improve myself, but I can't slow my characters down? Even when I'm writing about the scenery or the character's thoughts it feels like I have the nitro on.

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Anonymous Tue Oct 30 22:07:46 2018 No.12012401 [Reply] [Original]

/lit/ any advice on how to slow pacing down? I thought I'd give writing a shot to try and improve myself, but I can't slow my characters down? Even when I'm writing about the scenery or the character's thoughts it feels like I have the nitro on.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 30 22:10:36 2018 No.12012409 Think really deliberately about the details. What can you do to make it more vivid? What can you take out? And also use the lulls to build suspense.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 30 22:29:59 2018 No.12012462 >>12012401 A man learns that his husband has cancer. Go

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 30 22:41:27 2018 No.12012501 >>12012462 No fag shit

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 30 22:42:53 2018 No.12012503 >>12012501 A woman learns that her wife has cancer. Go

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