Thoughts on my story?

[Anonymous No.10948195]

It's about this guy who has a pitbull, but one day his girlfriend has some family problems (both of themare very ghetto) and she has to move in with him. Only problem is the dog suddenly starts to act vicious towards her, tothe point of actually attacking her if he's not around. They go through some real shit to find a solution, almost break up, but ended up finding a crazy dog trainer who manages to tame the beast. Now the girl is friends with the dog and they are all happy and shit, but slowly the dog starts changing his loyalty, preferring her to him. Little by little it's like it becomes her dog, and he doesn't like it and this gets in the way of the relationship. But then the girl starts developing some weird ass intimacy bond with the dog, some obscure spirit animal shit,and it's implied though never explicited that the boyfriend catches her having nasty bestiality sex with the dog. Girl disappears,police all over boyfriend like obvious culprit, but no body no proof no weapon of crime. In the end he confesses to the dog trainer that he killed the girl and the dog is the only witness.
The end.

[Anonymous No.10948199]

>>10948195
wut

[Anonymous No.10948202]

>>10948195
D A L E
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[Anonymous No.10948203]

That's a summary, not a story. Try writing it and get back to us.

[Anonymous No.10948211]

>>10948203
I have written it, do you want the full thing?

[Anonymous No.10948217]

>>10948195
Unironically very promising, if you do it right.

[Anonymous No.10948219]

>>10948211
yes
i bet its shit

[Anonymous No.10948261]

>>10948195
YPU FUCKIN ASSHOLE STOLEY FUCKIN STORY
LISTEM HERE YOU FAT OAF
YOU FUCKER
MANI WANT TO STRANGLE YOU WITH MY ETHERNET CABLE YPU FUCKIN PIECE OF SHIT

[Anonymous No.10948271]

I think I'm calmer now. So here's the spelling version:
This robber of acute vulgarity had the nerve, the audacity, of stealing my story I posted on r9k's creativity thread not 20 minutes ago. He couldn't even wait the corpse to cool down. No,no, mister "I steal stories from others on the internet". You had to defile my originality. Profanity! Sacrilege! Crime!
If you fucking dare to take my story any further from mere meaningless shitposting, I will ficking end you.
Let me remind you I have already wrote this story. I have already showed it to several friends and posted about on other internet refuges I visit. I have ways to prove my authorship.
Repent, beast! Repent and I might not curse you!

[Anonymous No.10948292]

>>10948271
>>10948261
Undeniable PROOF of my WORDS:
>>>/r9k/44399263
The name of the novel is "The Barking dog". Not sure if I should drop the the, though.

[Anonymous No.10948295]

>>10948271
>Posting work of possible monetary value on the internet
Classic blunder my friend.

[Anonymous No.10948307]

>>10948295
> Monetary value
Nigga it's a story about a girl who fucks her boyfriend's pitbull

[Anonymous No.10948315]

>>10948307
Welcome to Earth. Please leave your sanity at the door

[Anonymous No.10948339]

>>10948307
This is one of Canada's most beloved classics.
And yes, she does.

[Anonymous No.10948528]

>>10948195
Seems like it would be hard to suspend disbelief.
Could always go towards some intentionally unbelievable horror like human centipede or sharknado

[Anonymous No.10948531]

>>10948528
you sound boring

[Anonymous No.10948539]

>>10948195
I like it but I wouldn't read more than 200 pages of this

[Anonymous No.10948540]

>>10948531
Wew you got me there anon epic kek

[Anonymous No.10948542]

Sounds like it'd be one of the paraphrased troubled college student stories in BotS.

[Anonymous No.10948550]

>>10948195
actually sounds like an intriguing story.