My first 'poem' ever

[Anonymous No.11036705]

Cringy, but made me feel better.

>"Depression"
every day wasted here;
in my cold room, observing passively.

I like to wander, in my head.
Portrait myself as my better-self.
To explore.
Local city, my country, the World.
To live in love with mankind, however different we would be.
To support each other, to care for each other.
Sadly, that utopian view is not achievable in real world. I guess that what friends should be for.
I desire altruistic friends.
But what I need to stop my headache is little motivation.
Another human being.
Fragile. Imperfect. Open-minded. Someone as inexperienced as me. Hungry for self-advancement. Needing motivation.
I feel awkward by my own.
Dream and hope are my fuel, that I hope to get rid of, one day, in exchange for healthier alternative.
But for now, I just observe.

passively, in my cold room;
wasting every day.

[Anonymous No.11036728]

>>11036705
It is cringy, but that's ok. Keep writing, keep reading. It's the best way to improve your craft.

[Anonymous No.11036762]

>>11036705
Pretty good anon! Keep at it :)

Here's my first

>"Auto-fellatio"
wanna suck my own dick, uh
how do I do it?
lower back pain, man
gotta work through it

wanna taste my own balls, uh
how do I do it?
wrinkle skinned dream, man
get that sack - move it!

wanna taste my own cum
how do I do it?
milk white nectar, man
the load - I blew it

thoughts?