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Post your work/writing, let other anons critique it.

>> No.10886419

>>10886408
i'd critique that pretty little mouth with my ******

>> No.10886430

>>10886419
Armpit

>> No.10886431
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10886431

Critique this.

>> No.10886441

>>10886419
Carmex

>> No.10886455
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>>10886408

>You will never be the person reflecting on the surface of these honeyed eyes, purer than the ideal purity of the Elysian Fields, and personally face the unfathomable beauty of that astoundingly sincere and humorous smile, while you vainly pursue to preserve such frame in eternity with cold machinery precision. Alas, that person, who you will never be, has failed the endeavor and now you are condemned to dream upon a mere representation of what was the most sublime moment.

>> No.10886475

>>10886455
you can see her hands holding her phone reflected in her irises
she sees herself reflected back upon herself, infinitely

>> No.10886484

>Freckles
>Pasty white skin
>Light colored eyes
Disgusting

>> No.10886487

>>10886484
Go away faggot niggerlover.

>> No.10886490

>>10886408
Please stop posting women OP. It makes me and a lot of other people on this board really sad and uncomfortable.

>> No.10886493

>>10886490
true

>> No.10886500

>>10886490

I agree with that and in agreeing it makes me even more uncomfortable. Are we herbivore men or something?

>> No.10886502

>>10886500
we are truthsayers.

>> No.10886506

there is already a critique thread