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[Anonymous No.11669410]

Write a fight sequence

[Anonymous No.11669420]

>>11669410
Stab.
Punch.
Oof.
Ded.

[Anonymous No.11669437]

1963. Music by The Duprees is on the radio as he drives down the road, passing occasional farms and ignoring the mild smell of cow shit. His eyes move from map, back at the second left in the road after the last crossroads. He pulls over. and turns off the car.

The cross and dogtags hanging from the rear mirror shake as he slams his trunk and walks past the driver's door; vest on and shortbarrel shotgun - held by the barrel - in his hand.
Walking faster, harder. Jogging. Sprinting to a watertank on the other side of the road to the Greggory Farm. 8 men spotted, 3 women, approx. 5 more people assumed. He moves to the left flank of the farm.

He takes out his knife as he fast and quietly approaches the truck where 1 male is fucking on top of what is assumed to be one of the females. Placing the shotgun on the dirt, he saddles along the open window where their heads are; reaches the unknifed hand to where he figures with woman's mouth is, grabs once he feels her face. Then, with his knife hand, he immediately gives a hard swipe at the the male's throat.
He puts his head in the truck to see the woman as he stabs in quick succession: One - in her throat, miss. Two - again in the throat, he feels the spine crunch. Three - up her jaw and into her brain. He quickly opens the door and, as the male is realizing what is happening, he grabs him before the male can think to go for his gun. After a few moments of tight embrace the male is gone.

[Anonymous No.11669553]

>>11669420
Oh

[Anonymous No.11669558]

>>11669553
Ah.

[Anonymous No.11669570]

>>11669558
i wanna knoo-oooow if you'll be my girl

[Anonymous No.11670995]

Don't die

[Anonymous No.11671651]

>>11669410
Why was the previous thread with the pretty ladies deleted and why isnt it in the archive

[Anonymous No.11671661]

Come at me,Bro.
What are you going to do? Stab me?
*Stabs him* and accidentally kills his wife, too

[Anonymous No.11671666]

>>11669558
POW

[Anonymous No.11671764]

You guys are fags for not even trying

>>11671651
Well I could've deleted it. I didn't though, it was removed by mods / janitors and I was warned (a step above being banned, which was nice; I was banned for that same pic before). If the thread was better quality, mods / janitors may have allowed it to pass through.

[Anonymous No.11671921]

Lemme at em lemme at em
I'll rooock em and I'll soooock em
WAAAAMO

[Anonymous No.11671951]

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[Anonymous No.11671991]

all genre fiction is garbage for literal mentally handicapped manchildren. cervantes called it out a long long time ago

[Anonymous No.11672016]

[Anonymous No.11672038]

>>11669437
I lay there for a while; sitting on the woman's bare tits and leaning on the man's back.
Moving one arm, I move the rear mirror to my face and brush my fingers across the woman's neck. '6 6 6' I paint on my forehead.
I realize this is backwards as I pick up my shotgun outside the truck and run low to a nearby garage.

A lone man with his back turned. I hear music and commotion. Whether or not others would hear is a gamble. I take it.
In a few short steps he is overtaken. I wrap my legs on his waist and arm around his neck. He collapses immediately; laying forward on his knees. My grip is slipping and his rifle is standing on a wall nearby. These are facts of which we are both aware.
In a single motion I release his neck and push off from his back, landing in between him and his gun. I lay on my back, allowing him time to move for his gun. My hand clasps his shin as he runs passed; I'm in a crouch by the time he hits the floor. Again, I'm upon him. My arm wraps around his neck and I squeeze. My back arches and he goes limp. Moments later I feel the snap.
Heard a true story about a guy snapping someone's neck from a rear naked in a prison documentary

[Anonymous No.11672151]

>>11671991
This vibe is severely killing my mood. The first story was better before I edited it from the other thread and BOTH ARE FUCKING SHIT because of your buzzkill. Zero energy for writing ITT

The fact is though you're low t, low iq, and extremely narrow minded. A tiny visceral fight sequence can make outsized echos in an otherwise non-or-little-action narrative. Mccarthy does it well. Victarion's sequences were unusually action packed in game of thrones and he was one of the best characters for it.

[Anonymous No.11672831]

>>11669420
>stab
>punch

[Anonymous No.11672835]

*unsheathes katana*

[Anonymous No.11672839]

*unzips dick*