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How do you write good smut?

>> No.11638567

Asuka > cake

>> No.11638575

>>11638561
>hand is the same size as her pelvis
>neck is one head long
>purple hair
disgusting, desu.

writing requires imagination. stop being a brainlet and write what it feels like to have sex. particularly good sex. oh, wait...

>> No.11638583

>>11638575
You just implied OP has never had sex nor particularly good sex. Ebin.

>oh wait...
Ebin. Just ebin. The implication. The derision. The originality. I shall never wish to cross wits with you. Two shay

>> No.11638594

>11638583
thanks for the (You)

>> No.11638595

>>11638561
Start off with some misato fanfics

>> No.11638617

>>11638561
Emotions mixed with actions. If you're just going for IKEA erotica ("Insert rod A into hole B") in various detail, then forget it. You have to let the emotions set the beat/pace as well as the actions that occur.

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11638695

Don't assume vanilla ass wal mart furniture is the only thing sold at ikea.

>> No.11638730

Whatever sorts of smut you write, if it's going to be good it's got to something you yourself get off to. If you're writing about some subject or fetish that you don't actually find arousing, it's going to fall flat because the passion, the arousal, won't be there.

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>>11638730
Not really, Shintaro Kago, Japan's most famous guro artist, has stated multiple times he doesn't get off on any of his art. If you're a skilled writer and can make it interesting it will probably sell to guro fans

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>>11638561
read Gravity's Rainbow and find out

>> No.11639062

>>11639024
I find it hard to take the words of someone who draws such violent images seriously

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>>11639062
I think he's telling the truth, there's a lot of his stuff that's not really sexual; he likes to fuck with the reader's perceptions in his work rather than to make masturbating material

>> No.11639119

>>11638561
You need to live it first. No one wants to read smut written by a virgin incel who's never nibbled on a titty.

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>>11638561
The same way you write good anything else.
>compelling characters
>a source of conflict
>tension that rises and falls
>subtle but clear theme
>happy ending(s) (literally, but also euphemistically)
>mommy

>> No.11639147

>>11638561

I just do the same thing I do in my normal writing: massive, tedious infodump filled with exacting details in a mixed technical and philosophical style intelligible to nobody.

>> No.11639411

>>11639024
There's a difference between writing and visual arts.