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>Can only write poetry in AABB rhyme scheme
Why am I such a piece of human garbage?

>> No.11186732

>>11186656
Flip the internal lines :o then you get ABAB! \o/

>> No.11186741

>>11186732
I wanted to say that was a faggoty suggestion but it did actually make my shitty poetry sound less rap-y

>> No.11186752

>>11186656
https://youtu.be/6VrZE8MCnIA

Try listening and reading poetry that doesn't follow an obvious rhyme, and I bet you'll start getting better.

>> No.11186758
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11186758

>can only write poetry in ABCDEFAF rhyme scheme

>> No.11186760

>>11186656
Come be garbage with me, we can rhyme with ABBA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZtuyzSVx6c

>> No.11186806

>>11186752
that was really good

>> No.11186808

And so the OP sought to rhyme against the wooden grain,
That's not in pairs of rhyming verse which tend to the sound the same,
But fool he was because he thought that rhyme came clearly first
Instead of meter, sound, symbolic meaning in a verse.
Not seeing the utility of paired-together schemes,
He posted on a forum to express a limpid dream
To come across a form to make him feel like garbage less
But found instead these anons who just couldn't give a shit,
Who threw their fingers back and forth as they began to wag
And scream into their monitors that OP is a fag.

>> No.11186839

>>11186656
Good news for you grandpa, poetry doesn't need to rhyme anymore

>> No.11186851

>>11186808
that was really good

>> No.11186858

>>11186851
it started off good

>> No.11187731

cmon now, i doubt you can even do that right

>> No.11187801

>can only write poetry in FJTIZOCFHBMZRD rhyme scheme

>> No.11187850

>writing rhyming poetry
Brainlet

>> No.11187870

>>11186752
>relying upon assonance and a cloying tone of voice to make you sound "poetic"
I appreciate 'slam poetry' is trying to make poetry into a popular form again, but why is it so shit?

>> No.11188095

>>11186656
It's no biggie, now you just take the second A and the first B and switch them around.

>> No.11188110
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11188110

free verse is where it's at.

>> No.11188115

>>11186760
Slick move, anon. If you were a gril I'd be inclined to love (you) immediately, no questions asked, no skypes or pics exchanged, no visits even- and I do mean to love (you) 4ever. But alas. No femanon is that playfully clever..
Oh, well! Back to writing and certain world fame!